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Tum kaise mohabbat karte ho? Update pg.7 (Page 3)

iloveroses95 Goldie

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Posted: 21 December 2006 at 5:28am | IP Logged
I only got one reply Cry

Recap:Kashish had a dream about the time Sujal kicked her out of the house, she is also married to Piyush

Kashish and the twins go to a doctor's Check-up.

K:Hello, i have an appointment for my children and myself with Dr.Singh.

R:Yes, Mrs.Kashish Raheja, he is in a operation theatre right now, please sit down until he comes.

K:thank You

Sujal just happens to be there and looks at Kashish when he hears the name 'Kashish Raheja'

Vikram:Mumma, i want candy!

Gayatri:Me too mumma!

K:Ok, go and get some,its down the hall ok?

Then She stands up and points there.When the kids go,Sujal walks upto her a pulls her close


Kashish is shocked to see Sujal(Sujal didnt notice the kids lol)
S:U have no idea how much i've missed u Kashish, after u left i wouldnt eat anything at all and i locked my self in my room all day.


S:but now that u r back, evryone will be happy to see you.Mama,Dad,Rishi,Mehek evryone!

K:Mr.Garewal,in case u havn't noticed im married

Before Sujal could ask to whom, Vakram came screaming "MUMMA!!!"

K:Vikram, what happened and why r u crying?

Vikram:Mumma, Di wont buy me Kinder Surprise!She only bought herself some chocolate!

Kashish looks at Sujal and says"Vikram,Tell Gayatri that Mumma is telling her to buy u chocolate ok?

Vikram:Ok. and he leaves

S:Thats my kid....Gayatri and Vikram are my kids, right Kashish?

K:Yes, they r ure kids, but u have no right to call them ure kids.U werent even there when they were born!

S:Because u left the house!

K:And who told me to?Who screamed at me and told me to get out of their life?Who said that my love was all a lie?U Mr.Garewal u!

Just then her phone rang.

P:Hello Darling!How r u, u no i was feeling very bored, so i decided to call u!Oh did u get the doctor reports yet?

K:no we have come to the hospital to get them.

P:ok call me when u get them okay?

K:ok bye


S:Who was that?

K:My husband,Mr.Garewal u please stay away from my family, maybe u shuld stay away from me mostly because im Manhoose(srry i dont no how to spell it) rememeber?
and she walks off.

Recept:Mrs.Raheja, Dr.Singh will c u and ure children now

K:Thank You. and she and the twins go into the doctors office.


Doctor:Congratulations Mrs.Raheja, you are pregnant!

And Sujal hears all this!!!

to be continued

gauhar Senior Member

Joined: 26 October 2006
Posts: 222

Posted: 21 December 2006 at 12:27pm | IP Logged
great!loved the story line keep it up.
iloveroses95 Goldie

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Posts: 1467

Posted: 21 December 2006 at 1:04pm | IP Logged
I only got one reply!!!! Cry

Recap:Sujal sees kashish and kashish tells him that she is already married, Sujal finds out that Kashish is pregnant.

Sujal drives home all depressed
I]Kashish:Mr.Garewal, in case u havnt noticed im already married!

Veena:Sujal, how did ure interview with Mr.Roshan go?

Sujal:Huh?Oh, he was sick so he couldnt make it.

Veena:Sujal whats wrong?

Sujal:Mama, i met Kashish today.

Then he tell her everything.BUT he forgets about the twins (again lol)

Veena:So why didn't u bring her bak home?

Sujal:Mama, she is already married!


Sujal:I just told u didnt I?

Veena:Oops sorry, i forgot.

Sujal:But mama, who culd have Kashish gotten married to?

To be continued.....

Sorry 4 the short update, but its 12 am here in the UAE!So i have to go to sleep

HhAaNnAa IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 21 December 2006 at 1:09pm | IP Logged
wow its awesoem Clap continue soon the kids are so sweet Embarrassed
Ruhee_95 Senior Member

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Posted: 21 December 2006 at 1:51pm | IP Logged
Clap Clap
gauhar Senior Member

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Posted: 21 December 2006 at 2:41pm | IP Logged
waiting for part 6 hurry back and write some more please
iloveroses95 Goldie

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Posted: 21 December 2006 at 11:06pm | IP Logged
Hey guyz, im bak :).Here is ure update!!!!!

Recap:Sujal tells Veena everything about Kashish.
                Part 6

Sujal:Mama, i have an idea of how we can find out who Kashish is married to!


Sujal:If it works Mama, then i'll tell u.

Veena:Sujal, what if Kashish doesnt want to come to this house again?i mean, we gave her so much pain in this house!

Sujal:No Mama, she'll have to come.

(the scene moves to Kashish)

Kashish is reading a book, but isnt really reading.She is thinking about when she met Sujal today.
Sujal:Kashish, u have no idea how i've missed u!

Vikram(i luv this kid):Mumma!!!!!!Gayatri Di is chasing me with MY fake sword!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kashish:Uff!Tum Dono bhi na!Gayatri!

Gayatri(peeking from behind the door):Yes Mumma?

Kashish:Come here (and she starts tickling Gayatri!)

Gayatri:MUmma Stop Stop!!!!!VIKRam HELP ME!!!!!!

Vikram:No WAY!!!u deserve it.Now im going to laugh at u!HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The door bell rang(Ding Dong!)

Kashish:I'll get it!

Kashish openes the door
Kashish:Piyush!!!Now what excuse do u have from coming home from work early?

Piyush:The usual, missing ure food, missing u and the twins u no!

Kashish:Was that supposed to be a joke?

Piyush:Ya so?

Kashish:I dont like jokes!

Piyush(trying to remember the line):uhh....oh..I dont like you!!!!

Kashish:Okay, u no u've always said that the twins shuld have another brother or sister?

Piyush:Ya so?(hes kinda slow here lol)

Kashish:Well they will only have to wait another 8 months for him/her!

Piyush:URE JOKING!!!!NO WAY!!!!Ok,ok, I have good news for u 2.We got the contract from Mr.Roshan!!!!!

Kashish:That is really good, i have an idea, lets have a party that we got the contract ok?

Piyush:U read my mind!!Should we invite everyone?

Kashish:Not evryone, but like business ppl.

Piyush:ookay Dookay!

(scene moves to Sujal)

Sujal:Hi can u please tell me something?(btw hes at the hospital again)


Sujal:Can u tell me who Kashish Raheja is married to?

Recept:Kashish Raheja....Yes sir, She is married to a Mr.Piyush Raheja!

Sujal:What!Piyush is alive????

To Be continued....

I think its a pretty long update lol
Please tell me if i should continue!!!!
gauhar Senior Member

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Posts: 222

Posted: 22 December 2006 at 3:00am | IP Logged
please do i think your doing a good job

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