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Tum kaise mohabbat karte ho? Update pg.7 (Page 2)

rajeevzluvr IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 20 December 2006 at 9:09am | IP Logged
wow gr8 update Tongue

gauhar Senior Member

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Posted: 20 December 2006 at 9:56am | IP Logged
great,keep it up + thanks
iloveroses95 Goldie

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Posted: 20 December 2006 at 11:09am | IP Logged
Aww thanks guyz (oh and Flygirls ive been meaning to ask u, is Maine Dil Tujhko Diya finished?Ihope not)
Ill update tomorrow as soon as possible
iloveroses95 Goldie

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Posted: 20 December 2006 at 11:35am | IP Logged
Hey guyz, i no i said ill update tomorrow but i was bored so heres the update!

Recap:Sujal finds out that Kashish is pregnant but cant find her anywhere.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~5 years later~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Woman:Sujal! Hurry up or you'll be late for work!

Sujal:Im coming mama don't worry!
We see a man walking into the dining room AND its none other than our darling Rajeev or Sujal Garewal!!

Sujal:Mama, u no im usually late for work, so why the hurry?

Veena:Forgot didn't u?Today is your meeting with Mr.Roshan!

Sujal:Dammit!i totally forgot about that, thanks mama

Veena: no prob now goo ull b late!
And Sujal leaves

On the way to his office, his sees a boy and a girl playing in the field with a ball.Sujal gets out of the car and walks upto them.

Sujal:Does your mom know that u 2 r out here all by ureselves?

Girl:Yeah, we always play here, and besides we always tell her before coming here!

Sujal:R u 2 twins?

Boy:Yup but my Di is 5 mins older than me and i still have to call her Di, its not fair!

Sujal:What r ure names?

Girl:My name is Gayatri and this is my annoying brother Vikram
Sujal:What is your moms name?

Gayatri:Our mumma's name is....

Other girl:Gayatri!Vikram, your mom is calling u to have lunch!
Vikram:Oh man we have to go, mumma hates it when we r late
and they run off
(oh and just so u no the kids parents rnt poor, they r rich ok?)
Sorry i put alot of the kids wit sujal, but i think i made it a little obvious whose kids these r!
i have to go Bye but ill update either tomorrow or later!
HhAaNnAa IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 20 December 2006 at 11:44am | IP Logged
great continue soon Clap
Gujji_babe Goldie

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Posted: 20 December 2006 at 1:52pm | IP Logged
G8 story!!! plz continue
iloveroses95 Goldie

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Posted: 21 December 2006 at 1:03am | IP Logged
Hey guyz im back, and this update im gonna make a little longer.

Recap:Sujal is walking again, and he meets 2 kids on the way to the office.
kd=kids m=mom

and they run up and hug her (btw u can see the moms face)

M:u guyz came that fast?i thought you guyz werent hungry when i asked u guyz if u wanted breakfast!

Gayatri:Mumma, we are really really sorry and really really hungry!

Vikram:Ya mumma!

M:Ok come and eat.

In the middle of eating, the doorbell rang

M:Uff! Who could that be?Ramu Kaka!Could u open the door?

P:kashish!(now u can see her face)

K:Arey!Piyush, u were supposed to come tomorrow night!So wat r u doing here?

P:the usual, got homesick, was missing ure homemade food, and was missing the kids u no

K:Ok ok i get it, now come and u can have my homemade food once again!

P:yah!!come u 2 little devils!

Then they eat and evrything

K:Come on u uyz, u have to take ure nap!

Kds:No Way mumma, We r not sleepy!!!!!!

K:Help plz Piyush!

P:Kids, listen to ure mom

K:thanks a lot!
After a lot of chasing and running around, they twins finally go to sleep and Kashish is tired.She decides totake a nap as well cuz she is so tired.
*dreamworld*(lol i luv those words)
Kashish:I have just one question sujal, if u were in my place wat would u do?
Sujal:I would have left u a long time ago
*Back To Reality*

Piyush was reading the newspaper and he runs to kashish

P:wats wrong Kashish, r u hurt

K(breathing hard):No,im fine, i jst had a bad dream thats all
and she goes back to sleep
To Be continued

Sorry guyz i have to go, but ill update soon!
HhAaNnAa IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 21 December 2006 at 1:10am | IP Logged
great part continue soon Clap

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