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Hook Ups/part 5-kiss,fire,&&secret (Page 6)

berkeleygirl818 IF-Dazzler

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gr8 part!!!!! Clap

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wowo... i love this... heheh.. .plz continue sooon...
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Very Cute Clap
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awsome and so cute LOL
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Originally posted by armaghan0

awsome and so cute LOL

thanks... im writing the part now

mpatel97508 IF-Dazzler

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part 4


they end up inside and a slow song is playing.  Everyone is dancing except them. Just when angad was about to ask kripa, a guy comes up to her and asks her.

g-may a have the pleasure of dancing with you? (hand out)

k(puts her hand in his)-sure…


they both go to the dance floor and start dancing. (not close) angad looks at the two and gets mad.  He asks another girl to dance and she of course says yes without any hesitation.  Angad close dances with her so whenever kripa looks, he knows she will be hurt inside.  Kripa just closes her eyes and tries to ignore him.  Soon the guy starts to pull her closer.  Kripa gets uncomfortable.  Angad doesn't notice.


k-kya karahen hon?

g-kuch nahin… maza kar raha hon…

k-chodo mujhe

g-nahin chodo to?


He sees the chance cuz there are a lot off ppl and takes her to a hall.  When the crowd disappers, angad looks around and is shocked to see no sign off kripa.  He looks everywhere but she is nowhere in sight.  He excuses himself from the girl.

a-vo mein aya…


He looks around places.  He checks outside but doesn't see her. 

a(thinking)-where is she? Omg if anything happens to her I wont forgive myself.


Angad looks around some more and hears a scream. 

a(thinking)-ye to kripa ka awas hai

he follows the sound of the voice and sees the guy trying to misbehave with kripa.  He starts fuming up.  He walks up to him and pushes him into the wall.  Kripa is shocked to see angad&&is also happy.  Angad starts beating the guy up.  Kripa notices what he is doing&&tries to stop him. 

K(pulling on his arm)-stop it angad…

A(looks at kripa)-no kripa… he tried to misbehave with you… I wont leave him!

Kripa is shocked and watches the whole fight... (it was mostly all angad) and soon she looses it and screams for angad to stop.  Angad looks at her and stops.  Angad goes close to her and looks at her eyes.

k-kya kar rahe the?

a-usne tumhare saath-

k-to kya? Tumse kya matlab? Tum apne girlfriend ke saath joa… I don't need you!
a(mad&&holding her shoulders)-mein tumhari laye parishan ho raha tha aur tum mujse is tareke se baath karti hon?

kripa is scared and tears start to form in her eyes.  Angad stares at her innocent face and eyes.  He lightly brushes his lips on hers.


Coming up-kiss!

candyprincess IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 January 2007 at 5:07pm | IP Logged
great part woowowow kiss Embarrassed LOL

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