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great part!!!! Clap

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great part mauli continue soon Tongue

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just saw u wrote a part luved it it was awesome pls cont soon cant wait for da prom Tongue

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whoa, ok i love all their dresses except Kripas why is she so traditional and could she not have worn something more O.T.T, like a heavy lengha? Wink

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gr8, amazing, fantastic part
i really loved it
plz continue soon

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Originally posted by yasmin20589

whoa, ok i love all their dresses except Kripas why is she so traditional and could she not have worn something more O.T.T, like a heavy lengha? Wink

thanks...LOLlol sry... i guess she only wears that to traditional partiesLOL

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Originally posted by sweetiepie_05

hey i luv this fanfic...but just 1 thing...can u make the parts longer...please?its quicker and easier to understand then...
Hope u dont mind.. Confused
anyways..i luv ur fanfic!

hmm that all depends on the time i have... some will be long and some short.. but im glad you like my fanfic!

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part 3

 

they all met up at the party… mishty-prithvi + aaliyah-josh are dancing together….kripa and angad were looking at there successful plans of being cupids and getting their friends together….soham was staring at kripa watching josh and aaliyah dance

 

s(sticks hand out in front of kripa)-may I dance with the most beautiful lady tonight?

k(smiles and puts her hand in his)-of course

 

kripa and soham go to the dance floor and a while later, so do angad and anjali…somewhere deep inside angad didn't like kripa being around soham…but he realized he was lying to himself and really didn't care about who the hell kripa was with…Angel of Mine started playing kripas arm were around sohams neck and his hand around kripas waist with one holding her hand… like wise with angad and anjali

 

When I first saw you I already knew
There was something inside of you
Something I thought that I would never find
Angel of mine

I look at you, lookin' at me
Now I know why they say the best things are free
I'm gonna love you boy you are so fine
Angel of Mine

How you changed my world you'll never know
I'm different now, you helped me grow
You came into my life sent from above
When I lost all hope you showed me love
I'm checkin' for ya boy you're right on time
Angel of Mine

Nothing means more to me than what we share
No one in this whole world can ever compare
Last night the way you moved is still on my mind
Angel of Mine

What you mean to me you'll never know
Deep inside I need to show
You came into my life sent from above (Sent from above)
When I lost all hope, you showed me love (Boy you showed me love)
I'm checkin' for ya, boy you're right on time (Right on Time)
Angel of Mine (Angel of mine)

I never knew I could feel each moment
As if it were new,
Every breath that I take, the love that we make
I only share it with you (you, you, you, you)
When I first saw you I already knew
There was something inside of you
Something I thought that I would never find
Angel of Mine

You came into my life sent from above (Came into my life, yeah yeah yeah)
When I lost all hope you showed me love (Boy You showed me love, uh huh)
I'm checkin' for ya, boy you're right on time (But boy your right on time)
Angel of Mine (Angel of mine, oh mine)

How you changed my world you'll never know
I'm different now, you helped me grow

I look at you lookin' at me
Now I know why they say the best things are free
I'm checkin' for ya, boy you're right on time
Angel of Mine

 

when the song ended, kripa and soham left the dance floor and went outside to take a walk… like them, angad and anjali were also outside…

 

k-you know soham….you're a really nice guy

s-thanks kripa….you're nice too…and many more things too

k-you know that you're one of my best friends

 

they share a friendly hug…soham didn't 'like like' kripa… they were just friends and both knew that soham liked anjali…

 

an-its soo weird hai na…?I love soham but here I am with you b/c he is with kripa…

a-yeah… but I know he loves you too

an-you sure angad?

a-yeah I can see it in his eyes…

an-thanks angad you're a great friend

 

they also share a friendly hug….they walk some more and encounter kripa and soham….anjali and soham stare at each other….

 

a-kripa I think we should leave these two alone….

k-yeah I think so too..

a+k-good luck you too…

 

they leave and go inside leaving soham and anjali alone

 

s-anjali…I…I love you!

an(crys due to happiness)-I love you too

s(kneels down)-will you, anjali varma, be my girlfriend? (hand out)

an(wipes tears and holds his hand)-yes… yes I will

 

soham smiles and gets up… and they share a loving and warm hug… from behind a tree angad and kripa saw this and were really happy

 

a-another hook up successful

k-yeah they look so happy na?

a-yeah… all thanks to me..!

k(turns to him)-what do you mean… they're together only b/c on me…

a-kya bukwas kar rahi hon? This is all b/c of me and you know it

k-kripa

a-angad

k-kripa

a-angad

k(yelling)-kripa

a(calmly)-kripa…

k(yelling)-angad and that's final!

a-yeah I know I am the one responsible for this!

k-no no… mera yeh matlab nahin tha… I meant that… angad you didn't do it…. It was my idea… you didn't win (cute innocent face)

a(kisses her cheek not realizing)-sry kripa but is bar be mein jeeta hoon…

 

angad walks away

 

k(yells after him)-w/e mujhe koi fark nahin parta hain…

 

kripa follows him

 

next-more cute scenes

hope you liked it.. ill continue when i have time 2...

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