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mpatel97508

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Posted: 25 December 2006 at 8:42am | IP Logged
i get a feeling no one is waiting for the next part....

more comments-quicker i post the part
less comments-no part

think about it... Embarrassed

Mauli

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Posted: 25 December 2006 at 10:17am | IP Logged

Originally posted by .:KYPHlOvEr88:.

i get a feeling no one is waiting for the next part....

more comments-quicker i post the part
less comments-no part

think about it... Embarrassed

Mauli

sos but ur thinking wrong i cant wait pls cont soon and i luved the part it was awesome aww ak r so cuteTongue

brainychild92

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Posted: 25 December 2006 at 11:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by .:KYPHlOvEr88:.

i get a feeling no one is waiting for the next part....

more comments-quicker i post the part
less comments-no part

think about it... Embarrassed

Mauli

u cant get anymore wrong.. liek u i have a bzy schedule so i couldnt check ur fanfic out.. but i do love it!!

continu sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooonnnnnn

mpatel97508

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Posted: 25 December 2006 at 9:26pm | IP Logged

this is only b/c i really like the third part... itz gonna be cute!!

part 2

 

kripas house-

 

the door rings and a girl goes to see who it is…she sees a guy wearing a black tuxedo

its none other than soham… he looks at kripa and smiles…kripa is wearing:

(like that but black and white not orange)

s-wow kripa… you look beautiful..!

k-thanks soham… you look nice too

j-whats going on here?

 

kripa turns around and sees josh wearing:

 

k-wow bhai…looking good (thumbs up) bhabi.. oops I mean aali ko impress karne ki koshish kar rahe ho?

j-kripa tum be na…

s-ok well josh… hum chalte hain…

j-ok.. bye

s+k-bye

 

as soham and kripa leave… josh decides to go too… he goes to aaliyahs house and rings the doorbell… angad comes to the door wearing:

 

a-hey josh…

j-wo..aaliyah..

a-wait.. (yells) aaliyah... hurry up.. your bf is here!

 

Josh blushes aaliyah comes down wearing:

joshes mouth drops open.. aaliyah blushes and angad leaves them alone.

 

j-aaliyah you look… beautiful!

aa(blushes)-thanks… you look nice too

j(hand out)-shall we leave?

aa(puts her hand in his)-of course

 

they leave and angad decides to go to pick up anju.

 

meanwhile-

prithvi is at misthys door wearing a nice black tuxedo

mishty comes out wearing:

prithvi was amazed

              

p-mishty your looking beautiful!

m(blushes)-thanks… you don't look too bad for yourself

 

they laugh and go to prithvis car

 

anjalis house-

angad rings the doorbell and anju opens the door wearing:

(like this but in black)

angads mouth drops open and anjali blushes.. he comes out of the trance

 

a-wow anju you look hot!

an(blushes)-thanks you look dashing!

a-of course.. I always do..

an(laughs)-true…

a-well letz go..

an-kk

next-prom!! (for sure)

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Posted: 26 December 2006 at 8:05am | IP Logged
Great Part

mpatel97508

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Posted: 26 December 2006 at 8:57am | IP Logged

Originally posted by issy

Great Part

thankzBig smile... but itz like your the only one who likes it....Cry

mauli

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Posted: 26 December 2006 at 4:59pm | IP Logged
amazing fanfic Smile great part Clap
are u going to get anjali and soham together in the prom just a thought
loved the way angad an kripa argue
cant wait 2 read the next part
Clap

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Posted: 28 December 2006 at 8:49pm | IP Logged
I cant wait for the next part, continue ASAP!! And that wasn't a request Wink

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