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Love So Pure- a poem on Shiva-Parvati

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Posted: 25 November 2017 at 8:15am | IP Logged
 

LOVE SO PURE

 

He watched as the Sun brightly shone,

Blazing across the white peaks,

His eyes twinkled at Nature's tone,

A playful game of hide and seek.

 

The presence of one so pure,

The smile of beauty bloom,

His very gaze was a cure,

Dispelling the loss of gloom.

 

His fluttering heart though, was no longer tethered,

From a single glance of her shy gaze,

Instead, it wildly fluttered,

Sending Him into Love's haze.

 

A soft smile formed His face,

Lighting the maiden's obvious charm,

A love that formed the base,

Protecting the world from all harm.

 

A love filled with devotion,

Eternity embedded in their hearts,

They set everything in motion,

Allowing Nature to take its course

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Posted: 25 November 2017 at 8:16am | IP Logged
Another poem from me!
My rhyme scheme is not great, but I am an amateur poet! Do leave your reviews :) 

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Posted: 25 November 2017 at 8:59am | IP Logged
Amazing, this is!! Day Dreaming
Will give a longer review later. Tongue

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Posted: 25 November 2017 at 1:21pm | IP Logged
I can feel the love so beautiful

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Posted: 25 November 2017 at 1:27pm | IP Logged
Beautiful Poem. Sru.
Write Another On
Shani Dev. Embarrassed

Edited by SilverBell - 25 November 2017 at 1:29pm

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Posted: 25 November 2017 at 4:08pm | IP Logged
This is really beautiful, Srutha! Your rhyming is superb, it doesn't sound like an amateur poem at all. I love your description of Mahadev and Ma Parvathi's love. Heart

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Posted: 25 November 2017 at 8:38pm | IP Logged
Mind blowing poem SruthaClap


Edited by Nonie12345 - 14 February 2018 at 12:30am

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This was so beautiful! Loved the simple approach in this! <3

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