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Posted: 13 November 2017 at 9:24am | IP Logged
Nice update.. 
Akshay as Aryan annaThumbs Up
Update the next part soon.. 

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Posted: 13 November 2017 at 2:41pm | IP Logged
I can like totally picture akshay in this. It is just perfectt!!
Bhi and Myra it is surely going to be interesting how these two birds turn into love birds. Soon!!
Myra oh I live her. But wait what does she awaut. CLIFFHANGER!!! Gahhh I wanna know. Hopefully she is safe.
I am very interested to know how Abhi might break the news to his anna about Myra's arrival into the house.
All in all a great update!!! Loved it a lot.
Keep Writing
Update soon!!

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Posted: 14 November 2017 at 3:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sonalisharma1

Nice update.. 
Akshay as Aryan annaThumbs Up
Update the next part soon.. 

thank you for reading and liking.. this is my first attempt and more of a usual drama but yes there would be more romantic scenes in upcoming updates.  as I have 2-3 ideas as how to take story forward...hopefully you will like it Big smile
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Posted: 14 November 2017 at 3:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shreyj7

I can like totally picture akshay in this. It is just perfectt!!
Bhi and Myra it is surely going to be interesting how these two birds turn into love birds. Soon!!
Myra oh I live her. But wait what does she awaut. CLIFFHANGER!!! Gahhh I wanna know. Hopefully she is safe.
I am very interested to know how Abhi might break the news to his anna about Myra's arrival into the house.
All in all a great update!!! Loved it a lot.
Keep Writing
Update soon!!

Yes Akshay suits this role and looks quite alot like Prabhas hence made me brother albeit not realLOL yes they are already in love just need to express it... 

I will update the chapter later today so you can read it ...hopefully it will be liked by you. Hug

Thats something I have yet to visualise but lets see..

Thank you for commenting... and yes most probably wil update today , otherwise i will lose interest..thanks again Big smile
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Posted: 14 November 2017 at 4:26am | IP Logged
Perfect face for aryan..
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Posted: 14 November 2017 at 5:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by elle..

Perfect face for aryan..

Thank you
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Posted: 14 November 2017 at 5:33am | IP Logged

Chapter 4:


Aryan and Abhi eating their dinner as being a weekday they prefer to have light food with less oil and were discussing how Abhi killed Ahmed.  When should I tell anna about Myra how long can I hide her in the house? He was eating his dinner halfheartedly but muster up his courage to tell Aryan about Myra, he looks up.. anna there was a girl...and notices Myra standing near him and Aryan looking at her shockingly. Aryan gets up pointing his gun towards Myra who are you and why are you here? And what are you doing in Abhi's shirt and looks at Abhi angrily.

 

Actually Abhi saved my life and brought me here, you must be Abhi's anna I saw your portrait in the living room, I have seen so many guns in a day which I haven't  seen in my life yet, so they don't scare me anymore.  I was lost in this house and was looking for a washroom.  Abhi was still speechless and didn't have a clue what to say.. Aryan puts his gun down.

"what's your name?" Aryan enquired kindly. "myra." came the ready reply. "Abhi,  show Myra washroom and back here. I need to speak with you. ALONE." Aryan motioned him to take myra away from there

"who is this girl brother? why is Abhi acting so strangely?" one of Aryan's handyman Sathya questioned him. "we'll soon find out . we will soon find out." Aryan petted the man's shoulder, gazing at myra's & abhi's retreating backs.


"did myra see you murdering ahmed?" was the first question Aryan asked Abhi the moment he got back. "yes. but..." Abhi was silenced by Aryan. "Abhi, why didn't you just kill her? if she rats you out to the police, you're dead. and I will die if I have to see you behind bars." Aryan remarked sadly. "no anna. you got myra wrong. she isn't the type to rat out on people. she is a really nice & sweet girl." Abhi told Aryan firmly. "how can you say that so firmly?  I just feel she is a good girl." Abhi replied back softly.

 


"she's got you under her spell man! let me go kill that bitch right now!" Sathya screamed furiously, by then Abhi had drawn his gun & was aiming it at Sathya's heart. "don't you even dare Sathya. if you even TOUCH myra, I'll rip your heart out & feed it to the dogs!" Abhi snarled. "stop it both of you." Aryan commanded, his voice booming over the argument. Abhi & Sathya immediately ceased arguing. Aryan didn't like to repeat things twice.


"Sathya, please leave us alone. go!" Aryan barked at Sathya. he left still glowering at Abhi. "Abhi, when did you take up arms against your own man for a woman?" Aryan asked Abhi, disappointment filling his voice. "anna please don't misunderstand me! I just.." Abhi faltered. "you're in love with that myra aren't you?" Aryan suddenly asked a surprised Abhi.


he looked shocked but didn't say anything. he couldn't lie to his anna neither could he admit to it. "if you really love her, then express it before someone snatches her away from you." Aryan coaxed Abhi gently. Abhi looked even more shocked but nodded. "I'm going to bed and will speak to you tomorrow good night ." Abhi left abruptly. Sathya had returned by then & was observing everything angrily.

 

 

"brother Aryan, Abhi is being distracted by that woman! why can't we finish her off?" he sounded reproachful. "Sathya my dear boy. Abhi is in love. love is blind. myra does look like a sweet girl & she still hasn't ratted us out to the police so why not we give Abhi a chance to find love?" Aryan smiled. Sathya knew that his boss was reminiscing about his old memories. after all, Aryan had once loved too. Sathya rolled his eyes & swore never to let a woman distract him, no matter how beautiful she might be and will kill Myra by hook or crook.

 

 PS: I will update pictures later. As it is not letting me do atm.

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Posted: 14 November 2017 at 8:26am | IP Logged
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I read the first couple of chapters as promised. You've written it amazingly and I could totally imagine the scenes unfolding before me. And I promise I will check out Mirchi tooHeart

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