New story: after the curfew night;chapter 1 on pg 7 - Page 5

Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by zynahsiddiqi956


congrats for me story.
intresting prologe..๐Ÿ‘
looking forward to read more.
cont soon buddy.

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Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by MerDyux


awesome story 
thanks๐Ÿ˜Š
Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by abha22


Awesome start
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Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by --Vrinda--


where is update??? ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
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Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by zynahsiddiqi956


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Posted: 6 years ago
Chapter 1
In the orphanage (co owned by Mohammads and  raichands)

Rahul(a 5 years old boy) and his team : bhaiya!!!!!catch

Shruti(a 5 years old girl standing with a bat in her hand): no bhaiya!!!!!!!!!please

And their darling bhaiya catch the ball

Rahul and team: yehhh!!!!! We won! we won! (Giving a flying kiss to his bhaiya) thank u bhaiya...love u

Shruti took off her cap, placed the bat on the ground and went inside

In the shruti's room

Bhaiya knock on the door: may I come in shruti baby?????

Shruti with her face buried in the pillow shouted: NO

He moved inside grabbed shruti from her shoulders and made her sat on His lap and patted her head softly: shruti is angry????

Shruti: VERY ANGRY!!!! I WILL NOT TALK TO U JALAL BHAIYA!!!!! U helped him...because of u...rahul win shruti lose...u don't love shruti

Jalal: who said so?????? I love shruti...shruti is my little princess na.

Shruti: but

Jalal: here listen...I was playing from their side...if a dropped your catch...it was cheating then...and they will call shruti and bhaiya cheaters...

Shruti was nodding continuously

Jalal: still angry

Shruti: no and gave him her toothy smile saying I love u bhaiya

Jalal: I love u too and kissed her head lightly

When he heard someone shouting

Rahul: THAT MEANS U DONT LOVE ME BHAIYA๐Ÿ˜ก

Shruti: NO HE DON'T

rahul: YOU

jalal: QUITE  and a sigh left from his mouth seeing little kids scared faces...he shifted shruti on His on lap and called rahul

Jalal to rahul: come here

Then grabbed rahul from his waist and placed him on his lap as well, now he was sitting on the bed with two of them on his lap looking at him intently.

Jalal found both of them glaring at him: what???

Rahul and shruti: SPEAK NOW!!!!

Jalal: then listen I love u both...equally...so stop fighting now 

Both the kids giggled and kissed his cheeks and jalal engulfed them in a bear hug. when they heard jalal's phone ringing

He tried to get up but both the kids were on his lap

Shruti showed her palm to jalal as if telling him that she will get the phone. So she moved down, picked up his phone from the table and handed it over to jalal and again make herself comfortable on his lap.

Jalal to the kids: are u guys planning to spend the entire day sitting up here(on his lap)

Rahul and shruti: YES๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Jalal laughed at the duo and shift his attention to his phone. Seeing the caller I'd bought both shock and amusement to him

Jalal to himself: aaj Suraj kaha se nikla hai

And receive the call

Before he could speak

The caller: where are u???

Jalal: whao!!!! Easy there girl and and and is my fiance missing me???

Listening the word fiance from jalal mouth both the kids looked at jalal with twinkling eyes 

Jodha: shut up! And tell me where are u????its important

Jalal: at the orphanage

Jodha: I am coming...stay there 

And she cut the call before jalal could reply her

Jalal gritted his teeth: JODHA

rahul and shruti who were still on his lap asked him together: IS SHE COMING??๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Jalal: yes

Both of them jumped off his lap and ran outside

Jalal: where are u two going???

Rahul and shruti: to welcome her

Jalal: leaving me here!!!!all alone

Rahul: then come with us

Jalal: no way

Rahul and shruti: bye then

Jalal: u guys don't love me

Rahul and shruti: we love u (jalal smile at them) but we love our princi di more

Saying this both the kids ran outside to welcome their lovely princi di

Jalal: and I just hate her


(jalalluddin mohammad and jodha raichand, two big shots of the business world, knew each other from their childhood and are rivals since then and soon to man and wife)


Soon a Porsche enter the orphanage premise. Parking the a beautiful girl come out of it. She greeted the guard and moved inside.

Rahul and shruti came running to her and hugged her tightly with their little hands. Jodha sat on her knees and hugged the kids back.

Jodha: hello my lovely buddies.

Both of them came out of the hug and showed their cheeks to jodha(asking for a kiss)

Rahul to shruti: she will kiss me first...I am her rock star

Shruti to rahul: no. Princi will kiss me first...I am her little fairy...and last time she kissed u first...right princi

Jodha to rahul: well its her turn this time...and my rockstar always follow the rules right

Rahul nodes sadly

Jodha kissed both of them one by one and both the kids returned the favour.

She got up and kids spread their hand(asking her to carry them in her arms). Jodha laughed and pick them up in her arms after tucking the envelop she was carrying in her pants.

She started moving inside with the kids in her arms

On the way kids told her about what they did in the past week.

Jodha: where is your bhaiya??

Shruti: in my room

In shruti room

Jalal was checking his email.

Jalal to himself: how much time will she take? I have lot of work to do. Stay there(mimicking jodha). And why on the earth I am waiting for her? If its important she will to home or office. Let's go home(grabbed the keys and started moving and then stop) but if I go...she will surely kill me... But I am not afraid of her(and started moving out again)

He was about to move out when jodha came with kids in her arms. She saw jalal with the car keys all set to go back home.

Jodha placed both the kids on the bed and turn toward jalal

Jodha to jalal pointing toward the car keys in his hand: planning to go back without meeting me??

Jalal stammers a bit but then composed himself: of course not and these keys, I was putting them in my pocket. So what's up

Jodha: want to meet kids so came here and to hand u over this.(the envelope)

Jalal opened the envelope to find a jodha's birthday invite. 

Jalal: well I know your birthday is next week. Then why this invite?

Jodha: dad and uncle want u be there. They want us to make our first public appearance together after the engagement on my birthday. And I knew that Mr. Jalalliddin Mohammad doesn't go anywhere without a formal invite... So here it is.

Jalal: hmm

Kids who were hearing all this to jodha: are u invited princi???

Jodha: of course. All of u are invited. 

Shruti and rahul: yehhh!!!! And get indulged in the planning for party

Jalal move close to jodha: well is this only our dad's wish or u don't want to cut the cake without your handsome fiance

Before jodha could give jalal a reply rahul interrupted her.

Rahul: princi di, will u help us in doing our homework???

Jodha: sure babies , open your notebooks then

Jalal: wait, I am here with the two of you side morning, why u don't ask me for this???

Shruti who was opening the notebook and sitting on her study table answered jalal without looking at him: because she is intelligent then u

Jalal: and who told u this

Rahul adjusting his chair beside shruti answered: we just know

Jodha laughed at this and move toward them and started helping the kids.

Jalal: for your kind information kids, it was me who taught your princi di how to hold a pencil and write alphabets.

Jodha: oh ho Mr.. Kids it was me who taught your bhaiya how to write a cursive s.

Jalal: u are such a kid sometimes jodha.

Jodha: u are the one who started all this.

Jalal: shut up!!

With this he took out his car keys and moved out of the room after kissing the kids head and giving a glare at jodha.

So this was the first chapter. Hope u like it.

Edited by Kritu98 - 6 years ago
Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by Kritu98


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Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by divyadaya13


Pls update soon.
updated dear๐Ÿ˜Š
Posted: 6 years ago
Awesome update
Jo-ja's banter was cute
Ja is scared of Jo๐Ÿ˜†
Kids are cute and unintentionally tease them as well
Continue soon and thanks for pm
Posted: 6 years ago
Awesome chappy 
Update soon 

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