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Posted: 6 years ago
Awesome update dear. 
Loved it. 
It was really mind-blowing and superb update. 
Thank god manvi got saved And virat gets relief. 
Loved how ayurvedic doctor wife praised virat how he didn't feel defeat. 
Loved the growing chemistry and love growing between them. 
Loved the talk between manvi and dadi. 
Loved the last part and arrangements done by virat for manvi and virat memorising manvi every time. 
Now update soon dear. 
Take care.
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Posted: 6 years ago
Thanks to all
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Part 9/2
In dadi house!
ViRmaan room!
ViRmaan fall down and after pillow  and laugh.
Viraat admire to laughing Maanvi.
Romantic song play in background
Maanvi:(saw him look at her) Kya dekhre ho?
Viraat:(tells) kuch nahin?
Maanvi: anyways, lunch surprise k liye thankyou.
Viraat:(replies) welcome.
Maanvi:(jokingly said) agar mujhe pata hota, toh main daily danger face.
Viraat:(cover her mouth) yeh baat bolna easy hai, but Aisa hote dekhna tough hai.
Maanvi:(remembers when boss told her about Viraat being kidnap and get tears) 
Viraat:(saw tears and panic) Kya Hua Maanvi?
Maanvi:(wipe tears) nothing I am f9.
Viraat:(change topic) Maanvi tumne planet Dekha?
Maanvi:(replies) book main.
Viraat:(close her eyes and switch off light and switch on glow light) Maanvi dekho.
Maanvi:(slowly open her eyes and saw beautiful scenery) wow it's beautiful.
Viraat:(admire her inmind) pata nahin kal se Kyun main tumhe Dekhta hun dekhte rehjata hun. Pata nahin kiska effect hai, forest ka ya tumhare selflessness ka.
Maanvi:(shake him) shall we dance under this beautiful scene.?
Viraat: good idea(getup and twist and and turn her around and take her hands and fly it like a wings bend her backward and slowly bring her close to him)
Maanvi:(getseparate with shyness)
Viraat:(hug her back) are you ok?
Maanvi:(tells) I will go and change:(went)
Viraat:(smiles) wah Kya ladki hai.(he heard Dadi calling them and went)
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In Dadi room!
Viraat:(comes) princess, Maanvi change karrI hai, mujhe bataiye Kya baat hai.
Dadi:(ask) Jabse aye ho pareshan lagre ho, baat Kya hai?
Viraat:(replies) forest main rest nahin Kiya princess isliye tired hun.
Dadi: haan woh toh Hona hai, itni Achi biwi jo Sath thi,usko dekhoge toh kuch aur yaad ayega nahin.
Viraat:(look away) princess Aisa kuch nahin hai, aap se dur the na toh aapki tension thi.
Dadi:(tells) Viraat, tum mujhe kuch BHI bulao, main Dadi hi rahungi, isliye bahane mat banao.:(ask) tumlog theek the na.
Viraat: haan princess sab theek tha, but aapki Maanvi ne band bajadi:(start complaining about maanvi)
Dadi:(hearing him without stoping him)
At least 4 hrs he complaint about her.
Dadi:(ask him with fake seriousness) Viraat,Maanvi ko bulao, Abhi sidha karti hun. Badi ayi tujhe pareshan karnewali
Viraat:(get worried) princess, mujhe Maanvi ne irritate nahin Kiya, agar woh nahin hoti toh main nahin hota aapke Sath.
Dadi:(laugh)
Viraat:(getconfuse) Kya Hua princess.
Dadi:(tells) main dekhna chahti thi, tu Maanvi ko chahne laga hai ya nahin.
Viraat:(getshock) princess yeh aap Kya Kehre ho? 
Dadi:(tells) jo dikhra haI wahi, main yeh jaanti hun, tumlog ki shadi tumlog ki Khushi se nahin hui, par pyar kabhi BHI HosAKTA hai
Viraat:(ask) aapko Kaise pata?
Dadi:(tells) Maanvi ne bataya tha, baaton baaton main.
Viraat:(inmind) Maanvi BHI na, pehle nahin toh baad main batasakti thi.
Dadi:(ask) Kya Hua.
Viraat: kuch nahin princess:(went).
Dadi:(inmind) kitna Sharmata hai. Yeh Viraat BHI Bilkul Maanvi jaise.:(smiles)
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In garden!
Maanvi sitting and remembering their moment.
Viraat:(join her and ask) Maanvi tumne mujhe kyun nahin bataya jo Dadi ko bataya.
Maanvi:(missunderstand his talk) yeh sab itna Jaldi Hua main kuch nahin samajhI thii, Dadi ne samajhaya toh mujhe tab pata Chala. Uske baad hum forest gaye toh time nahin mila.
Viraat:(tells)yeh baat hum Jaante the.
Maanvi:(ask) kis baremain baat karre ho.
Viraat:(tells)tumne princess ko bataya na, hum pyar nahin karte.
Maanvi:(explain) actually Dadi hamari love story jaanna chahte the, Maine boldiya hum ek dusre ko nahin Jaante achche se. Arrange marriege thi kaha.
Viraat: oh acha, anyways tum Kya baat Karri thi.
Maanvi:(tells) let it be, yeh garden kitna beautiful Haina.
Viraat:(replies) you are right.
Maanvi:(tells) you know what, mera jo ghar Haina, wahan BHI garden hai, sab flowers mere choice k hai.
Viraat: really.
Maanvi:(show him garden pics and talk about it)
Viraat:(hearing her and admiring her)
Cool breeze pass around her
Maanvi:(shiver)
Viraat:(make her wear his jacket)
Maanvi:(ask)Iski Kya need hai.
Viraat:(tells) ladko wale kaam Karti ho toh ladko wale dressing karo, ladkiyon wale dressing nahin.
Maanvi:(ask) Saree aur ladieskurti jeans tum pehnoge. Viraatni.
Viraat:(replys) nahin, kissi ko gift kardenge.
Maanvi:(tells) in your dreams.
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In evening
At kitchen
Maanvi was doing dinner preparetion.
Viraat was helping her.
Maanvi:(hair strands was disturbing her) yeh hair BHI na.
Viraat:(wash his hand and went somewhere)
Maanvi:(inmind) Viraat Kahan chalegaya.
Viraat:(comes and take hair in hands and apply hair clips) sorry I don't know , braids Kaise banate Hain.
Maanvi:(praise him without realising)no problem, at least hair fix toh kardiye tumne, you are perfect husband.
Viraat:(smiles)
Maanvi:(realise what she said) sorry.
Viraat:(stop her) I didn't mind, let's cook fast.
Maanvi:(inmind) control Maanvi, 
Viraat:(inmind) Maine Maanvi ko intrupt Kyun nahin kiya? Kahin Dadi ki baat sach toh nahin hai.
Maanvi:(ask) Viraat, salt pass karo.
Viraat:(give her sugar)
Maanvi:(read and said) Viraat yeh toh sugar hai.
Viraat:(appologize) sorry mera focus kahin aur tha:(give her salt)
Maanvi:(add salt and ask) any problem.
Viraat:(tells) i haven't slept so I am feeling headaChe.
Maanvi: koi baat nahin dinner k baad :(with atitude)Aisa oil massage karungi k tumhe kabhi pain nahin hoga.
Viraat:(ask) mera head ko meri body se alag Karnewali ho?
Maanvi:(laugh and tells) you are so funny Viraat. Pehle dinner karo phir dekho hota hai Kya?
Viraat:(pray to lord dramatically) bachalena dost, pata nahin Kya hoga mere sar k bina.
Maanvi:(start laughing)
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After dinner in virmaan room
Maanvi giving oil massage to Viraat with roughness who is resting on bed
Viraat:(ask) Maanvi kisbaat ka revenge lerahi ho tum.
Maanvi:(tells) yeh revenge nahin massage hai. Isse pain Jaldi kam hota hai, fresh feel hota hai. Acha sleep Milta hai.
Viraat:(ask) are you sure.
Maanvi:(tells) apne eyes close karo aur dekho mera kamaal.
Viraat:(get confuse) eyes close karke Kaise dekhun.
Maanvi:(tells) I mean wait karo.
Viraat:(tells) ok.:(close his eyes)
Maanvi:(continue the massage)
After some hrs
Viraat:(tells) you are amazing thoda thoda better lagraha hai. (saw her)
Maanvi:(while massaging him slept on bed stand)
Viraat:(getup slowly and make her rest)
Maanvi:(wakeup) mujhe massage Karna hai.
Viraat:(tells) aise massage karo, mujhe aur meri friend ko relief milega.
Maanvi:(smiles and continue to massage him) how are you feeling.
Viraat:(replies)thoda better lagra hai, tumne meri baat manni isliye aur acha lagta hai.
Maanvi:(tells) i am glad to know.
Viraat:(strictly) now no massage  only sleep. 
Maanvi: but tumhe thoda better lagra hai.
Viraat:(tells) na main thief na tuMhare paas khazana hai, so sleep.
Maanvi:(made face and sleep)
Viraat:(inmind) how cute:(sleeps)














































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Posted: 6 years ago
lovely update dear. 
Loved it. 
It was really superb and mind-blowing update.
Loved virman growing close to each other. Loved the background music.
 Now virat is in same trauma where manvi used to there. 
Loved virat comes to know from dadi that they only get married but no love is there between them. 
Loved manvi doing head massage of virat and virat feeling good. 
Now update soon dear. 
Take care.

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Posted: 6 years ago
Thanks friends commenting previous part.
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Part 10/1
At Dadi house!
In virmaan room!
Maanvi:(sitting feeling bore so decide to set Viraat clothes and get busy in it)
After some times.
Maanvi chat with friends.
After sometimes
Phone rings
Maanvi:(receive in one ring) hi Viraat.
Viraat:(ask) Kya baat hai koi desperate tha, mere call k liye 
Maanvi:(replies) it's not like that, mujhe laga tumhe urgent work hoga.
Viraat:(tells) mujhe laga tum bore horahi hogi, toh free hoke call Kiya.
Maanvi:(getsurprise as he felt get being bore)
Viraat:(ask) where are you?
Maanvi:(tells) here only, tumhare store room ko clean kar rahi thi.
Viraat:(getconfuse) hamare room main store room Kahan hai.
Maanvi:(replies) hamare cupboard, jiski condition storeroom jaisI hai. Sunday ko clean karlo, mujhse toh nahin hoga.
Viraat:(reminds) woh toh already tum Karri Hona?
Maanvi:(replies) haan but Kya hai, main uski condition se irritate hun, irritation main cloths cut ya burn karsakti hun. Isliye socha tumhe ek chance dedun. Cupboard clean Karne ka. So tumhare cupboard ki life tumhare hath main hai, Sunday ko bachalena apne clothes ko.
Viraat:(make face) but I didn't do that work ever in my life.
Maanvi:(replies) Sunday karlo. Tum chaho toh main teach kardungi.
Viraat: that's great.
Maanvi: Baki ke Sundays tum khud karo.
Viraat:(replies) not fair, ok bye:(end call)
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In New office!
In Viraat desk!
Viraat:(working)
Coffee cup In front of him.
Viraat:(tells reading) thanks dost.
Imaginary Maanvi:(tap his shoulder)
Viraat:(getsuprise to see Maanvi)
Imaginary Maanvi:(wave hand In front of him)
Viraat:(staring her)
Imaginary Maanvi:(sign him to drink coffee)
Viraat:(watching her and sipping coffee)
Imaginary Maanvi:(set his desk properly)
Viraat staring
Tu chajiye song playing
Imaginary Maanvi:(sign him to drink coffee)
Viraat:(drink coffee)
Imaginary Maanvi(admire him)
Viraat:(show her empty cup)
Imaginary Maanvi:(clean his coffee mustache sign her )
Viraat:(smiles on her acts)
Imaginary Maanvi:(sign him to work)
Viraat:(start working)
Maanvi:(taking care of him)
Viraat:(smiles)
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Back to Dadi house!
In virmaan room!
Maanvi watching megazine
Juice glass comes in front of her.
Maanvi:(look at the person who bring juice and getshock)
Imaginary Viraat:(feed her juice) 
Maanvi:(open mouth in o shape)
Imaginary Viraat:(closer her mouth) hey main tumhara Viraat hun. Koi favourite celebrity nahin.
Maanvi:(tells)mere liye tum hi mere favourite celebrity ho.
Imaginary Viraat:(comes near her) tum BHI meri favourite celebrity ho Maanvi
Maanvi:(suggest him) stop copying me.
Imaginary Viraat:(hug from behind) jo tumhara hai woh mera hai, jo mera hai woh tumhara hai.
Maanvi:(getshy walk away and turn)
She was alone their  
Maanvi:(comes in near mirror,close eyes) Viraat, pata nahin KAB aur Kaise, tumhare liye spl place bangayi, kabhi time nahin Milta tha toh kabhi Dar lagta tha k him waise nahin rahenge jaise hain, but Jabse woh incident hua, mujhse wait nahin horaha, pata nahin KAL Kya hoga, so Maine sochliya tumhe aj Abhi aur issi waqt batadun, main tumse love Karti hun, yes Viraat I love you so much.
Someone claps for her.
Maanvi:(getshock and turn and get relief) Dadi aap yahan.
Dadi:(tells)main bas dekhne ayi tum theek ho ya nahin. Ache se kahi tumne dil ki baat. Viraat ko BHI Aise batana
Maanvi:(tells) but Dadi, Viraat ko job Karna hai, pyar no place nahin hogi
Dadi:(ask) kisne kaha dono nahin Hosakte.:(tells) mujhe lagta hai kahin na kahin viraat pyar karta hai tujhe, bas usko pata nahin hai. Koi baat nahin Jaldi samjhega viraat.
Maanvi:(hug her inmind) I wish Dadi ki baat sach ho.
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From rest room!
Viraat:(comes out)
Imaginary Maanvi dancing in front of him.
Viraat:(admiring her)
One of the team memher tap him.
Viraat:(tells ) sorry Chalen?
Team member: bhabhi k sapne dekhre ho?
Viraat:(tells) it's not like that,
Team member:(smiles) don't be shy, jab se Maine shadi ki hai, uski sochke hi smile ajati hai. Aisa hi hota pyar main
Viraat:(inmind) yeh Kya, pehle woh doctor couple, phir princess, ab office memher. What's happening with me.
Team member: Kahan hogaye.
Viraat: nothing.
Team member:(ask) bhabhi se baat kar lo. Aur ajao:(went)
Viraat:(call her)
Maanvi: haan Viraat.
Viraat:(ask) yeh Kya behind cars ki away hai.
Maanvi:(tells) main aur Dadi market jarahe hain, 
Viraat:(ask ) raju Haina?
Maanvi: haan Viraat, don't worry, KAB tak aaoge?
Viraat:(tells) lunch time tak Ajaunga.
Maanvi:(ask) tumhare liye Kya cook Karun
Viraat: jo tum chAHo, occasion Kya hai?
Maanvi:(hoke with him) Sunday ko cupboard cleaning karre ho toh socha tumhare liye advance main kuch Karun, bye
Viraat:(inmind) stupid but sweet:(went).
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In the market
Meri ashiquI tum hi ho play in bg
Maanvi along dadI and driver arrives.
Market had so many things, like clothes, jewelry, food items. Makeup items etc.
Imaginary Viraat:(comes with suit and Saree sign her and ask)
Maanvi:(point toward suit)
Imaginary Viraat:(comes with colorful bangles sign her to choice)
Maanvi:(step head)
Imaginary Viraat:(comes with anklets).
Maanvi:(choose delicate anklets)
Imaginary viraat:(make her wear make her wwar that)
Maanvi:(got overwhelmed with his care)
Imaginary Viraat:(make her smiles)
Maanvi:(smiles)
Imaginary viraat:(comes with soft toys)
Maanvi:(took one of them)
Imaginary viraat:( to them)
Maanvi:(smiles)
Imaginary viraat:(bring watches)
Maanvi:(choose one of them)
Imaginary viraat:(give her flying kiss after giving soft toy)
Maanvi:(did same)
Imaginary viraat:(hug her)
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After lunch in virmaan room!
Virmaan spending time.
Viraat:(ask) shopping trip kaisI thi.
Maanvi:(remembers shopping scene and smiling )
Viraat:(notice it) Kya Hua? Akele khush horahi ho tum, mujhe BHI batao.
Maanvi:(replies) its was so interesting, 
Viraat:(tells) good.
Maanvi:(smiles) comfortable hona
Viraat:(remember officemoment and smiling)
Maanvi:(ask) what's going on?
Viraat:(tells) acha tha, everyone is co- operative. Kuch friends party ki demand Karre Hain, hamari wedding ki Khushi main.
Maanvi:(ask) invite Kiya tumne?
Viraat:(tells) I said I will make you meet them.
Maanvi:(ask) aur Kya Kya Hua office main.
Viraat: office ko shoot karo, batao Kya buy Kiya?
Maanvi:(replies) kuch NaHin, let's play a game.:(went)
Viraat:(smiles) Bilkul bachi hai. 
Aftersometimes Maanvi return with greenchillies
Viraat:(getshock) yeh game hai?
Maanvi: yes.
They start competition, 
It was becoming painfull for Maanvi to eat chillies.
Viraat:(saw her,stop &tells) I cAnt compete with you, ice cream chahiye mujhe:(went)
Maanvi:(inmind) it's means Viraat loves me:(smiles).


































































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Posted: 6 years ago
Awesome update dear. 
Loved it. 
It was really superb and mind-blowing update. 
Beautfully written each and every part specially imginery part of virmans spending together. 
Loved virman part of talking on phone and manvi cleaning the cupboard and told virat to clean it on Sunday. 
Loved imaginary part of virman like manvi serving him coffee, virman dancing together. 
Loved dadi part too. 
Now update soon dear. 
Take care.
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Posted: 6 years ago
Thanks
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Part 10/2
In dadi's kitchen!
Viraat comes take ice cream & serve ice cream for Maanvi and himself.
Maanvi:(comes and saw him preparing  two ice creams bowls)
Viraat:(take ice creams comes turn togo) tum yahan?
Maanvi:(join him) I thought to make Maanvi spl ice cream.
Viraat:(tells) Kya hota hai Maanvi spl main.
Maanvi:(take out fruits. Grape. Pineapple, orange cherry and kiwi and bring it)
Viraat:(admiring her)
Maanvi:(bring big bowl and put his and her ice cream in it, cut fruits and add in it and serve for them) try karo.
Viraat:(smiles and try it) wow it's yummy.
Maanvi:(felt nice)
Suddenly Viraat felt unwell.
Maanvi:(getshock and get concearn) Viraat Kya Hua tumhe? Abhi theek the.
Viraat:(saw her worried try to talk) mujhe ne woh.
Maanvi:(ask) bolo Kya Hua? Hospital chaLen?:(feed him water)
Viraat: mujhe Maanvi disease Hua hai:(start laughing)
Maanvi:(ask him) be serious.
Viraat:(tells) koi problem nahin hai.
Maanvi:(tells) tum aise nahin manoge, ruko main Dadi ko bulaungi, woh sach puchenge.:(start going)
Viraat:(hold her hand)
Maanvi:(getshy) Viraat let me go.
Viraat:(ask) pehle yeh batao,yeh warrior dailysoap ki heroine Kaise bangayi?
Maanvi:(replies)woh baat itni important nahin hai. Jitni tumhari health.:(went)
Viraat:(follow her)
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At hall!
Maanvi:(comes and sat with anger)
Viraat:(comes and join her comes) angry ho.?
Maanvi:(normally) haan aur hamesha rahungi. Chahe tum kuch bhi karlo.:(went)
Viraat:(thinks how to convince her)
Dadi:(join and ask) Kya Hua Viraat?
Viraat:(replies) kuch nahin princess, maanvi mujhse qussa hai.
Dadi:(ask) kyun?
Viraat:(replies) Dadi, jab hum kitchen main the, Maanvi ne fruity ice cream banaya tha. Usse main kiwi that I think isliye main bimaar hogaya. Main Maanvi ko sad nahin Karna chahta tha isliye nahin bataya usko. Otherwise usko bura lagta
Dadi:(feltnice) by his love for maanvi) tum sahi ho Viraat. Par Maanvi ko aur tujhe ekdusre k baremain sab kuch pata ho Na chahiye, chahe Achi ho ya buri baat, Aisa na ho ke aj Hua woh phir ho, phir toh tumhe batana hoga, isliye batado.:(went to send maanvi)
Viraat:(start to go)
Maanvi:(comes their) Dadi ne bataya tumhe kuch kehna hai?
Viraat:(replies) I am sorry I have allergy problem.
Maanvi:(getshock) what?
Viraat:(replies) yes, main tumhe sad Karna nahin chahta tha. Isliye nahin bataya.
Maanvi:(tells) it's ok for now:(make him Sat and join him take mobile and open word) batao aur kisse allergy hai tumhe.
Viraat:(joke with her) cupboard setting se allergy hai.
Maanvi:(with gritting teeths)Viraat.: (take pillow and beat him)
Viraat:(stop her and ask) tumhe mere baremain itna kyun Janna hai?
Maanvi:(make excuse) doctor k paas Chalen.
Viraat:(replies) main theek hun.
Maanvi:(replies) phir BHI pata chalts chahiye tum kitne theek ho.
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In Dadi room!
Virmaan came to meet Dadi happily.
Dadi:(ask) sab theek hogaya.
Maanvi:(replies) Aapne theek kiya sab Bilkul Angel jaise.
Viraat:(tells) agree. Otherwise princess prince ko bachati hai, but meri princess ne mujhe bachaya. Is bhoot se
Maanvi:(complain to her) Dadi dekhiye, isne mujhe Kya bulaya
Dadi:(smiles) Viraat aise nahin karte dekho kitni pyari hai.
Maanvi:(show tongue)
Viraat:(tells) jab BHI main Maanvi aur aapko Dekhta hun, tab aap Maanvi se pyare lagta ho.:(ask)aap hi batao Kya Karun.
Maanvi:(replies) agree, but Dadi ke beauty k samne tum zero ho. 
Viraat:(madeface) this is not fair.
They debates infront of Dadi.
Dadi:(sternly tells) chup ho jao.
Virmaan get quite.
Dadi:(ask) humesha ladte rahoge toh pyar KAB dikhaoge
Virmaan get shock in front of eachother.
Maanvi:(get shy and went)
Viraat:(tells) princess main Abhi aata hun.
Dadi:(ask) us din tumne kiska chehra dekha tha.
Viraat:(tells) princess, I forget
Dadi:(ask) ek baat bata, office main acha lagta hai tujhe? Maanvi nahin hai toh
Viraat:(replies) nahin dadi,
Dadi:(ask)uske Sath yahan?
Viraat:(tells) uske Sath acha nahin lagna impossible hai.
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In garden
Maanvi:(inmind) I hope Viraat mujhse koi question nahin kare?
Viraat:(join her)balloon k tarah fly Karna chahti ho? Air khake.
Maanvi:(inmind) thank God Viraat koi question nahi  Karra hai.
Viraat:(shake her)
Maanvi:(ask) kuch kaha tumne?
Viraat:(loudly ask) air khana ayi ho?
Maanvi:(cover ears) main deaf nahin hun.
Viraat:(ask) then answer kyun nahin diya?
Maanvi:(tells) I was thinking something
Viraat:(ask)but Kya?
Maanvi:(replis) leave it:(tells) rest karlo.
Viraat:(tells) I am f9. Don't worry.:(ask) tumhe apne tobe hubby main Kya quality chahiye?
Maanvi:(make excuse) pehle tum batao?
Viraat:(ask)you don't know? Ladies first.
Maanvi:(tells) pata hai tabhi question Karri hun.
Viraat:(replies) actually you are a copy cat
Maanvi:(ask) Dadi tumse Kya Kehre the?
Viraat:(tells) mujhe nahin tumse Kehre the. I think
Maanvi:(make excuse) tumse Kehre the
Viraat:(tells) tumse Kehre the.
Maanvi:(replies) Maine kaha na? Tumse kaha tha.
Viraat:(tells) tumse.
Maanvi:(replies) tumse
Viraat: tumse.
They turn away with atitude.
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In evening after eating
In virmaan room!
Virmaan resting
Viraat:(close eyes for surety)
His & Maanvi memories  appear In front of his eyes
Maanvi:(In mind) I wish tumhe BHI mujhse pyar hota, mere liye easy hota tumhe batana. 
Viraat:(In mind)it's means I love Maanvi.:(get excited stand on bed and dance)
Maanvi:(getworried and getup and ask) are you Ok?
Viraat:(tells)yes.
Maanvi:(ask) bandaron ki jaise jumping kyun karre the?
Viraat:(join her) mujhe laga, night suit main kuch hai. Anyways let's rest. I have so many work.
Maanvi:(ask) are you alright for real?
Viraat:(tells) don't worry, tumne jo herbal medicine Diya uske baad perfectly fit hun.
Maanvi:(felt nice) that's nice k tum theek ho.
Viraat:(ask) ek baat ka hun?
Maanvi:(say) kaho.
Viraat:(tells) tumhe bravery suit hoti hai, worries nahin.
Maanvi:(felt nice) 
Viraat: so be brave and don't worry. Just like that Maanvi whom I met.
Maanvi:(with atitude) kitni baat karte ho tum, sojao chup chap nahin toh bandbAjadungi tumhara.
Viraat: ok ok. Good night.
Maanvi: good night.
Both turn different side.
Maanvi:(inmind pray) plz aap viraat se mera except karadena?
Viraat:(inmind) I hope, Maanvi mera love except kare.
They take rest.
















































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Posted: 6 years ago
Lovely update dear. 
Loved it. 
It was really superb and mind-blowing update. 
Loved virman each and every part. 
Loved manvi made ice cream for virat but virat had allergie of kiwi so he felt not well. 
Loved Dadi part with virman. 
Now virat is realizing his love for Manvi. 
Loved their part at room. 
Now update soon dear. 
Take care. πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š
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Thanks mysticriver and sandhya_123
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Part 11/1
Weekend.
In virmaan room!
Maanvi take out all dress and checking on her. As Viraat want to take her outdoor.
Viraat:(comes and ask) mujhe apne Sath tumhare side k cupboard ko set karwaogi Kya?
Maanvi:(tells) nahin Viraat.
Viraat:(get relief) great main bachgaya.
Maanvi:(replies like a kid) main fasgayi na. (Start crying)
Viraat:(join her ask) why are you crying.
Maanvi:(complains) dekho na itne sare dress hai, mujhe samajh nahin aara Kya pehnun.
Viraat:(wipe her tears, make her understand) Saree ho ya suit tumhe sab suit karta hai, dont worry whatever you want. Aj bahot spl hai mere liye. Isse senti hoke spoil mat karo. Now smiles.
Maanvi:(with smile) main BHI yeh spl day ko spoil nahin Karna chahti, mere liye yeh double spl hai.
Viraat:(get confuse) double spl Kaise?
Maanvi:(tells) tum mujhe Mumbai dikhanewale ho, uske pehle tumne mERI confusion dur ki hai, hogaya na double spl.
Viraat:(tells) you are right. Now go get ready.
Maanvi:(went to change)
Viraat:(sat making place for him on the bed) i hope Maanvi se apne feelings share karsakun
Aftersometimes Maanvi comes wearing beautiful Saree call out his name.
Viraat:(get up and turn get mesmerize by her beauty)
In background romantic music play.
Maanvi:(shake him) Viraat.
Viraat:(tells) Achi lagrahi ho.:(ask) Chalen?
Maanvi:(replies) yes.
Virmaan went to gether.
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On the way
Virman traveling via bike.
Viraat:(ask) are you comfortable.?
Maanvi:(replies) yes Viraat.
Viraat:(ask) batao Kahan Chalna pasand karogi?
Maanvi:(replies) park Chalen?
Viraat:(tells) why not.
Maanvi:(ask) Viraat yeh bike kiski hai?
Viraat:(replies) princess k neibour ki bike hai. Woh wahan aur hum yahan.
Maanvi:(smiles)
Viraat:(ask) tumhe Kya laga tha?
Maanvi:(replies) mujhe laga tumne bike buy ki?
Viraat:(ask) tumhe Kaunsi ride Achi lagti hai? Bike ya car?
Maanvi:(replies) bike ride, acha Kiya tumne bike borrow ki otherwise main nahin aati tumhare Sath cab main. Jo fun bike main Hain, cabs main Kahan hota hai air and
Viraat:(tells) isliye toh Maine yeh bike bOrrow ki hai,bike riding Karra hun. Sirf tumhare liye. So enjoy in the air.
Maanvi:(smiles)
Speed breaker come in between & Maanvi crash with viraat
Viraat:(stop bike and ask) are you ok?
Maanvi:(replies) yes I am f9.
Viraat:(Start riding his bike) park k baad Kahan jana hai?
Maanvi:(replies) pehle park toh chalo, wahan decide karenge.
Viraat:(tells) sure, ok then chalo mere bikebuddy park.
Maanvi:(laugh)
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In park!
Virmaan sitting and Maanvi enjoying the bird sounds and flowers fragrance with closed eyes
Kaise tum mujhe milgayi play in background
Viraat:(admiring her)
Maanvi:(get some idea) Viraat.
Viraat:(ask) haan Maanvi.
Maanvi:(tells)humein photoshoot Karna chahiye.
Viraat:(smiles and taking phone from his jeans)
Maanvi:(remembers forest incident and tells) stop Viraat.
Viraat:(stop and ask) kya Hua?
Maanvi:(replies) photoshoot nahin karenge.
Viraat:(ask) tumhe lagta hai? Itni beautiful place main snake ayega. Humdono main se koi attack hoga
Maanvi:(hug him) don't say like that.
Viraat:(hug her back without touching it) meri dailysoap ki heroine? Don't worry tumhe face karke again face Karne ka courage kissi k paas nahin hai. So I don't think humdono ko woh sab sochna chahiye.:(getseparate)so plz smile.
Maanvi:(smiles)
Viraat:(shoot a selfie with her)
Maanvi:(with atitude) main daily soup ki heroine NahI hun. Ok.
Viraat:(replies) main nahin actually humdono yaad rakhenge.
Maanvi:(with smiles) ok.
Viraat:(smiles back to her) so Kahan Chalen hum?
Maanvi:(replies) thodi der rukenge.
Viraat:(tells) jaise tum chaho waise hoga.
Maanvi:(felt herself spl by hearing him)
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On the way
Virmaan continue the journey
Viraat:(ask) Ab Kya Karna hai.
Maanvi:(replies) bike ride and fresh Air enjoy Karna hai.
Viraat:(ask) tum koi mobile ho Kya? Jo charge HosAKTA hai, hum insaano jaise kha nahin sakta.
Maanvi:(replies) very funny but Aisa nahin hai, Abhi mera mood nahin hai:(ask) hum outdoor kyun aye Hain.?
Viraat:(replies) mera BHI mood nahin hai surprise Kya hai batane ka.
Maanvi:(madeface)
Viraat:(tells without looking her) aj k din, no Rona Dhona, only hasna aur enjoy Karna.
Maanvi:(ask) Tumhe kaise pata main Kya Kar rahi hun.
Viraat:(replies) main irritate Karun aur tum irritate na ho. It's big impossible.
Both laugh.
Maanvi:(ask) main ride karum bike?
Viraat:sure (stop bike Sat behind her make her ride bike)
Maanvi:(feltnice) thankyou Viraat
Viraat:(tells) welcome.
After sometimes Maanvi sat behind Viraat.
Viraat:(ask) kaisa laga drive karke?
Maanvi:(tells) it was entertaining.  
Viraat:(replies) that's nice to hear:(ask) ab chalna Kahan haI?
Maanvi:(tells) beach par.
Viraat: ok. Bike bhai let's go to beach.
Maanvi:(tells) you are sweet and cute.
Viraat:(inmind) Kya baat hai, mujhe love Hua, aur love Maanvi dikharahi hai,:(smiles)
Maanvi:(inmind) Kaise bataun k main tumse love Karti hun.
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After lunch 
Virmaan went to romantic place
Maanvi:(inmind) wow yeh kitni Achi place hai. Is baat ko batane k liye.
Viraat:(tells) Maanvi main tumhe yahan isliye laya hun bcoz mujhe tumse kuch spl kehna hai.
Maanvi:(replies) pehle main bolunga.
Viraat:(tells) main bolunga tum reply karo.
Maanvi:(replies) main bolungi tum reply karo.
Viraat:(tells) plz Maanvi.
Maanvi:(replies) plz Viraat. After all ladies first.
Viraat:(make face)
Maanvi:(give idea)  weird expression mat do aj k spl moment par. I have a idea. Humdono Sath bolte Hain.
Viraat:(replies) good idea.
Virmaan:(together say to eachother) I love you my bandariya/my bandar.
Maanvi:(make face) main bandariya nahin hun.
Viraat:(replies) main BHI Bandar nahin hun.
Both turn away with atitude then start laughing turn to eachother side:(hug eachother)
http://www.lyricsmint.com/2017/07/hawayein-lyrics-jab-harry-met-sejal.html
Viraat:(dance with her and singing that song which link is above)
Maanvi:(is lost in his love)
Viraat:(kiss her on forehead After song)
Maanvi:(getsurprise and hug him) I love you Viraat.
Viraat:(hug her back) I love you Viraat.:(ask) Kahan Chalen?
Maanvi:(replies) ghar, 
ViraaT: (replies) ek sec. (Take out sindur box and fill her hairline)
Maanvi:(hug him)
They roam in garden 



Edited by Ayesha_Tabassum - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Lovely update dear.
Loved it. 
It was really beautiful and surprb update. 
Loved virat selected dress for manvi and got memorised by her beauty. 
Loved virman went for outing and they went by bike it was so sweet that they both enjoyed. 
Loved their part at park with beautiful nature.
Loved virat planned beautiful surprise for manvi and they went at beach where both confessed their love for each other. It was so so sweet. 
Last part was more surprising as virat filled her head line with sindoor. 
Now update soon dear. 
Take care.
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Part 11/2
Back to romantic place
Viraat thinking about his and her parents and his and her fiancees.
Maanvi:(ask) Kya sochre ho?
Viraat:(replies) mujhe hamari family's and respective fiancee ki tension horahi hai.
Maanvi:(suggest) Abhi k liye tum work karo, bcoz family ko pata chalega toh hamare baremein toh. Bahot hungama hoga. Tumhare dream problem main ayega. Is baat ko future k liye msg k draft Main safe kardo
Viraat:(cup her face) you are a sweet i am feeling lucky to meet u.
Maanvi:(replies) mujhse kam lucky ho?
Viraat:(ask) aj k din koi fight karta hai kya?
Maanvi:(replies) i don't know about others but i love to fight with u.:(ask) chalega ya bhagjaoge?
Viraat:(replies) chahe jo hojaye main tumhare Sath rahunga, chahe hum kitna BHI fight ya angry kyun na ho.
Maanvi:(felt nice) I promise u the same.
Virmaan:(hug eachother)
Maanvi in mind wish for Virmaan relation to get stronger with time and nothing happened in viraat career.
Viraat in mind wish for same thing.
Maanvi:(is enjoying in fresh hair)
Viraat:(ask) tum nahin lagta tum kuch bhulrahI ho.
Maanvi:(getconfuse)tumhara birthday hai?
Viraat:(replies) no.:(point toward his lips) 
Maanvi:(getshock) no Viraat?
Viraat:(tells) sochlo main tumhe daily soap ki heroine karunga.
Maanvi:(get some idea take her iPhone and view his pic and kiss it went from their)
Viraat:(laugh on her and went)
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A street play was going
So many people's where their.
Virmaan join them enjoy there.
Maanvi:(tells) thankyou Viraat, mere liye aj ka day spl Karne k liye.
Viraat:(replies) thanks mat kaho, bcoz tumne BHI mere liye aj ka day spl Kiya hai, otherwise mujhe laga tha I love you k instead slap milega.
Maanvi:(laugh and tells) itna toh ladke apni gf ki family se nahin darte, jitna tum apni gf se darte ho.
Viraat:(joke with her) tum 10 members k equal ho.
Maanvi:(madeface) how rude.:(start leaving)
Viraat:(tells) main darta hun par tumhe khone se, aise lagta hai jaise servive nahin hoga mujhse marjaunga main tumhare bina.
Maanvi:(melt by his talk,ran back to him and hug him) I love you Viraat.
Viraat:(hug her back with smile) I love you 2 Maanvi.
After some they get separate.
His phone ring
Viraat:(receive it) hello princess.
Dadi:(ask) Kahan ho tumlog.?
Viraat:(replies) hum Abhi aanewale Hain.
Dadi:(ask) jo kaam k liye gaye the woh hogaya?
Viraat:(replies) hum aake batayenge princess.
Dadi:(tells) chalo theek hai bye:(end call)
Viraat:(keep phone back)
Maanvi:(tells) mujhe baat kyun Karne nahin diya tumme?
Viraat:(replies) Chalke batadenge k
Maanvi:(smiles) good idea, Viraat hum shopping par Chalen.
Viraat:(smiles) sure
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At mall!
Ladieswear counter
Maanvi was selecting Saree for dadi.
Viraat:(was look dress for her around goes to get it for her)
Maanvi:(choose some Saree for dadi) Viraat batao na kaunsa acha rahega?(when no reply come she turn)
Viraat:(join her with packet) Kya Hua.
Maanvi:(ask) Kahan the tum?
Viraat:(replies) apni bandariya k liye gift lane gaya tha.
Maanvi:(made face)  Bandar Hoge tum.
Viraat:(pull her closer) isliye toh Kaha tumhe bandariya.
Maanvi:(trying get separate) Viraat. Baki ka pyar ghar k liye bachake Rakho, Abhi meri help karo.
Viraat:(getseparate) good idea, :(check Sarees)
Maanvi:(inmind) Viraat kitna cooperative hai.
Viraat:(ask) Kahan khogayi?
Maanvi:(replies) kahin nahin?
Viraat:(ask) are you sure?
Maanvi:(tells) I was thinking, Dadi ko acha lagega yeh ya nahin.
Viraat:(replies) don't worry acha lagega.
Maanvi:(ask) Kya Dadi ko pata hai tum mujhse love karte ho.
Viraat:(replies) Kya princess ko pata hai?
Maanvi:(suggest) khud puchenge.
Viraat:(replies) ok..
Virmaan went.
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Back to Dadi's home!
In hall!
Virmaan returns.
Dadi's guest went back
Virmaan:(join her)
Dadi:(ask) kaisa raha aj ka Din.
Viraat:(replies) acha toh tha par aapko miss Kiya princess.
Maanvi:(replies) bahot miss Kiya..
Dadi:(ask)tumlog ne bataya ekdusre ko k pyar karte ho?
Virmaan:(getshock to know that Dadi knew their feelings for eachother)
Dadi: haan mujhe pata tha,  aur batane ka kaam tumlog ka tha ekdusre ko.
Virmaan:(give her gift) yeh aapke liye? Hamara thankyou gift,
Dadi:(ask) yeh kyun? bachon.
Virmaan:(tells) aj hum Sath Hain, toh aapke efforts se hai.
Dadi:(point up toward almighty ) woh chahte the tumlog milo, isliye tumlog mile ho, Maine toh woh bataya jo mujhe pata tha. Pyar k baremain
Virmaan:(hug her)
Dadi:(ask) tumne apne ghar par bataya? 
Maanvi:(replies) Dadi, humme decide Kiya hai, pehle Viraat career banayega, uske baad humlog apne families ko batayenge. 
Viraat:(ask) aapko Kya lagta hai princess.
Dadi:(tells) Maanvi ka idea acha hai, 
Maanvi:(felt nice) love you Dadi.
Viraat:(say same) love you princess.
Dadi:(smiles)
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In evening after dinner
In virmaan room!
Viraat:(ties personalise chain in MaaNvi neck) ab dekho
Maanvi:(open her eyes saw her neck) wow it's beautiful.
Viraat:(hug her from behind) meri Maanvi se zyada nahin.
Maanvi:(playfully push him and walk toward bed and rest)
Viraat:(rest back beside her, remember to put pillow and takes pillow)
Maanvi:(tells) rehno do Viraat.
Viraat:(replies) but Maanvi humlog hamesha aise karte Hain a?
Maanvi:(tells) hum friends se lovers bansakte Hain toh bina pillows k BHI rehsakte hain. Most important  I trust you
Viraat:(ask) are you sure?
Maanvi:(replies) yes viraat
Viraat:(rest back with her) agar tumhe problem nahin toh mujhe BHI problem nahin hai.
Maanvi:(praise his date plan) tumhara plan best tha. Mujhe aise date plans ache lagte Hain.
Viraat:(tells) nice to know.
Maanvi:(praise him) bike riding ache karte ho.
Viraat:(tells) college days bike ride karta tha.
Maanvi:(replies) thats nice.
Viraat:(ask) tum Kya Karti thi college days main.
Maanvi:(replies) ghar par ek driver uncle the, toh Main unko backseat par rest Lene k liye BoltI the aur main khud drive Karti thi, ghar se college se ghar. Mom dad ko kabhi pata nahin laga.
Viraat:(replies) you are so sweet.
Maanvi:(smiles) let's rest KAL tumhe jana haina.
Viraat:(replies) you are right.
They take rest.