That was a wonderful update! Arnav is so concerned for Khushi and while he ponders on her feelings, his own feelings for her run very deep, one he hasnt realised or maybe would not acknowledge by giving a name. In fact an affair is a very insufficient way of expressing the relationship status.
I feel sad for Khushi. It seems she is in a quagmire. Her mom, her dreams, her love - all go in different directions without an apt destination. Not in a good place at all.
I read your note. There is no need to apologise for the comment you put up, it happens to all of us sometimes. I know it takes a lot of time to come up with the storyline and to write, and hence when you put your hard work forward, you expect people to read it and acknowledge. It normal, very normal.
But acknowledgement is not that common, here and in daily life. In life, speaking from experience, you will find you get it less where you want it most. So please remember that your work is for yourself more than for anyone else, it will bring you some peace which the response here does not. You have been doing a great job, and this is one of the finest pieces of writing in recent times along with a good storyline. In fact, I for myself , wait for you to update this and check my favorites thread regularly.
That said, even many of us who are commenting now might just be able to make time now and might not come back later for comments. I apologise for that ahead, real life is sometimes too hard.
Do keep writing, many of us have tried and failed!
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