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Yours Forever..(AK) PG95 **NEW Update** (Page 7)

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Posted: 02 January 2007 at 2:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by huntor

Nice part continue sonn


thnx! i will cont in few days

Originally posted by kkbiri

hi,
great fan fic so far, and i know that many are not reading this fan fic at the moment, but dont give up so easily! it is still the beginning, keep writing and u will find many people start reading! trust me on this, whenever a new fan fic starts i never start to read it untill atleast five or six parts are written or untill the story has developed! just keep going! i like it, thats got to count for something?
love kamli

thnx 4 the encouragement

Originally posted by berkeleygirl818

hi, i dont think ur FF is bad, i think it is REALLY good!!!! u just
need to continue a bit sooner...... i am glad ur continuing with ur FF!!!!

thnx. i will cont in few days, actually i dont have much spare time

Originally posted by princess_101

amazing part!   
this ff is realli gud!
continue plzz

thnx Embarrassed

Originally posted by erier101

great parts!! i think this ff is real good and am glad that u r gonna continue with it!      

thnx 4 likin' it Tongue

Originally posted by koolaries4

its goood...plz continue...


thnx Embarrassed ...i will


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Posted: 03 January 2007 at 8:40pm | IP Logged
amazing part!    
this ff is realli gud!
continue plzz
Wink
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Posted: 03 January 2007 at 11:16pm | IP Logged
awsome parrt i really like kripas character and angad think he can fool her its really interesting con soon
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Posted: 04 January 2007 at 2:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by avantika_4ever

amazing part!     
this ff is realli gud!
continue plzz
             


i will try to cont 2day Smile ...thnx!!!!!
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Posted: 04 January 2007 at 2:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by armaghan0

awsome parrt i really like kripas character and angad think he can fool her its really interesting con soon



glad u liked it Smile
i'll try 2 cont 2day.....
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Posted: 04 January 2007 at 11:02am | IP Logged

 Fifth part-

 

Angad reached kripa's apartment at 4:10.He glanced at his watch …wow that was early. Usually he was at least half an hour late but something told him that kripa might not like it.

 

Hey, hold on since when did it become important for him that what kripa likes or not.

He pressed the door-bell and waited.

Kripa opened the door. Angad stared at her. She wasn't wearing spectacles and he thought she was born with those pair of spects. She was dressed in simple cotton chicken work (I hope u know about chicken work) kurti and salwar. She looked so simple and adorable. He shook himself at the thought and followed her inside and scanned the whole room in one go.

It was rather small apartment, it wasn't spacious or luxurious but extremely clean and well maintained. There was a shelf with loads of book perfectly arranged in it. White dominated the room with white curtains, white sofa cover and other things. The furniture though cheap, was certainly classy. Their owner indeed had gr8 taste.

He sat on the sofa while she brought few books and sat in front of him cross legged on the sofa with book and a pen in her hands. She was underlining important points for Angad. Angad saw few strands of her hair touching her cheeks and felt an urge 2 tuck them back behind her ears. He wanted to ask her why she wasn't wearing spects but decided not to.

He tried to locate Nisha but couldn't spot her. Suddenly he heard a thud of crashing utensils and looked 2wards kripa. She was busy in her book. WAS IT THAT OBVIOUS! May be Nisha was there in the kitchen, he concluded.

He coughed and asked kripa, from where could he get water. She directed him 2wards kitchen.

He saw Nisha struggling to keep 4 fallen utensils back at their place, all at the same time. He came forward and helped her. She turned and smiled at him and he returned it back. Then Angad spoke up "u are gorgeous"

N – Thanks!

There convo was disturbed by another sound of crash that came from drawing room.

  N – O god I think kripa has also dropped some thing.

 A – No wonder if she had after all she forgot to wear her spects .

N - She doesn't wear them anywhere except for college, she doesn't really need them.

"So why does she wear them, newayz? Just for fun…." Angad said mockingly.

N – Well because she feels like wearing them.

And Nisha made her way to the drawing room leaving behind Angad.

She LIKES wearing spectacles! God she was odder than he imagined.

 

 

Pls post comments. And let me know wat u think of it.

 DO COMMENT.

 

 

 

 

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Posted: 04 January 2007 at 11:31am | IP Logged
oh gosh... was goood... but plz longer parts.. plz...
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Posted: 04 January 2007 at 12:29pm | IP Logged
hey that was good... plZ cont. soon Smile

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