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Ties that Bind: Pranushka SS - Author's Note/Pg. 38 (Apr 26/2018) (Page 3)

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Posted: 21 August 2017 at 3:18am | IP Logged
Awe this is so cuteTongue
Loveddd it
And panda eyesLOL

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Posted: 22 August 2017 at 1:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aaradhaya1688

Awe this is so cuteTongue
Loveddd it
And panda eyesLOL

hehe, thanks Aaradhaya! Embarrassed

Le panda eyes is going to have a hard time ignoring Ms. Almonds soon LOL
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Oh Tashu, this update is like a breath of fresh air. But  it's too short re LOL
Anyway, I loved reading about Isha and Aniket's bonding at work, and how they have somehow learnt to co-exist at the work space. They are the yin and yang to everything that is missing in the other.

Isha is making him think about simple things in life, that's a welcome change. And Aniket has take the first step towards probing her, trying to get to know her. Though the response hadn't been that favourable, yet the first step has been taken.

And their fears 

God, I need to know more ! Unhappy Please update soon. 

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Posted: 22 August 2017 at 11:18am | IP Logged
Beautifully written Tashu Embarrassed
Loved it Heart

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Posted: 22 August 2017 at 12:53pm | IP Logged
The updates are superb re
But too short
Give us a long update
Lovingg it

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One of the most beautifully paced stories.
I love the easy to relate descriptions of their work together.
I loved how a man opens up to his girl, the only one who can bring things out of him through her cuteness.
And vice versa.
I'm very sure she'll soon confide into him her story. The story of her greatest fear.
And did you just mention about her lips? 
They are real beautiful!
We all have this fear right? Of losing the ones we love. But how many of us can confess that?
On with Isha and Aniket. Keep writing!

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Posted: 23 August 2017 at 12:56am | IP Logged
I'd read Part 1 the day you posted, but could catch up 2 and 3 only today as I'd been on a writing spree. It would be great if you could add me to your PM list :)

I like a lot of things here. I'm gonna switch to bullet points as I'm infamous for writing mile long essays :

* Aniket - one of my favorite names, in fact one that I'd considered for my story. When I love the names of the characters, my interest doubles.

* The professional details you've mentioned ; either this is your profession/you're familiar with it. Or you've done your research very well! Sounded very authentic.

* The neatness of your work : the font, alignment, spacing, index; just about everything.
PS : Could you tell me how to rename hyperlinks?


* The pace : I envy you for this one. How effortlessly have you portrayed the bonding in just three chapters without compromising on adding details in descriptions. I would have probably taken 13 chapters!

* Aniket reminds me of my husband a lot. He loves Tea more than me, talks very little, listens to my never ending talks but answers almost every question with an "I don't really know!".

*The writing style is very compact and crisp; but there's this seamless flow.

They've almost built a home inside the office cabin. That's adorable!
Wonder what made Aniket shoot that question out of the blue! And what made her so uneasy? Waiting to find out how they get bound by the ties!


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