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ShivGauri(Fanfic) End updated on Pg 51 (Page 7)

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Posted: 16 December 2006 at 11:15pm | IP Logged
awwww...shiv is choo chweeet Embarrassed .....gr8 part.....continue ASAP Smile

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hey ppl i just wanted to thank all those ppl who commented and liked my fanfic i.e  heartbreakkid$, zoe89, rock_star, racho8, carzy_about_u, fida-cute, sweety567, simrin, iqbaladdict, huntor, crystalclear and preeti_saarrthi thank you so much guys!!! and will update it soon.

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Posted: 17 December 2006 at 8:42am | IP Logged
Part 1 on page 1
Part 2 on page  3
Part 3 on page 6

ShivGauri Part 4

After Anupam leaves the room, Shiv goes to dadi's room.
Shiv: Dadi?
Dadi: Haan Shiv.
Shiv walks into the room.
Dadi: Kuch kaam tha Shiv?
Shiv: Haan dadi. Kal mein Guruji ko milne gaya tha.
Dadi: Sab teek hai na Shiv?
Shiv: Haan dadi, lekin Gurujine kaha ki humme Gaurike liya ek pooja karna padengi. Tho mein soch rahithi ki kya aap mere madath karengi?
Dadi: Haan Shiv, yeh koi poochneki baath hai kya?
Shiv: Thanx dadi!!!

Shiv goes back to the room, and Gauri is brushin her hair and sees Shiv thru the mirror and she smiles at him. Shiv comes and hugs her from behind.
Shiv: Mujhe chod kar jarahi ho?
Gauri smiles even more: Haan.
Shiv: Teekay lekin jaldi wapas aana.
Shiv starts kissin her neck. Suddenly dadi walks in.
Dadi: Shiv beta..
Dadi sees them romancin starts blushin and turns around. When ShivGauri hears dadi's voice, Shiv moves away from Gauri and Gauri jumps.  ShivGauri are both blushing,
Shiv: Kya hua dadi??Kuch kaam tha?
Dadi(blushing and not lookin at them, lookin at the ceiling): Woh...Woh Shiv, thumne pooja kab rekna ha, yeh tho bathaya nahi.
Shiv: Kal raklai dadi??
Dadi: Teekay, mein sabki indzaar karthi hoon.
Shiv: Haan dadi, Gurujine kaha ki woh aaj ayengi.
Dadi: Teekay.(And she leaves and on her way closes the doorWink)
Shiv turns and looks at Gauri. And both of them starts smilin. Shiv puts his hands forward.  Gauri comes forward and hugs him.
Gauri: Shiv, dadi konsi poojakey baray mein baath kar rahi thi?
Shiv: Woh thumhari dosh jaane keliya Gurujine thumahareliye pooja reknekeliya kaha tha.
Gauri: Aap Gurujise mila?
Shiv: Haan, meine usse kal milatha.
Gauri: Aur kya kaha ussene?
Shiv: Yeh ki, meri kundalise thumahari kundali ka dosh midgayi, phirbhi ek pooja rekne keliya kaha tha.
Gauri smiles at him.
Gauri: Shiv meine apki kapade bahar rakhi hain. Aap kapade badhal dhijiye, mein chalo?
Shiv: Teekay, bye.
He kisses her.  Gauri leaves.

Later Gauri and kaya comes back. Shiv was sittin with Ipshitha, and both looked really tired.
Kaya: Hi jeeju!!!
Shiv: Hi Kaya!!!
Gauri: Aap office nahi gaya?
Shiv: Kuch kaam tha.
Gauri: Kya kaam??
Shiv: Kuch kaam tha, phir Guruji bhi agayithi, tho useke saath, kal ki pooja ki baremein baath kar rahi thi.
Gauri: Teekay.
Kaya leaves, and tht time Anupam walks in.
Anupam: Hello every1(and suddenly sees Ipshtiha and runs and sits next to her and Shiv rolls his eyes.)Hi Ipshitha!!!
Ipshitha with no interest: Hi, (she looks at ShivGauri) mein chalthi hoon.
Ipshitha gets up and leaves, and Anupam also gets up to go.
Shiv: Dada, aapse kuch zarrori bath karnethi.
Anupam looks at Shiv helplessly: Now??
Shiv: Haan!!
Anupam sits down, and sadly watches Ipshitha leavin.
Anupam: Wht is it?
Shiv: U asked me to help u woo Ipshitha ri8?
Anupam: Yeah!!!
Shiv: Okay from now onwards, ignore her!!!
Anuapm gets shocked:WHAT?!?!She herself ignores me, and if i start ignorin her, then wht will happen??
Shiv: Just do wht I am tellin u. I know how to deal with women.
Gauri: Aapne kuch kaha, meine suna nahi.
Shiv: Woh Gauri......Woh....mein yuhi batha raha tha!!!
Gauri: Yuhi?????
Shiv: Haan...yuhi.
Gauri starts smiling.
Anupam: Kya Shiv thum Gaurise darr gayi??
Shiv blushes: Abhi abhi humari love story shuru huyi.
Shiv puts his hands around Gauri.She starts blushin.
Shiv looks at Anupam: Teekay dada, aap jayiye kuch kaam thana?
Anupam: Ab koi kaam nahi hai.Ipshitha tho chala gaya.
Shiv glares at him.

Palak and Maya who was watchin this gets irritated.
Maya: We shud put an end to this love story.
Palak: Yes u r right.

guys i gotta go. will continue soon and pls do comment.






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that was toooooooooooooooo good
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thanks for that.
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