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soooo cuteeee. if only our serial was this simple and lovely Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

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Posted: 14 December 2006 at 5:28am | IP Logged
i just wanted to thank all those ppl who read my ff.

mano786,gaurii_, sweet_jas, djkm, taran, ash9, static_chaos23, shananubis, simrin, kamna, crazy_about_u, yasmin20589, jaswargikoinahi, sesiaswe, racho8, snow white, preeti_saarrthi, angel_tia, lily_pik, kaira, heartbreakkid$, zoe89, rimli_remix rox, fida-cute, mata, pm4eva and  cola_gul-thank you so much for all ur comments and encouragement. will update the third part very soon.

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Posted: 16 December 2006 at 8:29am | IP Logged
Part 1 on Page 1
Part 2 on Page 3
ShivGauri Part 3

Gauri looks at Shiv in suprise and then starts blushing. Shiv leans
on the door and looks at her and give a naughty smile. Suddenly
 Gauri remembers abt Vivan and Kaya.
She looks at Shiv's eyes and starts blushin again and
looks down and says.
Gauri: Woh, Kaya aur Vivan??
Shiv: Mein undono ko Ghar bejdiya. Tho chale......
Gauri slowly starts walkin, and Shiv just stands behind her and
watches her walk. Gauri enters the room and turns and looks at
Shiv, and smiles at him. Shiv slowly walks in and turns and
locks the door and again lean on the door and looks at Gauri,
and gives a lazy smile.
Gauri starts feelin consious and starts blushin.
Shiv slowly starts walking towards Gauri, mere pyaar ki umar,
 starts playin in the background.Shiv goes next to Gauri and
puts his hand on her cheeks and kisses her forehead, then her
eyes and her cheeks and her lips. Then Shiv carries Gauri to bed,
then they *ahem* *ahem*Embarrassed.

Next day morning

Gauri is still sleepin and Shiv is watchin her sleep. Gauri wakes
up and sees Shiv lookin at her with all his love in his eyes and
she smiles at him.
Gauri: Aisa kyun dekrahi ho?
Shiv: Tum sauthe hue bohut sundar lakthi ho.
Shiv kisses her, and puts his hands around her.
Shiv: Acha yeh bathao, u were smilin in ur sleep,
(and in all SHIV KAPOOR arrogance he asks)Dreamin abt me???
Gauri starts blushin. Hides her face on his chest.Shiv starts
laughin, and hugs her tightly.
After sometime Gauri starts gettin up.
Shiv: Where r u goin?
Gauri: To get ready. I promised Kaya, tht we will go and meet
Devikaji today morning.
Shiv: Go later,.Now u stay here with me.
Gauri: Here??Wht will we do here?
Shiv with his naughty smile: AS IF YOU DON'T KNOW.
Gauri blushes.
After sometime Gauri starts gettin up.Shiv stops her.
Shiv: Don't go.
Gauri: Kaya will be waitin for me.

Gauri gets up, Shiv holds her hand, and starts singin:

abhee naa jaao chhodakar, ke dil abhee bharaa nahee
He pulls Gauri to the bed, Gauri sits on the bed and starts pullin
her hand.

abhee abhee to aayee ho, bahaar ban ke chhaayee ho

Shiv gets up and starts kissing her neck.
hawaa zaraa mahak to le, nazar zaraa bahak to le
ye shaam dhal to le zaraa, ye dil sammal to le zaraa
mai thodee der jee to loo, nashe ke ghoont pee to loo
abhee to kuchh kahaa nahee, abhee to kuchh sunaa naheen

Gauri finally gets up from the bed, and turns and looks at Shiv
sitaare jilameelaa utte, charaag jagamagaa ute
bas ab naa mujko tokanaa, n badhke raah rokanaa

She bends and kisses Shiv on his cheeks and then smiles at him.
agar main ruk gayee abhee, to jaa n paaoongee kabhee
yahee kahoge tum sadaa, ke dil abhee naheen bharaa
jo khatm ho kisee jagah, ye ayesaa silasilaa naheen

Shiv gets up from the bed, and make a cute beggin face
abhee naheen abhi naheen

Gauri shakes her head
naheen naheen, naheen naheen

Gauri starts walkin backwards, and Shiv starts walkin towards
abhee naa jaao chhodakar, ke dil abhee bharaa naheen

Suddenly Shiv puts his hand forward and Gauri starts running
adhuree aans chhod ke, adhuree pyaas chhod ke

Shiv runs behind her,
jo roj yoon hee jaaogee, to kis tarah nibhaaogee

and catches her
ke zindagee kee raah me, jawaan dilon kee chaah me
kaee makaam aayenge, jo hum ko aajamaayenge

Shiv puts both his hands on her waist and sings
buraa naa maano baat kaa, ye pyaar hain gilaa nahee
haan...yahee kahoge tum sadaa, ke dil abhee bharaa nahee

And Shiv Kapoor takes her to bed.
Haan.. dil abhee bhara naheen
naheen naheen naheen naheen

Much later ShivGauri reaches Kapoor house.When Gauri walks in
Kaya was waitin for her.
Kaya: Didi, aap kaha the??I was waitin for u.
Before Gauri cud  say anythin Shiv says: Y, wht happend Kaya??
Kaya: Woh jeeju hum naniko milen jaanewalatha.
Shiv gives a shocked look: Kamal ho Gauri thum ne mujhe
bathaya tak bhi nahi, ki  Kaya thumhari indizaar karahi thi
He just shakes his head.
Gauri: Lekhin meine tho aapko bathayathana?
Shiv gives a curious: Mujhe???Kab??Aur meine kya kaha?
Gauri: Woh jab...woh...(she starts blushin)
Shiv starts grinning.
Gauri looks at Kaya: Mein abhi aya Kaya.
Gauri walks off, and Shiv follows her. They go to their room,
and sees tht it is cleaned.
Shiv: Yeh kisne clean kiya??Tumne??
Gauri: Nahi tho.
Shiv: Phir kisne?
"Humne." Anupam and Ipshitha walks in. Gauri smiles at them.
Shiv: Dada apne?
Anupam: Yeh clean kar rahatha, tho meine uski madath ki.
Ipshitha gives an irritated look.
Anupam: Gauri, get ready fast, Kaya was waitin for u since
mornin.
Gauri: Haan mein abhi ayi.
Gauri goes to the bathroom, and Ipshitha leaves the room.
Anupam looks at Shiv and smiles: Tho??
Shiv: Kya???
Anupam with his eyes points to the bathroom. And Shiv starts
blushin.Anupam starts laughin.
Anupam: I am so happy for u,Shiv.
Shiv smiles at him, and they hug.
Anupam: Ab mujhe bhi shaadhi karna hai.
Shiv: Kisse?
Anupam gives an irritated look: Ipshtihase aur kisse?
Shiv smiles at him: Happily married, is a nice feelin.
Anupam: Shiv thum mere madhath karona pls?
Shiv: Mein????
Anupam makes cute faces.
Shiv starts shakin his head:No.
Shiv turns and walkin towards his cupboard.
Anupam: Don't forget, mere wajaise Gaurine tujhe shaadhi
kiya.
Shiv turns and gives an irritated look: Okay, but u will
have to do wht i say.
Anupam: Done.
Anupam turns and walks off and says to himself: Okay, tht
one will always workWink.


I gotta go, will update soon. Pls do comment guys.
 


Edited by shivgauri - 16 December 2006 at 8:33am

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very nice Clap
cont. soon....

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awwwwww such a cute part Embarrassed it brought a smile 2 my face pls cntinu sn Big smile

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really cute part Embarrassed
continue soon

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awwww so cuteeeeeeeeee....

shiv singing was the best partt... Embarrassed

keep up the good work...

continue soon... Clap

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