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Karam Apnaa Apnaa

ShivGauri(Fanfic) End updated on Pg 51 (Page 3)

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Posted: 12 December 2006 at 12:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by yasmin20589

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Where Is Gauri Asking Shiv To Go With Her??

check out the last 3 lines in 1st part of this FFSmile

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Posted: 12 December 2006 at 2:48am | IP Logged
whoa LOL LOL gauri ordering shiv to go with her!.....tht's awesome LOL .....plzz continue soon Smile
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Posted: 12 December 2006 at 3:55am | IP Logged
this is good
but the last part is funny
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Posted: 12 December 2006 at 5:32am | IP Logged
thank you so much guys Smile !!!!!
i will try write the second part very soon.
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Posted: 13 December 2006 at 6:33am | IP Logged
Part 1 on page 1
ShivGauri Part 2
Gauri turns and looks at Shiv and says
Gauri: Apna saman bandlo, aur chalo mere saath.
Shiv gets the shock of his life and Maya literally has her mouth open.Shocked
Shiv: Gauri tum yeh kya kehrahi ho?
Gauri: Meine kaha apna saman bandlo aur mere saath chalo.
Shiv just stares at Gauri.
Dadi: Gauri beta yeh kya
Gauri: Pls dadi aap beeach mein math boliye.
She looks at Shiv.
Gauri: Aaj tak, mere zindagi ki saare faisla doosrone liya, aur mujhe isse koi shikayath nahi hai. Lakin jo faisla aapne mereliya liya hai, woh mujhe manzoor nahi hai. Meine faisla liya hai mein apni zindagi apni tarikesai jeeyungi.
Shiv just looks at her in disbelief.
Gauri: Mein aapse pyar karthi hoon.
Shiv feels his resolve breakin. He takes up all his courage and grabs Gauri with both his hands and looks into her eyes and screams: Mein tumse pyar nahi karthi. Aur kabhi nahi karonga. Mein kisi aur se pyar karthi hoon. Suna thumne?
Gauri smiles with tears in her eyes: Jo aapne kaha woh bhi suna aur jo aapki ankhein kaha wohbhi suna.
Shiv leaves her and looks at her.
Gauri: Aapki ankhein yehi kehraha hai ki aap mujhse kitna pyar karthi hoon. I love you Shiv. Mein aapke bina jeenahi saktha.
Shiv: Gauri....
Gauri: Nahi, meine faisla liya hai ki, mein aapke saath jeeyungi.
Shiv: Tum mere saath kaisa jeeyungi Gauri, mere saath rahkar har pal tum mauth ki kareeb jaongi.
Gauri: Mein marnase nahi dartha Shiv, lekin aapke bina jeenese datha hoon.
Shiv starts feelin helpless.
Gauri: Agar mere zindagi mein sirf ek hi pal hi baki hoon, mein woh pal aapke saath bithana chahthi hoon.

Gauri hugs Shiv and starts cryin.(Mere pyar ki umar male sad version is playin in the background) Tears starts rollin down Shiv's eyes, and he didnt know wht to do. Whether to hug Gauri or push her away. In the end he hugs her.

Nikila goes to them and touches Gauri. Gauri turns and looks at her.
Gauri: Jo kuch aapne mere saath kiya uskeliya mein aapko kabhi maaf nahi karpaoungi aur aapke wajaise Shiv mere zindagi mein aaya yeh soch kar mein aapko kabhi nafrath nahi karpaongi.

Nikila: Mein tumse sachayi bathana chahthi hoon Gauri.
Gauri: Kaisi sachayi?
Nikila: Ki Shivke kundali mein koi dosh nahi hai.
Shiv: Aap yeh kya kehrahi hai??
Nikhila: Haan Shiv, meine tumse joot bola. Sachayi yeh hai ki Gauri ki kundali mein dosh hai.
Every1 looks at Nikila in shock.
Shiv starts gettin scared: Kaisi dosh???
Nikhila: Yaad hai Gauri uss din Guruji thumhari kundali mangatha.
Gauri nodes.
Nikhila: Aur Gurujine tumhari kundali dekh kar mujhe patha ki, thumhari kundali mein koi dosh hai.Aur Gurujine hi kaha ki woh dosh ko jaane keliye tumhai aisi insaanse shaadhi karna hoga jiske kundali iss dosh ko dhoor karsake. Aur Shashank kundali yeh nahi karsaktha tha. Shivki kundali tumhari jaan bacha saaktha tha. Lekin uss waqt Shiv tumse nafrath karthi thi aur Shiv insab bathom par vishwas nahi karthatha, aur tumne hamesha mene apna beti mana hai, I cudn't have loved u more if u were my own daughter.  Aur tumhari jaan bachanekiliya mere paas aur koi chara nahi tha. Isliye meine Shivse joot bola, aur tumhai shaadhi karne keliye majboor kiya.

Shiv: U r lyin. Aap yeh sab isliye kehrahi hai, kyun ki aap nahi jaanthi ki Gauri mujhe chod kar chali jayiye.
Nikhila: Nahi beta, yeh hai sach.
Shiv: Agar yeh sach hai, tho aap Shashank ko kidnap kyun kiya, yeh koshish kyun ki, ki Gauriko kabhi sachayi pathanahi chahiya.
Nikhila: Kyun ki mein thum hai kona nahi chahthi thi, Shiv.
Shiv looks at her in disbelief.
Nikhila: Agar Gauri ko sachayi patha chale, tho sabse pehle woh tume akar bathathi, aur mein jaanthi hoon ki tum aur Palak yahi soch thi hoon ki hum thum dono se zyadha Gaurise pyar karthe hai. Aur tum yehi sochega ki Gauri ko bachanekeliya mein tumahari isthamal kiya.  Lekin mereliye tum theen ek jaisi thi, shiv.

Nikhila hugs Shiv, and Shiv hugs her back. And Gauri starts cryin. Shiv looks at Gauri, and she smiles at him, Shiv leaves Nikhila and goes to Gauri.
Shiv: I love you Gauri.
Gauri: i love you Shiv.
And they hug, later every1 starts huggin each other, except for Maya and Palak, who just roll their eyes.
After sometime Shiv and Gauri goes to bring Alok and all back to the house.
Shiv and Gauri in the car. Shiv looks at Gauri and Gauri looks at him and smiles. Shiv puts his hand on Gauri and holds her hand. Gauri starts blushing, and when Shiv sees her blushing, he smiles at her( and u know our Shivy's million dollor smile). He takes her hand and kisses it, and Gauri starts blushing even more. Shiv starts laughin.
After they reach Alok's place, atfirst Alok was angry when he sees Shiv, as he didn't know tht Gauri had gone to Shiv, later Gauri tells every1 the truth. And another huggin section happens. And Shiv convices Alok to go back with them.

Later Alok and all reach Kapoor house and after Alok says sorry to Mahen and Nikhila, and a lot of huggin section happens.And everyone's happy. Shiv and Gauri go to their bedroom. They open the door and sees the current condition of their room. Gauri who was standin next to Shiv puts her arms around his waist and hugs him side ways. Shiv puts his arms around her and smiles at her. And suddenly some idea strucks Shiv.
Shiv: Mujhe kuch zaroori kam hai Gauri, mein thodi der mein aathi hoon.
Gauri smiles and Shiv walks off. Suddenly he stops and comes back to Gauri and kisses her on her forehead and goes. And Gauri as usual blushes.

Later Gauri calls up Devika and tells her the truth. Devika feels bad for wht she did, but Gauri consoles her and promises to meet her the next day with Kaya.

At night Shiv gets back home. After they have dinner, Shiv goes Gauri who was talkin to Kaya and Vivan.
Shiv: Gauri, hum ek drive per chale.
Gauri: Ab??
Shiv: Haan, chalo.
Gauri turns to Vivan and Kaya: Tum dono bhi avo na.
Kaya: Hum??
Before Gauri can say anythin Shiv says: Agar tum dono ko kuch kaam ho tho nahi aana.
Vivan gives a mischevious smile: Hume kya kaam ho saktha hai. Chalo Kaya him chalthe hai. Jab Bhabhi  itni pyar se bularahi ho, mana kese karenge?
Shiv gives an angry look at Vivan.

Later they all go out. And Shiv takes them to a hotel.
Gauri: Hum yehan kyun ayi ho?
Shiv: Mujhe Manchan se mila hai. Tum bhi avo na Gauri.
Shiv and Gauri gets down and starts walkin.
Shiv suddenly stops.
Shiv: Gauri, ek minute, mein apni mobile kar mein bhool ayi. Tum yehi raho mein abhi aayi.
Shiv goes back and tells Vivan somethin and comes back. Shiv and Gauri gets inside the hotel. Suddenly Gauri remembers the hotel.
Gauri: Shiv yeh wahi hotel hai na, jaha humne shaadhi ke din aaya tha??
Shiv looks surprised.
Shiv: Haan!!!U r right.
They take the elevator and goes infront of a room and Shiv looks at Gauri.
Shiv: It seems Gauri tht I owe u somethin.
Gauri: Owe me somethin????
Shiv opens the door and the room was decorated with flowers.
Shiv smiles and looks at Gauri: Looks like I still owe u a weddin night Mrs Kapoor.

Edited by shivgauri - 16 December 2006 at 7:21am

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Posted: 13 December 2006 at 6:35am | IP Logged
Hey guys pls do comment, and i didn't want to make Nikhila and Mahen negative, 'coz i like them. My story is not a love story, but mainly abt gauri's life with Shiv in Kapoor house, and in my story, her brother and sister-in-law are not there with them at present.

Edited by shivgauri - 13 December 2006 at 7:49am
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Posted: 13 December 2006 at 6:39am | IP Logged
great work, now if only we can somehow get ekta to read this amazing scipt....mmmm...lol, very gd
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Posted: 13 December 2006 at 7:50am | IP Logged
Thank you lily_pik and kaira Smile !!!!

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