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Hey I was feeling bored, so i decided to write a fanfic.This is my second attempt so pls bear with me. This starts from where kaa stopped last thursday. and my hindi is very poor so pls forgive me for all this mistakes.

Part 1 on Page 1
Part 2 on Page 3
Part 3 on Page 6
Part 4 on Page 8
Part 5 on Page 9
Part 6 on Page 12
Part 7 on Page 14
Part 8 on Page 17
Part 9 on Page 18
Part 10 on Page 19
Part 11 on Page 21
Part 12 on Page 22
Part 13 on Page 24
Part 14 on Page 25
Part 15 on Page 26
Part 16 on Page 27
Part 17 on Page 28
Part 18 on Page 29
Part 19 on Page 30
Part 20 on Page 31
Part 21 on Page 33
Part 22 on Page 34
Part 23 on Page 35
Part 24 on Page 36
Part 25 on Page 37
Part 26 on Page 39
Part 27 on Page 40
Part 28 on Page 41
Part 29 on Page 42
Part 30 on Page 44
Part 31 on Page 45
Part 32 on Page 46
Part 33 on Page 47
Part 34 on Page 48
Part 35 on Page 49
Part 36 on Page 50
End on Page 51

Part 1

Gauri is in standin near the window in their bedroom and lookin out the window and thinking abt all the time she spent with Shiv.And in the background mere pyaar ki umar female sad version is playin.

Flash back scene

*Gauri tellin Shiv tht she loves him.
*Dhothi Scene
*Shiv standin up for Gauri against Shyla chachi and Vivan.
*Their first dance.
*Shiv wippin off cake from her face and the gifts he gave
*Both of them in the jungle, their first hug. Shiv sayin sorry.
* Shiv sayin sorry again.
*All the times they hugged
*Shiv standin up for Gauri durin Nitesh incident.
*Shiv tellin her to sleep on the bed.
*Shiv catchin her when she is abt to fall.
*Shiv tellin her to leave him and tellin her tht she will get hurt in the end.
*The bet
*Their marriage
*Their firstnight, Shiv screamin at her tellin her tht he will never love.
*Shiv tellin her to go with Shashank.
*Shiv tellin Gauri to run away be4 the marriage.
*Shiv tellin her the raaz behind their marriage.

Shiv enters the room and sees Gauri standin near the window. He goes and stands next to her and looks out.
Shiv: I am sorry Gauri. Mein janthi hoon, mene thumahara dil thoda hai, thumhara vishwasthoda hai. I always wanted to tell u the truth, but never had the courage to tell u.
Gauri: Kya isliye aapne mujhse hamesha talak manga?
Shiv nodes and says: Isliye meine Shashank ko yeha layatha.Because I cudn't tell u the truth.Be4 I didn't want to tell u abt my weakness and later I didn't want to see the hatred in ur eyes for me.
Gauri turns and looks at Shiv: Mein aapse nafrath nahi karthi Shiv.
Shiv turns and looks at Gauri.Gauri looks into Shiv's eyes and says
Gauri: Mein aaj bhi aapse behat pyar karthi hoon.
Gauri hugs Shiv, but suddenly Shiv pushes her away from him and looks into her eyes and says.
Shiv: Mein thumhari pyar ki layak nahi hoon Gauri.
Gauri: Shashank ne mujshe pyar ka juta natak kiya, thaki woh mujhe mandap per chod kar chela jasktha aur aapse meri shaadhi ho thi, aur aapne mujhse hamesha talak mangthi rahi thaki mein aapse dhoor jakar jee sakhu. Shiv ..
Shiv puts his hand on Guari's mouth
Shiv: Pls Gauri don't say anythin more.Bas thume yehase jaana hi hoga.
Gauri: Mein nahi Jaaongi.
Shiv: No, u have to go.
Gauri: I can't live without u Shiv.
Shiv takes Gauri's hand and puts it on his head.
Shiv: Thume meri kasam Gauri, thume iss ghar se jaanahi hoga.
After sayin this Shiv just walks off, Gauri sits down on the floor and starts cryin.Shiv sees Alok and Kaya standin on the doorway.
Shiv looks at Alok and says: Hosake tho mujhe maf kardhena Baba.

After sometime Gauri leaves, Shiv goes back to their bedroom(mere pyar ki umar male sad version is playin in the background) and watches Gauri leavin thru the window and a tear rolls down his eyes. He turns back and sees their wedding photo lyin on the bed and picks it up and burst out cryin.

A little while later Anupam walks in and sees Shiv lookin at the photo and goes and sits next to Shiv on the floor.

Shiv: Jab Gauri meri zindagi mein aayi mein usse zindagise dhoor nikalna chahthithi, kyunki mein nahi chahthi ki meri wajese uski zindagi kathremein ho. Isle meine hamesha uski dil thoda, uski mazaq udayi. Aur jab mujhe patha chala ki meri Gauri kitni achi hai, mein usse galdi bachana chahthatha aur meine socha mein ye sab isliye kar raho kyunki mein guilty feel kar rahatha, lakhin aaj mujhe patha chala ki mein Gaurise kitna pyar kartha hoon. Mein yeh bhi nahi jaanthi kabse mein usse pyar karne laga.janthe ho dada, Gaurine mujhse kahi bar kaha ki woh mujhe kitna pyar kartha hai, lakin mein usse ek bar bhi nahi kehpayi. Aur ab kabhi nahi keh paonga. Mein apni kushiyonkeliye Gauri ki zindagi ke saath nahi kel sakthi.

Anupam: Thum dono ki iss haal keliye kahina kahi mein bhi ek waje hoon.
Shiv turns and looks at Anupam.
Anupam: Meri kehne par hi Gaurine thumse shaadhi kiya
and tells Shiv how he first met Gauri in the park.
After hearin everythin,
Shiv: Usi park mein pehli bar Gaurine mujse kaha ki woh mujse kitna pyar  kartha hai.
Shiv thinks abt the time he spent with Gauri

Flashblack with meri pyar ki umar sad male version in the background

* Gauri tellin him she loves him.
* Gauri fightin for him in the jungle.
* Gauri tellin him abt her love in the bedroom.
*  Dhothi scene.
* Window scene.
* Dance.
* Gauri dancin and whistlin.
* All the time they hugged.
* Their marriage,
* Gauri gettin shot.
* Gauri in the fire.

2 days later

Shiv is walkin around like a lost soul and doesnt talk to any1, Nikila and Mahen tries to talk to him, but he just walks off when he sees them. Most of the time he sits in his room and looks at his weddin pic and think abt Gauri.

Meantime Gauri is in another house, which Alok had rented and was cryin all day thinkin abt Shiv.
Kaya walks into her room, with food.
Kaya: Didi kuch kao.U haven't eaten anythin for 2days.
Gauri: Mujhe book nahi hai.
Kaya: Jab tak aap aise betai rahengi.
Gauri starts cryin.
Kaya: Mein jaanthi hoon aap jeejuse kitna pyar kartha hai. Lakin didi....
Gauri: Janthe ho Kaya, meine zindagimein pehli bar Shiv ke ankomein mere liye pyar dekha, jab woh mujhse ghar chod ne keliya kehraha tha.
Kaya: Di...
Gauri: Mein Shiv ke bina nahi jeesaktha.
Kaya: Lekin di
Gauri: Kya thum yeh chathe hai ki mein Shiv ke bina har pal hazar moth maru, ya jab tak jeerahi hoon kushi jeeyu???(Kaya doesn't say anythin)Meri kushi sirf Shiv ke paas hai Kaya.
Kaya: Aap jeejuke paas wapas jao di mein aapke yeh haal nahi dekhsaktha.
Gauri: Shivne mujhe kasam mein bandha hai.
Kaya gets angry: Kabtak apki zindagi dusre faisla lenge???Kabhi baba, kabhi Mahen Uncle, kabhi Nikila aunty, kabhi jeeju.Aapne zindagi apne thari ke se jeeo didi.
Gauri just looks at Kaya.

Next day Kapoor house

Gauri walks in and sees every1 sittin in the sittin room, and Shiv is walkin down the stairs. He sees her and stops halfway, and just keep lookin at her. Gauri turns and looks at dada and dadi.
Gauri: Mein apne ek cheese yehan chod kar jayatha, woh lene keliya aya hoon.
Shiv walks down and stand next to Gauri.
Maya: Oh Gauri, just take all ur things and pls don't forget anythin, and keepin comin here to get it. I know u r  used  to our  life  style  and richness and all.
Shiv gets angry:MAYA  AUNT !!!!  JUST  SHUT UP!!!
Gauri  continues to ignore Shiv and looks  at  dada and dadi.
Dadi: Ha Gauri, thumein jobi lena hai lelo.
Gauri turns and looks at shiv and says.
Gauri: Apna saman bandlo, aur chalo mere saath.


Edited by shivgauri - 29 July 2007 at 5:25am

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Posted: 11 December 2006 at 7:52am | IP Logged
hey ppl pls do comment, and so sorry for all the grammer mistakes.
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Posted: 11 December 2006 at 7:57am | IP Logged
Wonderful Clap ....Awesom Clap Really good Clap
I like the way u wrote it in...Very good Clap
Keep Rocking Wink
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Posted: 11 December 2006 at 8:26am | IP Logged
Awesomee !!!!!!! Clap
continue soon !!
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Posted: 11 December 2006 at 9:40am | IP Logged
WOW..it's very nice. good work.
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Posted: 11 December 2006 at 10:05am | IP Logged
dat woz gr8...continue Clap Clap Smile
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its really gud!continue sn!
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omg...she is asking shiv to come with her?????
LOL
omg..nw thats sumthing i have never seen in a FF b4
i cnt even imagine that LOL

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