OS: Keep It Simply Sweet - Page 5

Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by meshmesh


Amazing!! πŸ‘
Loved it, it was so sweet. 
I was surprised how hesitant Suraj was in telling her his feelings I thought he was more confident. 
Chakor is so innocent, when he told her he wants to meet her parents, I wanted to scream at her to say yes.
Can't believe she kissed him first. πŸ˜†

I don't think she's fragile, may be lacking in confidence. To be fair, Suraj didn't make his intentions clear, she thought he was toying with her.
Thank you so much!
I'm so happy that you loved it!
Just wanted to try a contract in their characterisations and actions. And I think it clicked as I can see you all like it!

Yep! This Suraj was a bit confusing time to time.
I think if I was in her place I would have thought the same. LOL
Edited by maithu_ - 6 years ago
Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by vk1nonly


Phew...
Really I am tired of searching good words in my dictionary to define your work and appreciate your writing. It was really a cute one( sorry not intelligent enough to have a good word).
Throughout I felt Suraj is the game played but I was like aaaw when Chakor kissed him.
Throughout I felt Suraj pretended to be lusty and may be lusted on her which will later convert to love but I was like aaaw when he refused to kiss her in front of everyone.
I simply loved it and I think I have another content that I can use to refresh my mind.
Loads of love.
Hey! A simple word of appreciation is more than everything dear!
So it means a lot to me and each and every word are my boost! ;-)
I'm really so happy that you loved it and enjoyed it!

Thanks for your love and love you too dear!❀️
Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by amrutha131


It's so sweet and beautiful Maithu πŸ‘πŸΌ
Never expected Chakor to kiss first and their cheek kisses are so cuteπŸ˜†

Thanks a lot dear!
Glad you liked it and find those kisses cute!
Me too! Never expected Chakor to do that but she just showed us who she is in that one simple action LOL
Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by vvv


Awesome
fantastic
fabulous 
you stole my heart girl!!!
i loved it so so much
actually it was simply sweet
πŸ‘πŸΌ
WOW! Thank you so so so much dear!
And I can say, you all filled my heart with happiness when I read these comments!
Glad you loved it and enjoyed reading it!
Thank you once again!
Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by sumsukor


very very sweet

I would say simply superb!!


Nice the way Suraj is appearing as a playboy but serious in his own ways!

Chakor... the strong girl,,  seems to be vulnerable with Suraj.

Good one though
really enjoyed it
Thank you so much dear!
Happy that you enjoyed this OS!
Your words brought a smile!
Thank you!
Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by chasa


Aww..really enjoyable...nice one maithu
Thanks a lot dear!
Glad you enjoyed this OS!
Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by aishagup


awwdorable and sweet!!
thanks for writing and sharing.

Thank you so much yaar!
It's fully my pleasure dear!
Happy that you enjoyed it!
Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by appledesire


Perfectoo...

I loved it...

Love @ first site.
Kiss = keep it simply sweet..

Superb dee..

Again.. thnx a ton.. for beautiful wrk..
Gracias!(Thank you in Spanish!)
Happy that you loved this OS!
Thanks a ton to you dear for being here and appreciating my work!
Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by taahir004


This was just a Phenomenal piece of work 
I loved every bit of it 

Suraj at first I thought of him as someone that is arrogant and a total jerk like telling Chakor the kiss on her first day was just a bet then he always staring at her I mistook that gesture of his for trying to make her uncomfortable but instead it seems like he was drawn towards her 
his actions always told of an untold emotion towards her though he never voiced out anything but he certainly held emotions for her that carried care and concern too 
the trip where he dedicated the song to her I felt he was letting Chakor know about his deep feelings for her 
then he confesses that it was never a bet which certainly means he is very much interested in her 
and I so love how he calls her Sweety 
Suraj taking photos of his Sweety that is cool and it does seem like he is serious as he ask her can he meet her parents okay Chakor is confused as she believes because after college they both will go separate ways but his talks say differently 
now the truth or dare game which indeed benefits both Suraj and Chakor though I think its probably difficult for girs to just kiss a guy especially when she knows she has feelings for him 
both kissed and Suraj confessed he loves her Chakor while she too confesses her love just that moment itself was priceless now both comfortable enough to speak through everything now both are a couple and Chakor no longer has to be sad or in pain thinking that the guy she likes was just playing her 
Thank you will be less to say for these beautiful words of yours yaar!
So a biggy big HUG!

I can see that this Suraj has got a special for him!
And I'm happy for that!

You really said it superbly how Chakor felt and whom Suraj is!
Nothing to say!
I love reading your comments!
Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by Charaju


Sweet! Superb, fantastic...
No words to describe πŸ‘
Thanks a lot dear!
All these sweet words means a lot to me!

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