Oka Chance Istava PrAnu FF- Jai Vennala part 3B page 8 - Page 9

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Posted: 6 years ago
Waiting..aa.a.a
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Posted: 6 years ago
Hii
Plz update the next part...
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Posted: 6 years ago
Guys I'm really sorry for such a long delay. I just got caught up with something. I'll be back with two parts by 2nd of June. Really sorry.. It was too long. 
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Posted: 6 years ago
Loved this, Rashmi! :D Eagerly waiting for the next/last (?) part. :)
I loved that moment when Jai gets Vennela's phone number - soo smooth! "Oh, my phone was in my pocket all along!" - you sly fellow! :P

And on a road trip to Ooty! Loved it. :) Could picture the whole thing, especially with those lovely edits you made.

And aw, poor Vennela's back story. Loved that Jai was there to comfort here. Looking forward to their happy ending! ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 6 years ago
Wah! What an amazing start! I could sit all day just staring at that cover pic. One of my favourite scenes from the movie! 

Part 1 - LOL! That conversation in the cafeteria, was SO uncomfortable. Trust me, I blushed. And felt embarrassed too! But that "where's my phone?" tactic made me wonder... was he really looking for his phone? LOL! I'm reminded of parts from the movie where Jai would steal secret glances at Vennala, and be quick enough to look away when she turns to him. Well, who's he kidding? She knows what he's up to!!! 

Part 2 - This time, it's Vennala's turn. She ends the conversation pretty fast and sends a THUD down Jai's guts. LOL. Smart play! I'm simply loving this! 

Part 3 A - That cover just blew my mind! One look and it gave a cinematic view of their trip to Ooty! Good one! It was fun to see Vennala get jealous. And I love it when she smacks him over the head. Umma.

3 B - What an adorable part! The way he decided to wish her was so aww... Vennala's past is haunting. 

3 C- Looking forward to it!!!

Do continue soon. Don't lose interest and back out. We're here to fire you up! Hehehe! 
Edited by RyReyFics - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Superb Part.
I m just fan of Prabhas Anushka...Mirchi.. super movie..
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Posted: 6 years ago
Hi rashmi,

Awesome ff.. ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

With sweet and cute twist and turns going at a fast phase... Just love it ๐Ÿ˜Š

Especially the way he got her phone number is just brilliant... Naughty Jai...

Date trip to ooty... ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰

Keep updating... ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 6 years ago
Fantastic parts Rashmi๐Ÿ˜Š
The scenes between Jai and vennela were so beautifulโค๏ธ
Vennela's past is so sad๐Ÿ˜ญ
I liked how Jai was protective towards Vennela
Edited by Nonie12345 - 6 years ago