Fiction : ~Once Upon A Summer.~ (Page 12.) - Page 7

I'm touching heights of procastination with every passing day I swear. 🤔

You haven't updated in two months, so I didn't unres. 😆😆

Now, finally I'm here. 

The start was lovely. Sayali's hesitation on being on a date with Alan and her being involved with Jack than the man she's on date with was damn relatable.

Alan is the perfect gentleman, there's no doubt to that and I guess, Sayali even admired that about him. *Duh? We all do!*

He even tried his level best to make her comfortable but still, her being intimadated by his lavish lifestyle was both expected and justified.

I love how Sayali is strong and opinionated woman. Her thoughts on being able to support her family and be independent for herself is everyone of us. 👏👏

I like how Alan proposed Sayali without gol mol baatein but still, I feel he could've waited a little, like a couple of dates more. I mean, the girl just came out with you for the first time and you straight away proposed her.

Aisa nahi hota Senator Baba! 😆😆 

I guess he too is an adorable buddhuram when it comes to women like you know who. (No, it's not Voldemort) 😉😆

Again, the sensibility with which Sayali handled the situation was applaudable. 

Miss Ruby trying to seduce Ayedin with her OTT seduction. 🤣

And Ayedin-Steven's reaction to it. 🤣🤣🤣

It was hilarious.

Serwat seems like an interesting character. Though, she love both her sons dearly, she appears to be a class conscious woman. The troublemaker in Ayedin and Sayali's story along with Sr. Chatterjee. 🤔

Loved the update.

Update soon.

So Sayali was frank with Alan and he graciously accepted it...Great, now line clear for Ayedin   Not that would have  stopped him from pursuing her 😉  Curious to see Sayali's reaction when she comes to know of Ayedin's feelings 🤔

Awesome update love you lots 🤗 

I liked Siyali upfront view for Alien 

Jack was really sweet with her too 

Alen proposed Siyali and I loved how he put his point of view for this alliance 

Even what he said was exactly correct ... A normal man would obvious think this way 

Aby was irritated with his mother 

Her mother seems to be class conscious 

Let's see how this goes forward 

Thanks for the PM 

Continue soon 😊

Okay first of all a happy dance  

We've waited so long for this update 😃

Here goes my review of it (I'm kinda turning into that Rajeev Masand person 😆 ):

I love how Sayali is so normal, any girl can relate to her emotions and her gestures. Her hesitance of being on a date with Alan and interacting more with Jack was so natural. Same way her views on being independent and earning to support herself and the family, it shows that she's a traditional girl with a modern outlook towards things. And I absolutely love this about her. 

The date venue beneath the twinkling stars sounds so romantic 

Alan sounds like a thorough gentleman, the old world types; who have chivalry and manners in their blood. I like such men 😳 . He obviously sounded a little heartbroken when he talked of his divorce and the toll it took on Jack  . 

Though he did take it a little too far 🤣 . Ever heard of the 3-date rule Mr Alan?   I understand his desperation but dropping a nuclear missile on Sayali's head was too much too soon  

Sayali handled the entire situation so brilliantly 👏 . A standing ovation for the girl for all she said. She didn't mince words and conveyed everything amazingly well 👏👏

And Alan took her response really well. I too hope he finds someone as nice as him 😃

 

Meanwhile in another land,

A seductress trying to get her hands on Ayedin . His reaction to her gestures was so funny 😆, he was so un-interested in Ms Ruby 🤣

Steven's reaction was so us LMAO 🤣🤣

The boys having a loving family moment with their Mum was adorable. They seem like a cheerful bunch 😃. And that unified "Yup" to the Spaghetti question 😆. Save some for me too Ms Servat but without the meatballs 😳😆

The dinner and the marriage convo,such a relate-able topic of discussion 🤣. Servat and her high society jargon. So she'll be the Kebab Mein Haddi in our Ayedin/Sayali story. Ooh Can't wait for the real life Spaghetti and Meatball aka Sayali and Ayedin 

The end of the date was so fitting to the entire evening, sweet and subtle 😳

Sayali's sensibility is really praise-worthy at times. 😳 Lmao I cracked up at Ayedin & even Steven making faces on Ruby's OTT flirty actions. 🤣

Lo ji Ayedin's mother is so gonna be an interesting character 😆😆 I wanna read more of her. 😛

Thanks for the PM. 🤗 Update soon. :D

Shanocim Where art thou??

Sorry Sweetheart, have been busy with some stuff. <3

Will update soonest. 

Sorry sweetie, have been busy with some other stuff. <3

Will update soonest. 

I just couldn't believe its been 2 months 😆