~The Unfathomable Love. ~ part12 updated !(07/01/2018) pg 58 - Page 6

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Posted: 7 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: --Vrinda--

awesome update Appy ..jo family realy love her...jalal on the way to make villian pay for their deads...

please appy make joja meet soon

tnx for pm...update soon...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#52
Awesome dear
Loved it
So I can understand that Jodha is a Modern girl that lives with technology and things while Jalal is an old fashion boy
Seems to be so interesting
Continue soon dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
#53
Awesome chapter fear
Continue soon
Thxc 4r pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: --Vrinda--

tnx for pm...update soon...


Tnq dear..yep their family is really cute..yahh its Ja's action Tym..yes vl do it..n I'll update next parts till next Saturday..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: duhasaad

Awesome dear
Loved it
So I can understand that Jodha is a Modern girl that lives with technology and things while Jalal is an old fashion boy
Seems to be so interesting
Continue soon dear


vl surely do update soon..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#56
Part-3:-

~ India ~
The pleasant morning arise with chirping bird's, Cook-Cook of peahen and the sun providing a beautiful sunshine to plant's and tree's and a alarm for people to indicate end of their night. And in the mahal 2 men's are anxiously waiting for a message from their friends.
Surya:- Tumhe kya lagta h Mirza, Woh log theek honge? Unhone Sab pata Laga liya hoga ya Nhi.!?
Mirza:- Tum itna pareshaan Kyu ho rahe ho.?? Wo Jalal-Uddin-Mohammed h.!! Wo Ab tak toh apne dushmano ko dhul chata chuka hogya.
Mirza:- Haan.
Both raised their hands for their friends safety and for their successful mission.
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~Patna ~
The atmosphere in the court is filled with lots of tension and the King on the throne has dissatisfied and angry face.
Maharaja Yudhistiv:- Mahamantri Ji aap ne hamara paigham Agra pahuchaya tha ya Nhi??
Mahamantri:- Ji maharaj ,paigham kal hi Agra pahuch chuka tha.
Maharaja Yudhistiv:- phir Jalal Ka Koi jawab Kyu Nhi aaya??
Mahamantri:- pata Nhi maharaj .hosakta h unhone Koi zaruri kaam Ki wajah se Aapka paigham Na padha ho.!
Mantri1:- ya yeh bhi hosakta h Ki unhone aapka paigham padh Kar kahin phek diya ho?
Mantri2:- Ji maharaj mantri Ji(1) sahi keh rahe h.unhone Aapka paigham padh Kar kahin phek diya hoga taki unhe dugni(double) fasal deni Na pade Aur jab aap unhe pucho ge toh Woh keh denge Ki unhe Aapka paigham hi Na mila ho.!!
Maharaja Yudhistiv: - Toh theek h.Ab hum khud jalal ko iska anjam denge.
Hamare Agra Jane Ki tayyari kro.
But the court got disturbed by sudden Roar of our Lion
-"RUKIYE..!! AAP KO AGRA JANE KI ZAROORAT NAHI HAI.KYUKI HUM KHUD YAHA ACHUKE HAI. "
And Everyone turn towards the entrance of the court and there HE is
The great Jalal-Uddin-Mohammed in his lavish black jama embedded with real gold work and diamonds in it.the Pearls necklace hanging around his neck.One hand holding his sword whose sharp edge is sending shivers down the spine of enemies. And his other hand wrist clenched with anger. His raised Eyebrows and red flushy eyes expressing the range of anger with his stern face .This look of jalal was scaring people. Few were even planning to run ..
Maharaja Yudhistiv (With scared face,trying to be friendly with jalal):- Jalal hum aap hi Ka intezaar Kar rahe the.
Abdul:- Ji maharaj hum aap hi se Milne aae h.!
Maharaja Yudhistiv:- Aaplog bohat lambe safar se aae ho.Kuch kha pi lijiye phir Baat krenge..
Jalal:- Nahi hum sedha mudde par aate h.! Aap Ke logon ne hum par Yeh ilzaam lagay Ki humne fasal Nhi bheji Aur Ab dugna paisa Na dena pade Isliye aapke paigham Ka jawab Nhi diya..(Looking towards minister 1and minister 2 who were sweating down with fear)
Maharaja Yudhistiv:-(with confidence) Haan! Aapne apna wada toda Aur muhaede Ke hisab se Ab aap hume dugni fasal Aur rupiye denge.
Jalal:- uski zaroorat hi nahi padegi Maharaja.!!
Jalal claps twice and with this Abrar enters holding collar of 2 men's and jalal's men's holding few more men's.
Maharaja Yudhistiv:- Yeh Sab kya Hai jalal??
Jalal:- Hum abhi batate h.par isse Pehle aap apne 2 shubchintakon- maaf karna hamara matlab h 2 dagabazoo se milna Nhi chaho ge??
Maharaja yudhistiv:-(with confused and anxious face) zaroor..
Abrar leaves those two men's whom he was holding from collar ..And they go towards maharaja Yudhistiv
Men1:- maharaj Hame maaf kardijiyw..humne lalch mein aakar mantri Ji Ki Baat Maan li.
Men2:- Ji maharaj. .humne toh bas wahi kiya ho mantri Ji Nw karne ko kaha.
Maharaja yudhistiv:- hume Sab Kuch sach sach batao..

Flashback starts:-
Men1 &Men2:- bataiye mantri Ji ,aap ne Hume Yaha Kyu bulaya ( lonely place)
Mantri 1:- hum tumhe Ek zaroori kaam saump rahe h.
Mantri 2:- jis Ke liye tum Dono ko 2000 rupiye Aur thoda sa fasal Bhi muft milega.
Men1:- Acha..!!
Men2:- toh bataiye Hume kya karna hoga?
Mantri1:- Agra se Jo fasal Ki gadi Yaha ane wali h,use maharaja Yudhistiv tak pahuch ne mat do.
Mantri2:- Aur Woh fasal Ek gupt jagah chupa do.kisi ko pata Nhi chalna chahiye ki Agra se fasal achuki h.!
Men 1&2:- aap fikar mat kijiye mantri ji.hum kisi ko Bhi pata chalne Nhi denge Ki fasal aachuki h !
Flashback ends..

Maharaja yudhistiv:- gaddar,dhokebazo - sipahiyon giraftaar kardo insab ko.Aur karagaar mein daaldo.inhe toh hum baad mein sabak sikainge.
Those 4 men's and their supporters are taken to jail.
Maharaja yudhistiv:- jalal hume maaf kardo .hum in dhokebazo Ki baaton mein aagye.Aur Aapko saza dene jarahe the.!
Jalal(with painful expression):-Koi Baat Nhi maharaj.Hum aksar jin par sabse zyada bharosa Kate hai.wahi hamari peet par chura bhok te h.!
Maharaja yudhistiv:- Acha Ab tumlog Zara aram karlo.hum Tumhari qatirdari kare bagair Nhi bhejne wale h.!
Maharaja yudhistiv to Mahamantri:- Mahamantri Ji, jalal Aur unke sathiyon Ke rehne Ka turant praband kriye Aur inhe kisi Bhi cheez Ki kami Nhi honi chahiye.
Mahamantri:- Ji maharaj.
With this Jalal, Abdul and Abrar are allotted spacious rooms ..
Abrar:- Acha Hua hum waha samay par pahuch gaye,warna hum maharaja yudhistiv ko Yeh kabhi sabit Nhi Kar pate Ki jalal begunha h.
Abdul:- Haan sach mein!

Flashback starts:-
Jalal, Abdul and Abrar were proceeding towards mahal on their horses but the bridge connecting the village where mahal is situated got damaged due to which jalal and his friends take different route which is from back of mahal.On the way to mahal they saw few men's carrying sacks of fasal i.e the same fasal which was sent from Agra. .jalal recognized it as the fasal he has sent was having the same green JM mark on its sacks.And hence jalal and his friends decided to follow them.and finally they reached the secret place where all the sacks of fasal is hidden.
At the correct time our heroes made their entry and started fighting with enemies and caught hold of two main sardar who were guiding them.and kept swords on their necks
Jalal:- hum tumhe baqash dege agar tum Hume batadoge Ki Yeh sazish kis Ki thi.!
Men1:- Hume malum Nhi.
Jalal:- Acha toh tum Ab Jalal-Uddin-Mohammed se jhut bologe??
Men2:- ja ja ja jalal.. (With shock)humne toh bas wahi kiya jo mantri Ji ne karne ko Kaha.
Abdul:- Kaun h Woh??
Abrar:- hum inhe abhi apne Saath mahal le chalte h.wahi sab pata chalega.!!
Flashback ends..
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Edited by zynahsiddiqi956 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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yuhuuu...me first.. 😃
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Originally posted by: --Vrinda--

yuhuuu...me first.. 😃

awesome chappy appi...finally jalal prove himself Innocent... but where is Jodha...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Vrinda--

awesome chappy appi...finally jalal prove himself Innocent... but where is Jodha...




thanks for pm...update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Unres
Awesome chappy 
Finally his name got cleared 
Where is Jodha 
What's the problem between them
Update soon