#Shivika.... a jouney from MU to LOVE (part 13 on page 18)(19/10/17) - Page 4

Posted: 7 years ago
hey guys I'm back...it's my 6th
attmpt 4 d sm updt...I wrote it 5
tms earlier bt it got earsed & so
it's my 6th attmpt...bt cn assure
it's gnna b a funny yet
emotional one with a romantic
touch...so let's begin d ride...
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On hearing Om's word Shivaay
was hurt to d core but he was
determined to win them back
too...so he left towards the hsp.
Lawn & reached near the
ambulance where he saw Om
pacing...& seeing him Om
blurted out in anger...
O: where hv U been Shivaay????
Shivaay felt a bit rlvd when Om
called him as Shivaay...& he
smiled, his eyes twinkled with a
ray of hope...but in next minute
he was hurt again when he tried
to enter into the patient zone &
tried to sit beside Annika as Om
stopped him 4m doing so...
O: It's 4 patient & her family
Shivaay not for his Boss...so it
wld be better if U take the
passenger seat beside the
driver's one...so go & be
seated...
S: What r u saying Om?????I'm
her family...I'm her HUSBAND...
O: NO...U r nt...U married her
forcefully against her even
against ur will...& U didn't
accept her as ur wife either
infront of world...so how is she
ur wife????& if so even then u
guys gonna have a divorce
soon...so just stop calling urself
as her so called husband...&
moov...
By this Shivaay was hard...all.d
secene from his marrige day till
now flashed infront of his eyes
again...
His eyes mopistened by this but
controlling his inner turmoil he
asked briefly...
S: Really????then how come she
been UR FAMILY Om????cz she
doesn't has any other relation
with our family than being my
wife...so U ain't allowed to go
with her too...& secondly may be
I didn't married her forcefully
against her will but the fact is
she is my LEGALLY MARRIED
WIFE which neither I nor U can
deny...
& if U ask abt our divorce that's
gonna be happened & U never
know I would let that happen
ever or not...so SHE IS MY WIFE
& hence I have full right to stay
by her be with her & take care of
her as her legally wedded
HUSBAND...So shall we proceed
now??????cz I feel we have
wasted lot of times fighting on
this stupid thing...
He added the last part smirking
a lil...
& hearing all this Om was so
happy seeing this possesive&
caring side of Shivaay for Annika
& felt like hugging him at that
moment only but maintained his
stern look & gave him a blank
look nodding his head in
positive & went inside with
SHIVAAY...Om was happy so
much to see this side of
Shivaay...Shivaay a emotionless
almost robotic person who's
whole world revolvs around his
business & family & doesn't
express his emotions to anyone
whatever the situation & never
cries in front of his brother
even...has CRIED 2d...has said
thanx& sorry which were no less
than a miracle to him...as
accepted his
mistakes...apologized for it...it
was a drastic change in him...for
the first he saw him behaving
like a proper human who has his
emotion & can fight with his
brother with some stupid
logic...can call a girl actually his
LOVE of Life his WIFE not caring
about her so called bloodline &
lineage theory...it all made him
so HAPPY that he was smiling in
heart which were reflected
through his expressive eyes
which was caught by Shivaay so
easily but he didn't show him as
he knew his brother well that
though he's happy seeing him
like this he needed some time to
forgive his deeds to Annika...so
he kept silent & by the time they
reached to OM...reaching there
he took Annika to THEIR room &
made her lie their who was in a
deep slumber by then due to the
effects of high dose painkiller
injections...so he put the
comforter on her in a very
caring & cute way not to disturb
her sleep...then he prepared his
espresso & sat on nearby couch
admirring his beautifull
wife...who was looking like a
angel...but this angelic view was
disturbed when she frowned a lil
in her sleep due to some hair
strands dancing on her face due
to the light breeze...so he
walked to the bed and moved
the hair strands from her face &
tucked it behind her ear...& gave
a small peck on her
forhead...his touch made her
shudder even in her dream...&
by this trance he moved towards
her lip & was about to kiss her
on her lips when his phone rang
& he moved away...smiling he
slaped his head & left the room
& went to the pool area...
& here someone watched the
whole thing from behind the
door & turned red in anger &
entered into the room when
Shivaay left...
( those who gussed it to be Tia
go & get a chocolate for ur self
cz u r r8...)
Tia entered into the room &
attacked on Annika as a witch &
started shiuting on her...Annika
who was so weak was just
starring her with a blank look
which made Tia more angry that
she hold her hand in a tight grip
& started yelling on her loud...
T: How dear U to come into my
Shivaay Baby's room????U know
na He's gonna divorce U
soon...& then we both gonna
get married then how can U
come here & on top of that U r
sleeping on my bed...
Annika neither answered nor got
down from the bed made her
loose control & her inner devil
came out in a harsh way that
she tightned the grip on her
hand more & shouted at top of
her voice...
T: HOW DARE U ANNIKA????JUST
ANSWER ME...U bl***y
middleclass girl...u r traping my
baby in this for money naa????so
just tell me ur amount...how
much U need to leave me& my
Shivaay Baby????
Hearing this shouting all the
youngster gathered infront of
their room including Dadi, JaNki
(Janvi+Pinki)...
Shivaay who went to attened d
call heard a loud sound coming
from her room so he just rushed
there...the view infront of his
eyes just boiled his blood & he
stroamed into the room held
Tia's hand tight twisted it on her
back & a TIGHT SLAP landed on
Tia's chick...
( in a great need of it in IB but
not getting it...so thought to add
it here...do comment on it
ok?????comment must for this
slap)
& the reaction was following...
A: shocked a lil but didn't
reacted...
S: fuming in anger
T: Rubbing her slap red chick (so
wish to see it in real IB errr)
OmPriSom,Janvi,Dadi: formed a
perfect 'O' shaped lip in shock...
Pinky: 1st shock then fumed in
anger...
But the best was of our durling
Rudy boy...wanna know????read..
Ru: was dancing like a maniac
doing his antics...
Om gave a light slap behind his
head & gave a nothing can
happen to him look...Rudy who
was so happy was a lil irritated
by this act of Om said in a low
voice...
R: What O...haven't U seen the
greatest show of OM now???
instead of joining me u r
slapping...not done O not done
& made a cuppy (cute+puppy)
face...
Som: this time I'm with Cry Baby
bade baal wale vaiyaa...even I'm
eager to dance now...
Pri: me too Om vaiya..( here Pri
won't be as IB lk a scared
doll...cz tht's too irritating isn't
it????)
Om gave a unbeliveable look &
smiled a lil when Rudy said in a
excited tone feeling so great by
SomPri's words...
R: look O they also knows how
great I am...& u r jealous of
it...& just see Sumo how much
like I would get when on this
pic...(yeah he clicked a pic of
Shivaay slapping Tia)
O: which pic Rudy????
In utter shock...
R: ra that famous pic actually
most famous pic clicked by me
till date even more that my
bisceps...
Showing his antics...
O: just stop it & say
straight...which pic????
R: ra u r a big duffer O...what
else????it's the same which I
clicked when Bhaaiya slaped that
Lady Baba...simpleee...& showed
logic sign...
This made Om sooo shocked so
as SomPri...but where SomPri
was smiling Om whispered a bit
angry giving a death glare to
Rudy...
O: don't even think of doing
that..
R: No Om...
O: sure na????
R: yeah...Om...I'm thinking
about this...no way...
Om rlvd & took a breath when
another shock attacked him
again...
R: & why should I think about it
when I have posted it already...
O: WHAAATTT!!!!!!!!U R
IMPOSSIBLE RUDRA...
but smiled secretly...& Soumya
to Rudra's surprise praised
him...
Som: for the first time U have
done something great Rudy...&
gave a high5 to each other &
shared a cute eye lock...
& here in ShivIka's room Shivaay
brusted out on Tia...
S: HOW DARE U TIA to call my
WIFE a b****y middleclass
girl?????she is MY WIFE...MRS.
Annika Shivaay Singh Oberoi
before saying something to
her...& FYKI (for ur kind
information) it's nt ur Shivaay
Baby's room...it's my
room...Annika's Husband, Mr.
Shivaay Singh Oberoi's
room...which means it's her
room...so she has full right to
stay here but U don't have it...&
don't forget that I'm a married
man now...so before entering
my room learn to knock first
then enter & for now me& my
wife both r so tired so leave
now & let us take rest...
Tia who was fuming hear this till
now strated shedding her
crocodile tears & started
blabbering usual...
T: U would sleep with her in
same bed now????
S: yeah...what kind of question
is this????we are husband-wife
Tia...so would sleep togrther
only na...
T: She cried more loudly
now...How can U do this Shivaay
Baby?????U U can't do this to
me...Universe won't forgive U...
S: plz leave Tia I'm too tired...
T: Ok I'll but how can U do this
to ur baby Shivaay Baby???
S: MY BAA...BABY???
he was sooo shocked & the land
beneath his feet sleeped...& for
his surprise Annika spoke...
A: Shivaay ki baby & that's too in
ur womb????how is it
possible????
& by then Pinky entered...
Pi: How dares U to talk b/w my
son & my bahu????& Shivaay
who's babys will be in Tia's
womb other thans U?????my Tia
isn't that cheaps likes Annika...
S: mind ur toungh mom...she is
my wife...& Tia can't be my
child's Mom...
Pi: why???? Why can't she?????
she is too
preetty,sweet,beautifull,educated
s...
S: just stop it moms...(realising
what he said)...I mn mom...but
how can she become my child's
mother...I mn...
Pi: with a shocked expression...
Oh my maata Shivaay...I'm ur
moms...how I can tells u the
process naaa...U have dones it
urselvs...naughty boy...
S: mom u ain't getting me...r u
sure Tia that u r pregnant????or
thus is mine????
T: What????how can U say this
Shivaay Baby???U r hurting me &
more than that u r hurting ur
child baby...universe won't...
Cutting her off Shivaay spoke
loosing his patience...
S: stop this Universe drama
Tia...& u r so sure right that it's
my baby then just tell me when
thus happened???
T: in our farmhouse
Shivaay...remember we got
drunk & then we lost our
controll & these happened...
S: no Tia tht's not possible cz
I'm not that sort of person who
forget his deeds after getting
drunk even I remebered all the
things of that Pool party...
Realising what he said he looked
at Annika who was looking in
that way & there they had a
sweet eyelock remincing those
memories of that night which
made Annika blush & he blushed
too but their trance was broke
when miss. Kapoor spoke in her
irritated voice & realising her
behaviour Annika controlled
herself again & looked away...
T: which Party SB????
S: That's none of ur business...&
u r so sure na????then let's do a
DNA test...it wld be
cleared...then I'll accept ur baby
if I found to be guilty & would
follow ur words...
T: but...
Pi: no burs beta...Shivaay is
rights...let's do thus & then mu
heera beta is all yours...let's
gos...they left...but Tia was a bit
worried hearing about DNA
which went unnoticed bu Shivika
& OmRuSom...rest were left till
now...but now Sumo got a call
so left as well...& Tia left giving a
irritated look to OmRu where
they give her a whatever look...&
entered inside...Shivaay who
watched them coming was
shicked to see them there &
tried to justify himself but for
his relief they stood by him...
OmRu: we know that U can do
wrong things but that too for
our family but can't do
something like this which will
hurt a girl's self respect...
& then he looked at Annika &
went on his knees infront of
her...but Annika spoke before he
could...
A: have U got it how does one
feel when someone accuse
himself specialy his character
without his fault...when it feels
when someone close to ur hurt
choose to beleave on the person
who is accusing u & refuse to
trust on u...can u feel it now????
I heard that tables turns but I
never knew that this turning
takes place this soon...
R: what r u saying bhabi???I'm
not getting it...
Om asked him to stop through
his action but when he tried to
say something again he glared at
him & he stopped making a
cuppy face...
A: it's nothing Rudra...but don't
worry I'm not like others...I
know who's trapping & who's
trapped...
O: & it'll be cleared once the
DNA report comes...
S: Yeah...
A: No...this isn't gonna be that
easy guys...that CHEAPDI Tia
would make sonething or the
other...
O: What U mean An...I mean
Bhabi????
She smiled hearing Bhabi from
Om & said...
A: Om who can stoop so low
that can claim someone's else's
child as Shivaay's she can make
a fake report too...Isn't it????
Soumya entered with a tired
face & said...
So: U r r8 Annika di...
R: no wrong...Rudra snapped...
So: what????& why u felt like
that???
R: as mentioned Annika bhabi as
di...
So: just stay away from this mr.
Cry Baby Oberoi...& I call her di
& will do the same...
R: u shut up...& U won't...cz she
is Bhaaiya's wife now...which
means Bhaabi...& Om called her
Bhaabi too...so only U left...so
call her Bhaabi & close the
chapter...
So: why????
R: cz I'm saying...
So: (mocking him) cz I'm
saying...r U d P.M. of India that
I need to hear U?????
R: NO...
So: then what????who r u that I
would listen to U????
R: I'm ur hus...(realising what he
was about to say looked at Sumo
feeling embarassed so does
Sumo & tried to cover up when
Om spoke...
O: R u guts done with ur stupid
fight????then can we move to the
matter which we were
didcussing about...
S: exactly guys...just stop
fighting over stupid things...
R: really bhaaiya????look O
who's saying????Bhaaiya U don't
fight with Bhaabi na????
S: shutup Rudy...& what were U
saying Soumya????
So: yeah Bade Bhaaiya...I heard
Tia calling some doctor &
instructing her something...I
tried to hear it but aai called me
so I left...
A: raising the neckline of her top
I told U...so I have a plan...
* the plan is muted *
A: so how's d plan???
ShivOmRuSom in unisition:
hmnmmm...sounds great...
S: but will it work???
A: do U have something
better???
S: nooo...
A: then just shut up...so guys
it's time to trap Tia...
So mission Tia begins...
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Ufff!!!!!!!! Finally done with thus
update...please comment...&
sorry if U got boared by this
long one...U can let me know if
u want a shorter update...& the
romantic part is for my
chandu...& Misha would enter in
next or the 2nd next epi...tried
to inclued Rumya part...so let
me know how was it...love U
all...
Signing Off for 2d...
Pri...
Posted: 7 years ago
wow...that slap was indeed needed...but we never get it in the show...awesomeee
Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by AYUSHIVISHU


wow...that slap was indeed needed...but we never get it in the show...awesomeee

I'm sooo happy that U liked it...
Posted: 7 years ago
Awsm update... Huh (Don't know your name)
Update was so good...meri taraf se tight huggie to you🤗
Tumne meri adhuri khwaaish puri Kardi... Lady baba ke Para tamacha... I was also doing the dance as Rudra... I 🥳
Luvd your version of SSO 😳
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm😊
Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by Mystery1234


Awsm update... Huh (Don't know your name)[DIV]Update was so good...meri taraf se tight huggie to you[>:D<][/DIV][DIV]Tumne meri adhuri khwaaish puri Kardi... Lady baba ke Para tamacha... I was also doing the dance as Rudra... I[<:-P][\:D/][/DIV][DIV]Luvd your version of SSO[:$][/DIV][DIV]Continue soon[/DIV][DIV]Thanks for the pm[:)][/DIV]

1st of all my name is Piyali...bt I liked to be called as Pri...so call me 4m next time...& this slap...yeh meri bhi khwaish hai...thanx for loving it...a tight bear hug to U too ...
Posted: 7 years ago
Wow awesome update 👏
Shivaay slapped tia wow 🥳
countinue soon
Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by zyrah17


Wow awesome update [=D>] [BR]Shivaay slapped tia wow [<:-P] [BR]countinue soon

I sooo glad that U liked it...
Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by MysticRiver


good..

Thank you...
Posted: 7 years ago
Wohoo now somw plotting to fassa tia... 

Loved it

Plzz cont soon

And thanks for the pm


Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by jeenal20


Wohoo now somw plotting to fassa tia...[BR][BR][DIV]Loved it[/DIV][BR][DIV]Plzz cont soon[/DIV][BR][DIV]And thanks for the pm[/DIV][BR][BR]

thank you...

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