MB+ZY: Mehbeer And Zaya Love Story

Posted: 7 years ago
Hey guys, I m Sara from Pakistan and I am also a Mehbeer and Manan fan, i write their ffs, this ff was made on both Manan and Mehbeer, but i thought to write for Mehbeer n Zaya too...all the characters will be shown slowly...happy reading

Chapter 1

A boy was sitting in his room engrossed in playing guitar when another boy enters and sits in front of him.
Boy 1: why do u always come on wrong timing?
He says putting his guitar at a side.

Boy 2: I m ur brother... do I need permission to come and talk to u Zain?

Zain: no Abeer, u don't, u say
Abeer: why r u so angry?
Zain: because dad again broke my heart today by saying I can't do anything and m useless...if my family left me on my time of need what's my fault in it? I wish I shouldn't have come here.
Abeer: relax bro, everything will be fine, I wonder how will any girl get impressed by u, u r an angry hulk.

Zain smiles.
Zain: u know how to make me smile na
Abeer: any doubts?
Zain: no..but what u wanted to say to me ?
Abeer: don't u want to go college?
Zain: no m not going.
Abeer: bro no girl will attend college today because the handsome hunk Zain won't be there na...what will happen of me?

He says faking sadness.
Zain laughs: OK fine m going...u also make a band of yours like I have made
Abeer: yeah OK.. get ready.

He leaves. Abeer's dad Aalok Malhotra is a stern man for who the word kindness is rare in front of strangers and Zain was a stranger too as his family didn't wanted him and so Abeer's mom Madhvi found him roaming on the roads and took him asking him what's the matter, she is a kind woman, she cared and loved Zain just like Abeer. But Aalok always differentiated between the brothers and Zain missed his real father. Poor Zain had to bear too much.

Zain gets ready in a white shirt and black jeans with black blazer and looks stunning. He combs his hair and wears his shoes and goes downstairs. Madhvi smiles at him.He too smiles at her and sits beside Abeer. Aalok comes and sits beside Madhvi.
Aalok: good morning
Madhvi: good morning.
Abeer while eating: good morning by me and Zain.
Aalok : Abeer, he can speak right?
Zain: good morning dad.

He eats a little then leaves asking Abeer to come soon.
Aalok: why is he reacting this way?
Abeer: nothing he is excited for college that's why, bye dad I am also going. Take care.
He leaves with Zain in their jeep.

Outside space academy, a black jeep stops and Zain and Abeer comes out of it. Every girl's eyes were on them, Zain shows attitude and doesn't even looks at them but Abeer smiles at them and goes inside.
Abeer whispers: bro don't show so much attitude
Zain rolls his eyes and goes different way to the two boys and the girls standing there talking and talking.
Zain: hi guys
Boy: hi buddy
Zain: hi Zeeshan
Boy 2: bring Abeer too.
Zain: no Ali no pranks on him plz
Ali: OK fine, not on him but on u

Before Zain could say anything, Ali spills ink on his shirt, Zain's jaw drops open.
Zain: Aliii what did u do
Ali: what did I do?
He asks blankly as if he did nothing.

Zain: you spilled ink on my shirt.

He says pointing to his shirt but to his shock, the ink wasn't there anymore. Ali and the girls giggle.

Zain: the ink was here only.
Ali: so where did it go?

Zain stays quiet and the others burst into laughter.
Girl: arey it was a prank, this ink disappears within two minutes, it was just to show u how we will trick freshers.
Zain: oh..nice prank Mukti...Bhagwan tumhe jald hi is tension se mukhti de (May God give u peace from this tension )
Mukti giggles.
Zain: Alisha won't u say anything? U r so quiet.
Alisha: no nothing, bhai first time didn't come to college, m scared he's up to something.
Ali: no he won't do anything relax...no group hug today?

They have a group hug.

Prankster 5: the famous band of space academy.
Ali:
Jolly, fun loving, the drummer, lives with his mom and little sister Ruhi.
Alisha:
The pianist, short tempered, lives with parents and a brother Arsalan.
Zeeshan:
Shy boy, the guitarist, lives with his mother.
Mukti Vardhan:
Electric guitarist, short tempered, lives with her grandmother (Nani)
Zain:
Cool guy, the dream of every girl.


After a long hug, they go to their class only to get a long lecture of getting late, but as usual they ignored it.
Raghav Sir:
Today we have a new student in our class, Aliya.
A girl enters with long hair till waist wearing a blue thigh length tight dress, smiling, innocence clearly shown on her face. She stands facing everyone.
Aliya: hi I am Aliya, m a classical singer from Bhopal.
Raghav sir: have a seat.

She sits beside Zain. He stares at her mesmerized.
Zain says in heart: I don't know if she'll be our target or my girlfriend.

Zain:

Mukti:
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Chp 2Edited by salley145 - 7 years ago
Posted: 7 years ago
thx a lot 4 starting this.i had been waiting 4 this ever since u joined IF.abeer n zain as brothers.wow.wonder whats d exact prob btw zain n father.ink scene in college was funny.aliya as classical dancer.wow.waiting 4 meher's entry.i guess 2 of d pics u uploaded r not visible.did u not use imgur?guess u were trying to put mukti's pics.can u tell me which actress is mukti?
Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by jasminerahul


thx a lot 4 starting this.i had been waiting 4 this ever since u joined IF.abeer n zain as brothers.wow.wonder whats d exact prob btw zain n father.ink scene in college was funny.aliya as classical dancer.wow.waiting 4 meher's entry.i guess 2 of d pics u uploaded r not visible.did u not use imgur?guess u were trying to put mukti's pics.can u tell me which actress is mukti?

Charlie Chauhan
Posted: 7 years ago
Congo's on new story...
Very nice concept...
Continue soon
Posted: 7 years ago
The story s quite different. For a change, Abeer's dad's name is Aalok. Loved Abeer-Zain bonding. I wonder what could be the problem between Aalok & Zain. Waiting for Meher & Zain's love interest.
Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter 2

Zain stares at Aaliya getting mesmerized.
Zain says in heart: I don't know if she'll be our target or my girlfriend.


Preetika Rao as Aalia






In Abeer's class, same happened there as well but a little different. Teacher introduces a new girl as Meher Purohit and asks her to sit with Abeer. She simply goes and sits beside him.
Abeer: hi I m Abeer Malhotra
Meher doesn't replies. He waves in front of her and she looks at him.
Abeer: m Abeer Malhotra
Meher: hi
She smiles.
Abeer: why didn't u hear me first?
Meher: actually I have hearing problem na so that's why...sorry
Abeer: oh
Meher looks away getting teary eyed.

In Zain's classroom, Zain was still staring at Aaliya. She waves at him.
Aaliya: what happen?
Zain: beautiful
Aaliya: sorry, did u say something?
Zain: no

Aaliya notes down lecture, Zain steals glances of her and Mukti gives him a note. It said, "let's start with our plan." Before Zain could react, Mukti calls Aaliya and she turns back only to get the ink splashed on her face.
Aaliya: how dare u?
She runs to Raghav sir.
Aaliya: sir look what that girl did to my face.
Raghav looks at her confused.
Raghav: what has she done? Your face is normal
Aaliya: but
Raghav: go back
Aaliya sits beside Zain and pulls out her phone switching on the front camera, the ink wasn't there anymore. Aaliya turns to Mukti.
Aaliya: u did it first time that's why forgiving u else I will take revenge.

Mukti: yeah sure.

Aaliya turns her back to her annoyingly.



Charlie Chauhan as Mukti



Abeer asks Meher to join his band.
Meher: I get nervous in singing and all.
Abeer: u r not alone, we will do it together...so r u coming?
Meher: fine

In the break, Meher goes with Abeer and his friends. He introduces her to everyone.
Abeer: Sasha, Nisaar, she's Meher and Meher she's Sasha and he's Nisaar.

Nisaar, Sasha and Abeer are childhood friends. They have a great bond just like his brother's group but they r friendly with everyone, they r not pranksters like his brother and his friends.
Meher: hi.
Abeer: will u meet my brother too?
Meher: (hesitantly) yeah OK

They all go to Zain's table.
Abeer: hi bro
Zain: hi, who's she?
He says pointing to Meher.
Abeer: our new friend Meher, he's my brother Zain
Zain: nice catch.
Abeer giggles and leaves with his gang.
Mukti: one more fresher
Zain: if u r thinking to do prank on her, then sorry don't even think about it.
Mukti: ok

She sees Aaliya coming their way and throws marbles in her way and she falls.
Aaliya: what's ur problem?
They all approach her.
Ali: u a fresher right?
Aaliya nods.
Ali: we greet freshers very well

He makes her stand and everyone except Zain throws eggs on her but suddenly stop as it goes on Abeer . Meher giggles silently on his condition. Abeer goes forward to them.
Abeer: one shouldn't trouble a girl just because she's alone...u threw it on me by mistake so its OK but what about her? She's a fresher u should help her bro.
Aaliya: looks like ur brother has more sense than u.
She goes from there.
Abeer: Zain, u did wrong.
Zain: I didn't do, they did.

His friends looks at him shockingly, he did this first time.



Zeeshan:

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Edited by salley145 - 7 years ago
Posted: 7 years ago
Nice start to story
So zain is a prankster n abeer is the more friendlier brother
Poor aliya getting picked on by Zain's friends
He said they'd either target her or she'd be his gf
Well he can count that idea out now yeah he's not done anything but he didn't stop it either
Like how abeer n meher met him being really nice to her n all
Would love to see aliya getting her own back
As for abeer hope he grills his bro
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
Posted: 7 years ago
Zain got attracted to Aliya. Abeer introduced Meher to his friends. Sad that freshers were not encouraged but glad that Abeer stood for them and warned Zain & hs friends against throwing eggs. Waiting for the next update.
Posted: 7 years ago
zain is lost in aliya.wow.mehbeer meeting was calm n sweet.meher has hearing prob?shocking.guess not so serious as she sings.mukti's prank on aliya was funny.ragging aliya was too much.loved abeer supporting aliya
Posted: 7 years ago
Chp 3

Zain: I didn't do, they did.

As he says this, rest of his friends looks at him shockingly, he did this first time.
Abeer: good that u didn't do it...you all shouldn't have done this, she is a fresher doesn't mean you bully her.

He goes with his group and Zain receives angry glares from his friends. Zain looks at them.
Zain: sorry guys, don't take me wrong, I really didn't do it, I just told him the truth, and we only play tricks on those who mess with us so I didn't do any prank on her, what's her mistake?
Mukti: now she's important to u more than us?
Zain: no ways
Ali: what's wrong with u then?
Zain: I don't feel good while doing all this.
Zeeshan: buddy your mood is bad from morning, tell us what is bothering u
Zain: dad
Zeeshan: he will accept u one day, don't worry
He gives him a hug and Zain hugs him back in return.
Alisha: so no more pranks?


Shivangi Joshi as Alisha


Alisha asks as she loves doing pranks with freshers.
Ali: not on Aalia but on Meher
Zain: guys plz not on her
Mukti: yeah right because she is your brother's friend
Alisha: what can we do? We want a fresher to do pranks
Zeeshan: he said no
Ali: if u don't want to get involved then OK fine.

They go. Aalia cries in the washroom cleaning her clothes and her hair. She just wanted to go home right now, in fact no one will want to stay after such embarrassment. Zain barges in there


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Aalia shouts: what the hell are you doing here? Just go!
Zain stays calm and goes near her.
Zain: believe me I didn't wanted to do that, it was my friends who did this.
Aalia ignores him and leaves from there, he palms his mouth. Aalia while going collides with Abeer. She looks here and there not sure if she should talk or not.
Abeer: hey r u OK?
Aalia nods.
Abeer: it happens sometimes, its OK, will u join us?
Aalia looks down not knowing what to answer.
Sasha: such people are everywhere, maybe making friends will help u.

Aalia: OK fine, I will join u all...hi I am Aaliya Goenka.
They all introduce themselves except Meher, she couldn't hear them.
Aalia to Meher: and u r?
Abeer: I will say, she can't hear, she's Meher Purohit
Aalia: hi Meher.
She forwards her hand for handshake. She was looking down. Aalia shakes her a little. She looks up and she waves at her and she smiles in return but soon turns away hiding her tears.



This didn't go unnoticed by Abeer, now he was desperate to know why she always cries whenever someone talks to her about her deafness. Aalia walks along with them.
Aalia: Abeer, why is your brother's group like this?
Abeer: only people who mess with them, Zain does pranks on them only, his group does pranks even when freshers doesn't mess with them.
Aalia: oh...now I think their next target is Meher.
Abeer: no m sure Zain wont let them do anything.
Aalia: I hope so.

Later it was time for everyone to go home. Meher was also going when suddenly Mukti cracks egg on her and she stops and looks at her. Mukti comes to her.
Mukti: hi fresher, u came, was waiting for u only, and what's getting u late? Come join us.
Before she could say anything Mukti takes her to her group.
Zain: Mukti leave her, what's wrong with u?
Ali: nothing...but this fresher isn't that chirpy so we can easily do pranks on her.
Meher looks at them not understanding or able to hear what were they saying, she was confused. Ali comes to her.
Cabir: so u have to do a dare for us

Meher looks at his lip movements and understands what he's saying.
Meher: but why?
Abeer: no u don't have to.
Abeer comes there looking for Zain and sees Meher with them and understands their plan. He goes in front of her making sure she understands what he's saying.

Abeer: now that we are friends so friends should protect each other right? U don't have to do any dare, Zain come let's leave.

Zain: I will go with them.
Abeer: OK, let's go Meher.

Mehbeer go from there to the exit gate. Abeer sits on the front seat along with her. Whole journey till her house was quiet. She was about to go out but he stops her. She looks at him with questioning look.
Abeer: why do u always cry whenever someone talks to u and u can't hear? I mean many ppl are like that out there.
Meher: because it hurts and I feel depressing.
Abeer: u can tell me.
Meher cries.
Meher: no, I won't tell u, m going, m late
Abeer: (holds her hand) I promise to help u
Meher: yeah right, I will tell u everything, but I don't know if u can still help me or not.

Flashback:
When Meher was 5 years old, their parents got divorced and so her father used to be drunk every night, her mother went in depression, she got much affected by all this. One day when her father came home, he was drunk at that time too, no senses worked at all. He was as usual angry.

Meher was in her room scared as he's abusive and hurted her if he ever gets angry. But unluckily he came there too.
Meher: p-papa
Her father picks a lamp and throws it, she moves out of the way but her ears got affected, it pained at first. Then he throws the glass on her, again she moves away but now her ears bursted and bleeded heavily. She holds her ears and screams in pain. She had no one to talk to, even if she did, she would never say anything, she had unconditional love for her father. She couldn't take the abuse anymore. She ran from her house that night, her mother got shifted to Rehab as she got mad. She never went back to her house, she lived in ashram.
Fb end.


Abeer: how can someone do that to his own daughter? Don't bottle up your feelings,I m always there if u need a friend to talk

She hugs him while crying, he was shocked with her sudden hug but he hugged her back feeling her sorrow.

Mukti: we are doing our next prank soon.
They join hands including Zain who agreed unwillingly.

Edited by salley145 - 7 years ago

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