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Posted: 6 years ago
wow. I was waiting for tara's pov. I thought she noticed mrityunjay there without his knowledge and started admiring him secretly but this was unexpected. she noticed him at different places and got carried away.she feels that his long hair and accessories suit only him.so romantic. naughty girl will reveal his name only later.he will get his biggest surprise.she dedicated a beautiful song for him 

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Posted: 6 years ago
Awesome Story..
Love it
Beautifully written
but I hv a question to writer . 

Ek Nazar mein pyar Kesy possible ho sakta hai.? 
read karny mein bhot acha laga but realty mein ek nazar mein pyar not possible,
pyar na howa tified fever ho gaya jo raato raat ho jaye ga. πŸ˜†
please don't mind last line mein ny Mazak mein likhi hai ye kisi k emotion ko hurt krny k liye ni hy. πŸ˜Š

but likha bhot acha hy too good. πŸ‘πŸ‘
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Posted: 6 years ago
the call got disconnected.oh.mrityunjay having many doubts about the girl...his teacher's daughter? finally he reached her house.loved their sweet simple meeting.when he asked her why she didn't confess her love that day what she told was emotional. confession of love was sweet and romantic 
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Posted: 6 years ago
Kafi time bad kuch acha read karny ko mila. 

1st part bhi amazing tha 2nd bhi Superb hai. 

mujhy samajh nai ata k jis ko bhi pyar hota hai us ko dusary ki eyes world best eyes hi lagti hain. 
Banda is say puchy pyar hony say phely duniya k sabhi logn ki eyes ko hi dekha hai kia jo pata hai k world best kis ki hain.πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†

larki ko agar Ph py RJ say baat karni hi nai thi toh ph kiya hi kyn ?πŸ˜†
bekar mein bill par gaya us ko.πŸ˜ƒ

Anyways overall story was superb. too good. 
and Shaina dear tum nay story ko or beautiful bana diya. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

I will reply on 3rd part after a while. πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š
till then bye take care.😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
Wah . kia baat hai kia likha hai ji. Superb. πŸ‘πŸ‘
3rd part bhi bhot acha tha  short and sweet. πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
RJ nay toh jesy Girl ka pura interview hi liya. 

kitna baat karti hain girls. πŸ˜†

Thank you Shaina tum ny mujhy ye story resd karny ko bola .
mujhy varjit ni rakha tum ny is say..πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
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Posted: 6 years ago
Last part was also Amazing πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

RJ is really nice person in this story but lilt bit confused 
Thank you so much . really enjoyed this small chapter. πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
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Posted: 5 years ago
This content was originally posted by: Khadeja


It has come to an end 😲
So soon ..
It was so lovely β€οΈ β€οΈ β€οΈ 

Everything has to end 😊
Don't cry because it's over. Smile because it happened. - Dr. Seuss

Thanks for loving itπŸ˜ƒ

Okk coming to the update it is great !!! πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Thanks πŸ˜ƒ

Neil was so confused. πŸ˜†
Then the girl told the boy talked about her πŸ˜‰
Before Neil could ask the call was disconnected πŸ˜›
So sad that he didn't got the nameπŸ˜‰

After the ending of show he still thought.
He also tried to call her and wanted her number. πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›
Still he didn't understand .. πŸ˜†
His thinking ability was drained for that day because of certain beautyπŸ˜‰

Oh ! finally he realized πŸ˜ƒ 
Now, he remembered he had helped his teacher and the girl was her daughter 😊
And the girl by whom he was mesmerized was the same girl.. 😳
Yes, FinallyπŸ˜†

So showing the courage he went to her house  πŸ‘πŸΌ
And directly proposed !!!!
No delay πŸ˜†

She asked how he found out.
He told her his own messy condition πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
He has to explain how miserable he was

MJ asked why she didn't tell.
Tara said her hesitation.
Yeah

Tara also expressed her feelings.πŸ˜ƒ
She did πŸ˜ƒ

❀️ * Happy Ending * ❀️
Yes πŸ˜ƒ

This story was so so cute ❀️ β€οΈ β€οΈ 
I have left no new words for your praising.. 😊
You always come with some simple and beautiful idea that blows our mind. ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
Keep writing like this πŸ‘πŸΌ

❀️ ❀️ ❀️ A lot of love for you  πŸ€—  πŸ€— πŸ€—


Thanks for loving it so much πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

I try my best to write what I observe with a mix of imagination πŸ˜‰

It's the reader's imagination that makes it more beautiful πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 5 years ago
This content was originally posted by: Shaina_b

Neil is obviously confused that how can he know the guy!!!!πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

So he was remembering the girl he saw today while listening to the song just as the girl must be thinking of her love!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š    

The girl said he talked about her publicly but the call got disconnected before she could say his name!!!   

After the show he is still thinking about her!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š

Good that he got her number because he is surely curious about this call!!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

But still he hadn't understood!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Now he remembered that he had helped his teacher and the girl was her daughter!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š

Finally he realized that the girl he was mesmerized by was the same girl as the one who had called!!!!😳 πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

So gathering up his courage he went to her house!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

I loved the way he directly proposed to her!!!!❀️ β€οΈ β€οΈ β€οΈ

She asked him and he told her how he figured it out just now!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š

Tara, in turn, told him about her hesitation because of which she didn't tell him yesterday!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Finally Tara and Mrityunjay expressed their love for each other!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Their hug was so cute!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³

So it ended with the song which described their story perfectly!!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š

This part was fantastic!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

It was a beautiful and perfect ending to the story where they got together!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š β€οΈ β€οΈ β€οΈ β€οΈ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

It was awesome and a very cute and wonderful story!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘





REplying soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
This content was originally posted by: angel_juhi04

I will read and then comment


I hope you enjoy when you readπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 1 I love the story...

I could not tell you if I loved you the first moment I saw you, or if it was the second or third or fourth. But I remember the first moment I looked at you walking toward me and realized that somehow the rest of the world seemed to vanish when I was with you.

Edited by khushboo_kzk - 5 years ago