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Asya/KaBhi: A Second Chance - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Seeing your post is just a thrill! 

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"Fluff bubble wrapped monkey" is such a cute introduction to the darling Reed.!
"Five years is a long time to stay the same." This one's so true! 

Reed thinking that he would turn into a chicken if he caught the chicken pox is adorably hilarious! 

Honestly for a 4 year old, he is so mature and caring of his mother. And protective too. For example the way he immediately apologizes to his mother when he thinks she is crying because of him. 

Asad definitely has a right to be mad at her for just suddenly disappearing. 

"Sorry." He looked down at his feet. "Please don't make me eat medicine food."

"You going somewhere?" I asked instead crossing my arms.

"Yes, can we go out Mommy?" He tilted his head back and blinked up at me with those innocent eyes. I glanced at Asad and then at the miniature version of him. I guess he was done being cooped up as me.

"Okay." I caved heading up the stairs.

"What about medicine food Mommy?" He suddenly remembered.

"You be a good boy and I will think about it." I replied.

"Oh boy" I heard him say dramatically. "Never mess with mommy" He advised his father.

"I know little man." Asad replied. And then my boy went on to explain what medicine food is with noises.

This entire conversation was so cute! And I love the way you have described each and every movement, each and every action so when we read it, we know every single detail of that room. 

 Like the way Zoya handles Reed, Asad's expressions, Hunter's Actions.

"Mommy, where are your pants? Oh boy! He is going to get it bad! 

That so called girlfriend of his sure had a big bitchy mouth!

But Asad, graciously accepting the fact that somewhere he to failed to protect his girlfriend or understand her was really understanding of him. 

That step father of hers was a jerk and a shame. But I'm mad at hunter for having left back his sister to face him alone. 

You had us all I guess at the funeral in the start. It sounded so creepily like Zoya but then how can the half the town hate her.

Glad to see Reed is still being adorable. 

Loved reading this and can't wait for more to come! 

Edited by Chillichick - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
U always leaves me wanting more from these OS
Sorry to hear of ur illness
Hope u r not turning into a chicken 
Lol
I love this to bits all ur os of late had me wanting more
Wow such a love between she owned him just like he own her
I knew it had to be something so horrid to make her run 
Bcuz why would u run from something so beautiful
She had he big brother he was he everything and when he left all fell apart
Love Reed too adorable the image of his father she named him after his deceased uncle
Glad they got their 2nd chance 
Omg at one time u made me thought zoya die
But then Hunter wouldnt have been flirting 
Loved it wished for more 
A mafia love story os or ss
Plz dont make asad a ghost from something fierce I want to remember him as the dominant possessive lover 


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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome os dear
Loved it
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks Shweta for the spot..
And mojo this was very cute..
Especially little Reed 
The mother son duo were adorable and I dint find it cheesy but only very natural.
Well we should thank the stalker that he stalked or else she would never be back😉😆

Asad too good here..
Believe me if I say I started reading the OS yesterday morning and managed to finish reading today morning with breaks in between😆

But I'm not complaining.
I love these long stories from u..

Glad u working on something else as well.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Beautiful update ..Mother son bond is so well written 
Luv little reed n my asad 2 

Nw i really want to read mafia love story ..😳
anopama thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
2Nd time
HRA is for Hunter Reed Asad
Love it again
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Posted: 7 years ago
In love :) <3 
Nice concept! I am actually speechless
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Posted: 7 years ago
get to read the story nw only...
oh, hw much i luvd ths story...its sooo gud
aftr so long, get to read a fantabulous part of ASYA...
LUVD IT SO SO SO SO MUCH...can u write another one ?? will u ?? its a req !!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Always a pleasure to read again