lil shagun wrote such a beautiful os
amazing part you chose from the show dear
very very well penned down everything
of course after all our most intelligent shagun write this
starting was so beautiful
jodha thinking about jalal and his words
of course jalal was most unpredictable person
his words speak different and his eyes speak different
I always like rahim and jodha bonding in the show
both were sweet hearts
rahim unknowingly play Cupid here
sometimes small kids teach us lot unknowingly
if only we learn from them
I like the way jodha immediately wanted to clear everything soon
she didn't wait for morning
jodha looking at the moon to get some peace that small part was beautiful dear
jalal description was amazing
jodha always come to jalal for complain only he he
how much both claim to hate each other but they can't able to see tear in each other eyes
if this is not love then what is love
jodha was hurt to know that he doubt her and jalal was hurt to know she didn't share her secret
finally jodha tell him truth
both knows they love each other only they don't confess but it necessary to confess something to our love ones
sometime silence speak more than words
shagun dialogues are very beautifully written
in fact very impact full dialogues
I really appreciate your work dear
I enjoyed reading it
thank you for pm
Edited by binduprasad41 - 7 years ago
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