Karam Apnaa Apnaa


Karam Apnaa Apnaa
Karam Apnaa Apnaa


Catwoman IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 01 December 2006 at 10:19am | IP Logged

Guys this RAAZ business is going to kill me.

I have been reading everyone FF and we have alot of creative people out there. 

Well here goes my story


Part 1

Gauri sat in front of the mirror grooming herself inside the unfamiliar hotel room.

She stares at the woman in the mirror.

The woman who married to save her father's honour. A marriage which had brought her nothing but heartache.  On so many occasions she had saved her marriage and now she was get tired of the daily trails.

She finished of her final touched but something was missing.  She looked at her dresser as noticed her manglastra she picked it up and stared at it.  All the memories of the past three months came flooding back as she placed the necklace around her neck.  A tear ran down face, as she was getting ready for Shiv's surprised birthday party.

The party was organised by Vivaan, Shiv's cousin brother.  He had asked her to help organise the whole bash.  For the past  month she had been busy assisting Vivaan.  Vivaan had decided not to inform the family while they organised the event, as Shiv would find out.  This morning when Shiv left for the office Vivaan and Gauri informed the family and presented them with clothes to wear.  Everyone was very excited and happy.

Gauri looked at herself as for the final time as she got up to leave……..

It was getting late Shiv sat in his office and recalled the morning events.

Gauri had woke him up to say "Happy Birthday" she presented him a gift. 

Then she left to go in the bathroom he opened the card, which read

" Happy Birthday Shiv

Tumare ye sal meh tuj woh sab kushi mil ja hai. "

"Get out of my life would be a good start" he murmured.

He opened the gift and discovered a diamond tiepin and cufflinks. 

As she walked into the room he threw the gift and card on the bed and went into the bathroom.

Shiv ran his hands through his hair he hated her with a passion. He had tried everything to get rid of her but nothing worked. She always found a way to be by his side.  The thread holding them together would not break.  He was frustrated and wanted his life back.  He had dreams of his own like marring that someone special who would be close to his heart.  He hated the fact that the family forced him to marry Gauri.  He wanted to remove the past months from his mind with her existence.

Just then the phone rang and it was Vivaan

V : Hi shiv

S: Hi Vivaan  (Shiv smiled as he heard Vivaan's voice)

V: Happy Birthday !

S: Thank you

V: I have spoken to the boys and we are all set up to go out for your birthday.  What do you say?

Shiv smiled to himself "Yeah. Great I could do with a break from work and everything eles".

V: Cool I will pick you up at 6:30pm.

S: OK I just finish up here and go home to get ready

"Vivaan were are you taking me" Shiv asked as Vivaan lead him down the stairs.

V: The guys said they will meet us here!

S: You certain you got the right address it very dark here.

Surprise ! Everyone shouted.......................................


Please comment!!!  would you like me to carry on???

Edited by Catwoman - 23 March 2007 at 3:38am

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hey dats wicked!!!!! please continue
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please continue
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kool cont soon
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Clap cont soon...its gr8...cant wait to read th next part Clap
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awesome...plz continue Clap

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