Ishra- || Tum Hi Toh Ho || Part 14 on Pg 58 on July 19 - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
congretulations for new story
nice story
pls continue soon
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Introduction


In this story Raman is only child of his parents who died in an accident 4 years ago.Now he lives with his Dadi whom he loves very much and do anything for her. Ishita is also only child of her parents.But before 6 years her parents net with an accident in which she lost her father and her her amma in in comma from 6 years. Her father runs an orphanage from last 10 years which is now run by Ishita. Ishita lives in orphanage with her mother itself , because she has to sell her house for her mother's treatment . Let's see how they will meet and fall in love?

Hi guys. So this is the intro of my story.
   I will update part 1 soon.                    

Love
Sarthi

Edited by sharda_123 - 5 years ago
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superb intro sissy ..
thanks for pm Edited by Naazrt - 7 years ago
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both are lost precious relation ship. nice introduction. iam waiting for part 1 .thanks for pm and continue soon😊
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Congo for new story sissy
it was very interesting
thanks for pm and sorry for late buddy..
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character sketch was awesome
thanks for pm and sorry for late buddy..
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U have already given character sketch on page 1,now updt part 1 and edit the title too
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice prolog Dii
Continue soon
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Part 1

In Mumbai
Ishita is in temple praying for the soon recovery of her amma.It's her birthday today. Every year her father do puja for her in the temple for well being and success of her, so that she can get every happiness and success in her life. But from last 6 years she is coming alone for doing puja on her birthday but not for herself, but for her amma.She was praying and her eyes were getting moist remembering her appa, when Pandit hi of that temple comes to her , who knew Ishita and her family from last 26 years ,and Ishita is like daughter to him.

Pandit ji- Kaya hua beti , ro kuy rahi ho.

Ishita- Kuch nahi pandit ji appa ki yaad aa gay. Kasa vo hard bar mara janamdin par mara saath temple ata tha aur mara saath mara liya puja karta tha.

Pandit ji- Ro mat beti tumhara appa jaha bhi honga bilkul kush nahi honga tumhara aisa dekh kar.

Ishita- Aap theek kaha raha ho pandit ji .Aap plz bagavan sa parathna kijiya ga ki vo jaldi sa theek ho jaye. Unka ilawa aur koye nahi ha mara is duniya ma. Bas vo jaldi sa theek ho jaye mujha aur Kuch nahi chahiya.

After taking blessings and spending some time in temple. She leaves for her home that is her father's orphanage where she living with her mother.

On the other hand in Delhi in Bhalla mansion a cute and handsome man is sleeping on king size bed with sweet dimpled smile lingering on his face. An old lady came and start waking him up by lovingly caressing his hair.

Raman- Dadi sona do na. Kal raat ko bhi surgery ki waja sa late soya that. Abh bhaut need aa rahi ha. Sona Do na plz .

Dadi- Uth ja putter kitna soyega. Subha ka 10 Baja gaye ha.

Raman- Bus 2 min Dadi.

Dadi- Tere toh pichla 2 ganta sa 2 min chal raha ha.

Raman get up slightly and lay down on dadi's lap. Dadi start caressing his forehead warmly and kissed his forehead with all her love. After 10 mins

Dadi- Chal abh jaldi uth ja abh aur jaldi sa tayar ho kar nicha aa gay ma nastha lagvati hu.

Raman- OK sweetheart.

Dadi- Chal hat khota na hova ta. Dadi ka saath hi flirt.

Raman- Na apni girlfriend ka saath and wink at her.

Dadi- Chal abh masti band kar aur neecha aa jaldi sa . Ma nastha lagvati hu.

After goes down to prepare food for her ladla pota , Raman after getting up from bed goes near wall where his parents photo is hanged. He take blessings and stand there by closing his eyes and folding his hands in front of their photo. His eyes gets moist

Raman- I miss u ma pa. Kash Aap log bhi mara saath hota toh mujha roz aapsa asa blessings nahi lani padhti aur na hi apka photo sa apni dil ki saare baare share karni padhti. Roz aap dono ka pau chookar aashirwad lata aur apna din ki shurwat karta. Aur roz sham ko aapka saath bath karta aur apna dil ki har baat share karta jasa hum apka jana sa phala kiya karta tha. And I promise ki ma Dadi ka bhi pura khiyal rakhuga hamasha. I miss ma papa. K now bye have to go varna mare sweetheart naraz ho jaye. Bye. And goes to washroom to complete his daily choas.

Dadi who has come to check on him listened his whole conversation and her eyes gets moist witnessing this scene. She prays to God

Dadi- Hey bhagwan mara pota ka liya koy aise ladki behj do jo uska khayal rakh saka aur uska dard bant saka. Jo uki Zindagi sawar sake. 

At the same time in mumbai Ishita reaches her orphanage and directly went to his amma's room. She sat near her amma and start talking

Ishita- Good Morning Amma. Kasa ho aap amma. I missed you alot amma. I missed your paysam jo aap har sal mara janamdin par mara liya apna haatho sa banati thi aur mujha khilati thi. I missed you soo much amma. Appa bhi mara saath nahi ha aur aap saath hota hua bhi mara saath nahi ho. Plz jaldi sa theek ho jaye amma. Apki ishu aap ka bagar bhaut akali ho gaye ha.

And start crying bitterly holding her amma's hand by remembering her old days with her parents.

The caretaker of that orphanage who see Ishita going in her amma's bedroom, came to wish her her eyes gets moist witnessing this scene and prayes to god to send someone who can erase all her worries of her life.




 That's all for now. Waiting for comments.
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Love

Sarthi

Edited by sharda_123 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Very nice start
Raman lost his parents in an accident. ...living with grandma. ...loved it when Raman called her sweetheart girlfriend πŸ˜Š
Ishu too lost her father and Amma in coma ...praying for her recovery
Continue soon πŸ˜Š