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SS: Part Time Lovers. (PART 05 UPDATED!) - Page 5

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Posted: 7 years ago
Great update.
Will Chakor ever shut-up about saving the world, so glad Suraj pointed out some truthful facts to her. Maybe in this SS, she'll actually heed his wordsπŸ˜†!!
 
 
Exciting precap.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Akhi,jabardast update hai,I'm loving this Suraj,loved how he is desperate for chakor and her happy life and future. I agree with his thoughts about villagers πŸ˜› kaash our Suraj was too like that,kya kare In doonon ko mahaan banna padega πŸ˜†

Akhi u rocked the precap"zaroorat pade tho hum tumhe mandap se uta le jayenge...dulhan tho sirf tum meri hi banegi" πŸ‘ 😳 Edited by kavya_989 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
I loved this update, u write like a professional πŸ‘
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow!πŸ‘
Amazing! Love the Suraj u have put in front of us here! He is the best in analyzing the truth and showing it to Chakor!

I got the answer for my question dear!

Interesting precap! Eagerly waiting for the next part!

I think u can write books with all ur ideas and skills! If u do on day let me know it, so I can read ur writings!
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Posted: 7 years ago
This is why I like fanfics, coz they voice out what we actually hope to see...
Amazing update , awesome writing and happy that this Suraj pointed out some facts to Chakor, coz she always wants to save the entire world
I still remember Suraj saying in the show during Yogesh bhai phase: iese hamesha jagat maata bana hota hai...its so true.
I really love this possesive Suraj...another fresh change
Plsss update soon.plsss
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Posted: 7 years ago
@Akhila, kya zabarjast update diya. 
Yeh line:

Zaroorat pade toh uss mandap se utha le jaayenge tumhe, par dulhan tum hamari hi banogi

Uff main marr jawa!!! I can't wait to see Suraj apni dulhaniya ko uda karr le jaaye!!! 
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Posted: 7 years ago
Akhi wat an update...Suraj k dialogues ne hamein
Maar hi daala...ufff❀️
Best sukor story i have read so far..
Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
hi,can u pls translate this part in english pls pls i request u as i dont know  hindi much pls yaar.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by: -K.Kapoor-

Great update.

Will Chakor ever shut-up about saving the world, so glad Suraj pointed out some truthful facts to her. Maybe in this SS, she'll actually heed his wordsπŸ˜†!!
 
 
Exciting precap.


Haha! LOL ikr, she seriously needs to draw the line somewhere! πŸ˜† Hopefully, she'll heed his words here! πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by: kavya_989

Akhi,jabardast update hai,I'm loving this Suraj,loved how he is desperate for chakor and her happy life and future. I agree with his thoughts about villagers πŸ˜› kaash our Suraj was too like that,kya kare In doonon ko mahaan banna padega πŸ˜†

Akhi u rocked the precap"zaroorat pade tho hum tumhe mandap se uta le jayenge...dulhan tho sirf tum meri hi banegi" πŸ‘ 😳


Thanks, Kavya! πŸ€— Wow I'm seriously replying so late! πŸ˜† Took me so much time to get my hands on the laptop! πŸ˜†
Don't worry, after watching the recent OLV's, I'm starting to think our Suraj Babu is gonna be back, with a bang! 
Hehe, the next part has me all excited as I'm writing it!