Posted: 7 years ago
Hi friends,i am aiswarya this is my first ff.i hope u all support me.i have no previous experience in writting ff.so if i made any mistakes please forgive me.


Part-1

Howling voice of the thunder spread all the village.people are afraid to come out side the house.A man along with a pregnant lady is trying to get lift from vehicles but no one stops.the lady is crying with labour pain.he continued asking lift.a car stops near them.the man in the car lowered the and looks at them.

'Please help my wife's life is in trouble...'the man.

A lady in the car tells 'mohan jii lets help them'

'Yes radha' mohan

Mohan tells them to get inside the car.while driving he asks ' what is your name' mohan

'I am shamseer and this my wife padmini'shamseer

Radha patches on the little boy's sholder who is sleeping on her lap.they reached at hospital.shamseer asked for streacture.staffs take padmini to labour room.after some time a sister comes out the labour room with new born babay girl in hand.'congrats you have a daughter'nurse.

Shamseer gets happy and kissed his daughter.he called her madhubala...my little princess madhu...



Special thanks for priya akka u give me inspiration for writing this story and rachana dii too..

Please read & comment...

INDEX

Part:1-ABOVE

Part:2-pg 2
Part:3-pg 3
Part:4-pg 4
part:5-pg 5
Part:15-pg 27
Part:16-pg 29
Part:17-pg 31
Part:18--pg 33
Part:19-pg 36
Last part-pg 38




Edited by aishu007 - 6 years ago
Posted: 7 years ago
Nice start Aishu.
Radha & Mohan helped for Madhu's parents.
Princess Madhu...
Update soon..
Edited by dharsii - 7 years ago
Posted: 7 years ago
Wonderful prologue dear.so our madhu is born and rishab is also with her.waiting for update make it soon.congrats on your story
Posted: 7 years ago
Hey Aishu congrats on the story.
Nice start dear, waiting to read more of it.

Posted: 7 years ago
thank you.i will try to update soon.
Posted: 7 years ago
Nice start... 
Radha n mohan helped padmini n  shamsher.. 
A baby girl is  born shmsher named her as madhubala.. 
Posted: 7 years ago
Thank you friends 😊



Edited by aishu007 - 6 years ago
Posted: 7 years ago
GREAT START KEEP IT GOING AND FLOWING. THUMBS UP
Posted: 7 years ago
lovely starting dear
Congrats for ur first story
Posted: 7 years ago
Congrats for your first story,
Nice start


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