Posted: 7 years ago
BREAK DOWN

Promo


I was coming from school to my home when i heard my mom was shouting on dad that how could he can do that to his own daughter basically to me.my brother noticed me and he was mouthing me to go away and then dad noticed me till anyone can react he grabbed me n locked me inside my room i heard my mum n brother was begging him to leave me. I was thinking what is gng on my brother tried to escape me but everytime he failed n got beaten up frkm dad...



I dont knw where my dad took me we were at some old store where i saw dad making deal that he will give him me if dealer will give him 20 lakhs the moment i realized i was frozen the whole world gone upside down i dont knw where i was gng i was running for my dear life i dont knw how i ended in my home.



 The moment i got in i saw my dad was beating my mom saying that she knws where iam i was about to speak but some one grabbed me n it was my brother he told me that we need to run or else dad will sold me but i was not ready seeing my mom was suffering i was reculent to leave and he finally give up nd lossen his grip i got inside my dad noticed me he started beating me until he was tired i was so weak that i couldnt move everything was so blury nd i faint i didnt knew how i ended being in hospital when i opened my eyes my brother was right on my side



"Sid.."i blurted his name light smile came across his lips



"Kay thankgod you are fine do you need some thing wait let me call doctor" he said



"Where is mom??" I asked him
He didnt rply
Where is mum this time i literally screamed..
She is no more tear start streaming down my eyes he hugged me i hold him for my dear life 



He was 5 years elder then me after that we decided to leave india n moved in london that day i got to knw he was nt my real dad i was adopted n hence he never liked me the view the men was beating me merclessly my brother begging to leave me made my mums heart weak n she died by heart attack i cried cried alot but after that i promised my self that i wont cry again


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Hey guyss this is my first story i hope you people like it kindly like nd do comments i will post twice in a week more keep supporting and you guys can imagine any character you want as there is no particular couple on which i am writing so keep supporting...
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Edited by Hitikalokwani99 - 7 years ago
Posted: 7 years ago
INDEX

Promo -Above

Part 1
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4762751&TPN=4">http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4762751&TPN=4

Part 2

">http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4762751&TPN=6


Part-3

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4762751&TPN=8


Part-4

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4762751&PID=139107570&#p139107570
Edited by Hitikalokwani99 - 7 years ago
Posted: 7 years ago
nice start...
luv to read further..
cntnu soon
Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome 
Would like to read it 
Please pm me further when you update next 
Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update dear 
Would like to read further 
Please pm me when you update next one 
Posted: 7 years ago
Would like to read further 
Please pm me when you update next one 
Posted: 7 years ago
awesome promo
waiting for your update
please update soon
thanks for pm
Posted: 7 years ago
this is amazing and definitely a interesting start so plss plss continue
thanku for pm
Posted: 7 years ago
Interesting :)
Continue soon :)
Thanks for the PM :)
Posted: 7 years ago
Nice prologue...
Cont soon..

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