Reserved.'Cause I am out of focus & your write up needs my full concentration.
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Portraying a major issue of Indian society- something so Deep filled with Sarcasm- a winning Combo!
All through the story, you made sure the topic isn't lost with certain light moments. Good use of wit. You laugh & become pensive- all at once.
Not to forget, The Title is so Apt.
Some of the most interesting phrases were-:
zip-khule-bhaiyyas, multiple-husband-aunties,
"Arey naaahi, do se itna kamaal view nahi milta,"
"Arey shirt-shirt pe depend karta hai, bhai, tumko nahi pata."
Great work, there.
Keep writing.
-Ayushi.
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