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Posted: 7 years ago
sanju di...itna chotusa update kyu??? next wala update bada chahiye...
loved rayas convo. waiting for next.
jaldi Karo.
Posted: 7 years ago
thanks for the pm.
Building up nicely.. Please continue soon
Posted: 7 years ago
Both parts read in one go beautifully written..
i think ram is falling for priya.. let c waiting for next update..
Posted: 7 years ago



part 2
thank God u changed their name ab title bhi de do "opposite attracts" aewwwewewe Ram is so sad he loved his wife but she left him without any reason but happy Priya is there to handle him so in first meet only both have might be fall for each other interesting... you r writing really small part yaar plz write little bit more so Priya is at Ram's home waiting for next part do update it soon...

Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by LuvSSever


Sanju dear,
Nice update again..slowly the story building up.so this is the next meet of Raya.
It seems both Raya slightly smitten with their first meet... :)

So now the next meet,i thought a dinner but it turns with a vulnerable Ram and priya to help him..
Lets see hw this goes...

Ram's pain is understandable...even though his wife cheated on him and used him, for him the feeling was pure..so dard will be there..

Waiting to see hw priya helps him to overcome.

Ek problem is..update was short..😆
But its ok,can understand u r busy...

Continue on ur convenience...

Just now saw, i am the first to comment,.😃😆

Thank u dear for ur lovely comments 
only Love and pure love can heal the pain.hope Priya will.
and about Ram ,and his feeling..pic abhi baki hai mere dost 

Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by Rayaland


Superbdi loved it n thanks for keeping it Raya n now waiting for next part n here priya has fallen in love with ram wow now pls update soon
I had to.as all of u were asking only RAYA
but true confession.it became easy for me to imagine 

Thank u dear 
Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by iluvusakshi


sanju di...itna chotusa update kyu??? next wala update bada chahiye...
loved rayas convo. waiting for next.
jaldi Karo.

time nehi mil rahi hai yaar 
but sure next time will try to update some more 

Thank u 
Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by bishop22


thanks for the pm.
Building up nicely.. Please continue soon
Thank u dear
Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by reshak


Both parts read in one go beautifully written..
i think ram is falling for priya.. let c waiting for next update..

Thank u dear .
Posted: 7 years ago
Me eagerly waiting for the picture ðŸ˜³

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