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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow...
Excuted to read furthur...
Awesome story line...
Waiting eagerly for next😊😛😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by: aarzooarora



Thank you for the help. Yes you can suggest some words which will help , i will definitely let you know. But abhi to pyar ki gaadi patari par bhi nahi utari 🤣

Stay tuned

PH its my pleasure😃
Toh kya humari ship toh sea mein utri hai😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
interesting
continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
interesting concept...
1st chap is gud...
cabir n his jokes...manik is fida on nandini at first sight...
loved it...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome start.Manik to fida hogeya nandu par.Waiting for next update.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Hello everyone ,

yaa I am sorry about the late update but kya karen modiji ne to rest lene ka time bhi nahi diya. All is well now of course.

Chapter-2

After Manik came out of the stance or sorry cabir made him out of it  .Than they both entered the ancestral house looking so traditional every furniture made of fine wood and the look was royal south Indian home.

Akash introduced with all members of the home which includes Rakesh and rishabh also. Rakesh and rishabh are akash s cousins they have joined them for the engagement.  Manik and cabir were feeling like out of place as none of them could speak hindi or English it's only Kannada, everyone only told one word "Swgata"
Cabir as usual looking for some good beautiful gaaon ki goris 😛...whereas manik was thinking about payal girl ...ohhooo They settled in a room where in the front was a big mango garden, it was looking beautiful.

Cabir jumped in the bed said dude main thak gaya...
Manik said come change yourself first than we will go to some site seeing..
Cabir: Whattt...No I ll sleep..i know y you want to do sight seeing ...😉
Manik: tujhe ana nahi hai mat aa Okay. Then he got freshen up came out of the room with camera. He entered the mango garden ..Again he heard the payal chimes..He stopped looked everywhere founding nothing again walked ..Than the payal sounds became strong he stopped looked straight to a mango tree .And guess what to his luck he saw the beautiful again , sitting in the tree, having raw mango. She looked so beautiful that he was just seeing her, than the girl saw him asked him through sign kya dekh rahe ho, he smiled  love sick puppy u know. 

He couldn't understand the language of the girl, he got the idea that she is saying him to help her in getting down. Ohhoo Manik mauke par chauka lag gaya 😆.

Manik helped her, she again asked his name in Kannada, manik idiot got confused 😲. Than she like shouted pointing hand to herself  "Nandini" Manik was thinking what a beautiful name 😳..stance got broken by nandini , she just throw a mango towards him. He said pointing him his name "Manik". She smiled. WOW 😆

Than again someone called her Nandini..she started running manik followed her dheere dheere but to manik's luck she entered in the same house. Than manik got a idea that Nandini leaves here

 

 

Did you like it? Tell me...

 

 

Love,

Aarzoo 😊
Edited by aarzooarora - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awww...
That was cute...I hope nandini ko Hindi ya English bolni aye...warna kya hoga Manik ka...it's good.
Pm me for next one.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Ahaahhh I'm enjoying conpletelyyy⭐️
I'm loving ManBir's haal😆
Manik thoda basics seekh le Kannada ka in case nandu doesn't know Hindi or English😆
Cabira toh wants beauuutiiifulll gaaooon ki gori na.. Beta tu poora Kannada seekh le 5 days mein 🤣
I'm laughing at their state😆 Can't help it😛
The mango garden❤️ Raw mangoes☺️ Bhook lagi hai😆 
Awww Manik ko nandu ka question samajh nhi aayaaa😛 
The way they said their names and their reactions That was so purely adorable!😳
So Manik is gonna take the southie kudi with him.. He is quite determined.. 
I loved the update
Waiting for nandu's POV😳
You write awesome😃
Keep going and update soon haan.. I wanna laugh more on ManBir😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hahaha that's funn..
liked it their chotu si mulakat.

waiting for next update eagerly.
Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
nice update...
first meet was too good...
loved d update...