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Two brothers

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Once upon a time there lived two brothers RK and Maan , who were not related by blood.They were blessed with exceptional powers , but it turned their lives miserable.Their own families betrayed them and hurt them in worst possible ways.But still their love for each other grew stronger.Somewhere far away , a witch predicted that a savior would be born to end the evil on earth , but in doing he must endure pain in worst possible ways.The king , whom everyone considered as a devil reincarnated , tried to find the savior and stop him in every possible ways.

To know more about the journey of two brothers and the ones linked to the prophesy , read 'TWO BROTHERS'- a story of love , hatred , betrayal , lust for power & throne .It shows the relationship between brothers , whether related by blood or by soul.


If u are expecting mushy mushy romance , then it is not ur kind of story...This story mainly focuses on the relationship between maan , RK , Vikram & Vicky ...and how the predictions of the witches & the truth of some characters whom u trusted blindly changes everyone's life...

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HEART OF A SINNER - A COLLECTION OF TRAGEDY , ROMANCE & THRILLERS

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Character Sketch of lead pairs:


1)
Maan Singh khurana (age 19): 

He is a man of great looks , style & attitude...He is very charming , patient (when it comes to his loved ones ) , intelligent & always stand 1st in college...He loves to read...The girls drool over him , but he cares a damn...To him only one girl can make his heart skip a beat & that is Geet Handa...He is understanding , devoted & loving towards RK...He knows how much RK loves him & so always try to keep him happy...To him his entire world is RK...He can kill or die for him...until one day everything changed...
His best buddy is Vikram and he never differentiated between him & RK...


Powers:

 Ability to react faster than a normal human and to possess greater flexibility and with higher/farther jumping capacity.

 Reading minds (but he never takes advantage of that & invades someone's privacy) ,

 Projecting thoughts by touching someone,

Sensory deprivation ,

Sense when someone is lying to him,

Can create a psychic electrical shock on his skin which shocks anyone who comes into contact with him,

 Can physically influence the alchemical elements of nature: fire, water, earth, and air..

Ability to generate various natural phenomena (rain, tornadoes, lightning, ocean currents, etc.) or control the intensity of the weather 


Geet Handa(age 19) : 

She is a epitome of beauty...She has attitude...She is selfish , dangerous , over protective , violent , manipulative , impulsive & seductive..She is very twisted , that's why she sees everything in a twisted way...She loves her twin sister madhu a lot whom she met after 18 yrs...She is fun-loving , crazy ...She is highly pampared by her mother Rano & that made her spoilt & stubborn...She does not like being 2nd in anyone's life specially , in life of Maan & Madhu...& as RK is the 1st priority in both of their lives , so she hates RK...Her life changes completely when she realised that she can't live without Maan , making her obsessed with the king of her heart.To make him as hers , she even didn't hesitate to hurt her best friend Vikram.She did everything without blinking her eyes.

Powers:

Ability to take someone to past

Ability to perceive the future. It may be expressed in vague dreams while asleep, or sometimes when in severe mental stress.


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2)Rishabh Kundra (age 19)

He is a dark prince with drop dead gorgeous look...His eyes always speak volumes , a tale of pain , hatred for his family...He loves only 2 persons in this world - his Madhu & Maan whom he considers as his brother...He doesn't like when maan ignores him & give anyone else his attention...He loves cars...
When he came to know about Maan's love for Geet , he disapproved it instantly as he thinks Geet is not appropriate for his loving & caring brother...He dislikes Geet's manipulative & selfish nature & so he remains always careful from her...

Powers:

Super active senses (can see, hear, smell and understand than normal humans),

 Ability to react faster than a normal human and to possess greater flexibility and with higher/farther jumping capacity.

Ability to erase or enhance the memories of another that is 48 hrs old

 Can create vivid visual illusions and can induce pain & fear on others,

Can control minds but upto a certain limit...

          Ability to bring inanimate objects to life

Ability to overcome other's psychic powers when extremely angry.

Ability to manipulate technology i.e. allows physical interaction with machines, or even a psychic ability that allows for mental interface with computer data

Can heal wounds  and reduce other's pain



Madhu Malik(age 19) :

She is very beautiful , & a complete bookworm...She is warm , selfless , kind , passionate , loving , caring , matured & very calm & reserved...She is like a magnet...anyone can fall for her ...When she was born , her mother Rano gave her to her sister Padmini who can't get pregnant due to some complications...Padmini took her to London where she was living until one day she lost her in an accident...Padmini before dying told her about Rano & geet...Now she is living with them , but still she is angry that Rano gave her away... She fell in love with RK at the first sight & she is the one who changed RK with her patience & love & healed his wounds...

Powers:

 

Ability to have intelligence quotient far above that of a genius level

Ability to create physical duplicates of oneself.

Ability to temporarily merge two or more beings into a single being, which results in a completely new and stronger being.

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3)Vicky Shaw (age 23):

He is the most sympathised character in the story, having troubled childhood...He is a complete loner who never got proper love of his parents.His loneliness made him to channel all his pain & hatred towards RK & he grew up only to fulfill his father's wishes & nothing matters to him other than that.He loves his father like crazy & can do anything for him...For him , his father is his superdad...He has a compelling aura & commanding physical appearance.He has a special hatred for RK because of his dad..But does he really hate him???.
He loves Sameera very much , but due to his dad's constant interference in his love life & his bad influence on his personality , he lost every good thing in his life , including Sameera(Sam). He wants Maan out of his way through Sam, but failed , bringing the most important twist in the story.


Powers:

 

Can control mind from a great distance without looking at that person or touching him ,

Ability to mentally communicate with others from a distance.

Can erase memories or regain the lost ones ,

Great speed,

Ability to transform into a gaseous, mist, or fog-like form

Ability to react faster than a normal human and to possess greater flexibility and with higher/farther jumping capacity.

can create fire-bolts,

Immune to other psychic powers except Pari having sharp tongue.

His blood if someone takes in fewer quantities, then that person gets his immunity, but if taken in large quantity then that person gets completely dependent on it.



Mahira Khan (age 20)

She is a beautiful witch of 200 yrs old , but she stopped ageing after she attained 20 yrs. She was so beautiful that even King of Neotopia & his elder son Prince Vicky couldn't stop themselves from fancying her.She hates the King & Queen  of Neptopia as according to her they are the reason for the disappearance of her mother , the eldest witch of Neotopia whose prediction shook the whole supernatural world.She is on a run & trying to get info about her mother's whereabouts.She is Sam's best friend although they are different from each other in every aspect.
She likes to tease Prince Vicky & watches his anger on her with amusement.She is the one whose true love will heal prince Vicky's all wounds.

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4)Vikram Kapoor (age 19): 

He is a guy who possess a heart of gold...very nice & friendly to all...He is a popular guy like Maan & is best friend of him. His father is a CID officer & is always busy.His mother is dead when he was a little kid.His only family who gave him love of parents , is his uncle Yash , who is a renowned doctor.After Maan & RK came in his life , his loneliness gradually disappeared. He is currently dating his other best friend geet , but it was just an open relationship for her. He loves Geet truly , but she was unaware of this.He only confessed his growing feelings for her to Maan.
Although he has no power , but his involvement with other characters dragged him to a new world of supernaturals , shocking him.Gradually , he accepted his fate & fight back like a true man.

Powers

Ability to copy or absorb another's powers or skills temporarily.

Ability to cancel the superpowers of others for temporarily.

Ability to see clearly in total darkness.

Ability to send darker souls to hell after burning their souls in the pit of hell fire.

Ability to communicate & see lost souls..



Sameera Shergill (age 17):

She is warm , kind & selfless , but her love for Prince Vicky made her to do things which she regrets till now .But Vicky's negligence & sins made her to look for other source to find solace & love and she got it in the form of Vikram. Inspite of loving Vikram , her love & care for Vicky never lessened and she vowed to give Vicky his share of love & respect that he deserves.

Powers:

Physically , she is abnormally gorgeous , darkly seductive & sexy.By touching , she can create lustful desires in others.No powers work on her.


Ability to read or sense the emotions and/or control the emotions or feelings of others



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Supporting characters:
1)RV( Ranveer D'costa) (age 19): 

He is very much bitter due to the ways king of Neotopia handles the govt... He secretly hates the king as he killed their sister Misha due to minor mistake.He wants revenge & waiting for the right moment. He also hates Mohini who was appointed in place of Misha (RV's sister) in the special force of the king.

Powers

Have nearly same powers like Maan.

Ability to react faster than a normal human and to possess greater flexibility and with higher/farther jumping capacity.

 Reading minds

Can create a psychic electrical shock on his skin which shocks anyone who comes into contact with him,

Ability to generate various natural phenomena (rain, tornadoes, lightning, ocean currents, etc.) or control the intensity of the weather 



4) Aditya Roy( adi) ( age 22 ): 

  Best friend of Rajveer & Head of Security forces of Zymond...He is also cousin of Prince Rajveer of Zymond i.e son of youngest son Vishnuvardhan' of King of zymond...He can kill & die for Rajveer...He is right now helping him to find about Maan's real identity...He considers princess Dipali as her baby sister & very possessive about her...

Powers

By touching he can make anyone speak truth

Ability to track an individual or object through supernatural means; sometimes referred to as "pathfinding"


can create powerful wind attacks.

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3)Dev Khandelwal (age 23):

He hates RK due to NT's death whom he loved more than himself.He blames RK for her death & so wants to destroy him.But he respects maan a lot.

Powers

He can sniff scent & feel touch of a person through his personal belongings and can track him.


4)Naintara:

Ex of RK. She used to be known for her beauty and charm , and taking it as an advantage , she used to seduce boys and later break their hearts. RK was one of her prey.But after she broke his heart and remaining strength he had left in him , she soon realized that she had started loving him.But it was too late and he refused to believe her love for him , making her to end her life.


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5)
Rajveer Singh( age 18) : 

He is the younger prince of Zymond i.e, son of eldest son Raghuvardhan' of King of Zymond, which is guarded by the Spirit of wind.He keeps tab on his sisters after finding them with the help of Adi , his cousin & the head of security force of Zymond.When learnt about Maan's powers whom his sister is dating , he became curious & alert at the same time.He used his spies to get info about his biological parents whom Maan inherited his powers.
He wants revenge from king of Neotopia & his elder son Prince Vicky for his father's death.So , he disguised himself as Knight Rajveer , but falls in love with the beautiful fiancee of Prince Vicky , who happened to be the Princess of Templar.

Powers:

extremely skilled in creating powerful wind based attacks that can destroy a city & even a country..
He is excellent in mortal combats & is skilled in using any kind of weapons.


Dipali Rathode (age 17):


She is flawless - a rare beauty.She is innocent & very naive. For her everyone is good and no one can be bad.She is the princess of Templar & was engaged to Neotopia heir Vicky , but later fell in love with Prince of Zymond (Rajveer) and got engaged getting the consent of Water Spirit.

Powers

She can heal wounds by touching and can create powerful water attacks.

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Negative characters:
1)king of Neotopia (kabir Raizaada- age 59 yrs):  main antagonist...For him relation holds no value...As long as anyone serving him right purpose , he keeps him alive & after he no longer needs that person , he kills that person without any hesitation...ruthless & cold...He has trapped Vicky in his false love & care to serve him his purpose ( to get RK & then become king of the kings)...His ruthless training on Vicky , spoiled his childhood & made Vicky a ruthless person...



2) Samar Singhania (age 19): 

He is purely evil & a playboy...King of Neotopia appointed him to keep an eye on Madhu. For him, everything is a game & he likes to win it by hook or by crook.

Powers

His powers are that he can change his human form into any other human form. He can also become invisible for some minutes. ...has immunity only through Vicky's blood...


3) Mohini Iyer (19 yrs): 

She is the puppet of king of Neotopia. Has same powers like Sameera & has a crush on RK.

Powers

Have same powers like Sameera, but not her immunity...only gets immunity by Vicky's blood...





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In previous updates

KING OF NEOTOPIA AND THE WITCHES HAD AWAKENED THE MIGHTY GODDESS OF NIGHT AND EVIL CURSES 'NYX'...THEY HAD PROMISED HER TO OFFER SACRIFICES OF HUMAN BLOOD AND KEEP ON PLEASING HER , IN RETURN OF LEADING THEM TO 'RIVER OF YOUTH'...


RK  WAS FURIOUS WHEN GEET BLAMED HER FOR MADHU DISAPPEARING WITHOUT TELLING HER (WHEN RK REVEALED MADHU ABOUT HIS POWERS AND SHE FREAKED OUT)...HE PUNISHED GEET BY COMPELLING HER TO WALK BAREFOOT FOR A LONG DISTANCE...AFTERWARDS , HE FELT GUILTY AND APOLOGISED TO HER...BUT HE COULDN'T HELP HIMSELF TO SHARE HIS PAIN TO HER BY AGAIN COMPELLING HER AND THIS WENT ON AND ON...GRADUALLY IT MADE THEM TO SEE EACH OTHER IN A DIFFERENT LIGHT AND THEY WENT CLOSER.

RK'S SINS INCREASED WHEN HE COMPELLED DR. RASIKA TO GIVE WRONG DOSES OF MEDICINES TO VICKY , WEAKENING HIM.

ON THE OTHER SIDE, 
THE MOONSTONE POWER BROUGHT BACK VIKRAM
FROM DEAD AND GAVE HIM SOME POWERS WHICH HE WAS YET TO REALIZE... AS HE WAS A NON-SUPERNATURAL BEING ON WHOM MOONSTONE WAS USED , SO THERE WAS AN EVIL SIDE-EFFECT ON HIM TOO THAT CAME OUT WHEN HE TORTURED MOHINI..

RISHBALA WERE INSIDE THE TENT WHEN HE HEARD FOOTSTEPS...HE WENT OUT LEAVING A SICK MADHU TO GET A SHOCK TO SEE NEOTOPIAN WITCHES WITH SOLDIERS WHOM HE INITIALLY MISTAKEN AS TUSKER SOLDIERS...

KING OF NEOTOPIA HAD ORDERED THE WITCHES SULTANA AND RAZIA TO IMPRISON MAAN ALIVE AFTER HE FLED WITH THE AMULET OF ICE PHOENIX - THE GUARDIAN ANGEL OF WAR...AND RK TRIED TO PUT UP A FIGHT WITH THEM TO SAVE HIS BROTHER...BUT HE WAS NOT SO STRONG AND WAS HELD IN CAPTIVE...

VICKY , ADI AND MAHIRA FOUGHT SIDE BY SIDE AGAINST THEM...THE POWERFUL BLACK SMOKES SUCKED ALL VICKY'S POWERS WHEN HE TRIED TO SAVE RK...ADI WAS WOUNDED BADLY WHEREAS RK , MAHIRA SAFELY WENT BACK TO DEHRADUN...

THE BLOW CAME WHEN ALL SAW THAT THE PERSON FOR WHOM THEY WERE FIGHTING (MAAN) HAD DISAPPEARED...
WHERE WAS HE?

ch 106 & 107 updated

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Part 106 and 107
Finally they are back in real world
hate samar and yamini
razia sultana got their punishment
rk accepted his mistake infront of madhu
hope so vicky forgives rk 
loved maaneet moments
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