New Asya OS ~ Final Destination ~ - Page 4

Lovely OS...
Thanks for the pm...

awesome os jas..
loved it...
asad saved zoya and they fell in love...
totally enjoyed dear :)

Finally I am here Jas with comment 😊

Originally posted by: AkaiBara

I 😳

dekho dekho kon aaya 😎

wese meko pehla spot by chance mila tha

I know tune bol rakha tha par mai pehle yaha aaya res kiya and phir tera msg dekha 😆

anyways jese bhi hua

I'm first yeahhh  🥳

Congratulations Bidu🥳

come back as writer wali huggie kahan hai😲😡

Originally posted by: AkaiBara

Me

mene jab prologue part read kiya tha meko laga yeh simple sa case hai

like Zoya shadi se bhaag kar aayi hogi

Asad usko mazaar pe betha dekh raha 

or

or

or

Zoya ke bhai wagaira ne Asad ko thapad maara 🤣

par tune toh meko ek dum se shock kar dia

or haan yeh banner toh mene shayd pichle saal dekha tha 😲😆🤣

Chup beth oye 😡 Khali pili rumor phellaing😲 humara jhagda hone se pehle dikhaya tha 1 saal hua kya usse😆

Ab han kabhi kabhi shock bhi deti hun tujhe nahi pta kya🤣

PS - i laughed out loud when every1 said pehli wali storry pehle do that looks happy 1🤣

Originally posted by: AkaiBara

Myself 😎

abhi review time

amazing concept bestu

tussi chaa gaye 👏 👏

Shukriya😎🤗

jese ke mai pehle hi bol chuka hoon tu bohat improve kar raha hai

pehle bhi acha lagta tha par ab lagta hai dill se likha hai ❤️

samajh nahi aaya na

read Z3 (mera fazool sa happy shappy AsYa wala case) and then TSB ( mera asli wala love 😳)

teko khud hi samajh aa jayega

Boht ache se samjh aa gya ab main badi writer hun dil ki gehrayion se likhti hun Bidu 🤣 samjh gyi na😆

back to this OS

meko Asad and Dillu ka jhoot bohattt acha laga

wo kehte hain na kisi ke bhaly ke liye bola gaya jhoot jhoot nahi hota

bilkul wesa hi laga

Are aisa kab hua ki maine Dillu-Zoey ko ekdum best show nahi kiya... kabhi kabhi i feel i make them more loveable than Asya🤣

awww my baby Asad loves Zoya 

bohat si sweet sa confession tha

simply wow type

jab kuch spcl nahi hota toh i write simple hi besides simple jyada dil se hota hai bestu no typical rehearsed lines & all😉 (giving a pat on my back😆)

ab plz dosra OS post kar na

i'm dying to read wo rota hua Asad 🤣

chal me off now

lots of love se bhi zaida love u ❤️

hugs 🤗

Ok main reply kar lun man kiya toh post kar dungi thak jata hai na yeh baby☺️
hugs back🤗

Originally posted by: AkaiBara

haye o meri bak bak queen 🤣 kitna bolti hai

sab se pehle huggie 🤗

ab jaldi se unres kr de

itne lambe lambe updts tabhi milte hain kyunki main bak bak karti hun warna tum jaise hi complain karenge bas itna sa updt😲

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Awesome OS Dear👏😊

Thanks Juhi😃

Pehle muje laga ki Zoya ya fir shaayad koi 3rd person bhi Asad ko chamaat maar sakta hai par vo Zoya hi thi😆. Par Zoya ne vahi react kiya jo koi bhi ladki karti thi.

IK it was so unexpected 4 any1 2 guess it right 😆 & yo chmaat was so realistic acc 2 situation😉😆

Loved how Asad convinced her to stay wid him n he kept an eye on her so dat she don't try to suicide again. Zoya cud not say anything to him as she cud not trust anyone.

Asad got her in a woman's shelter where she met Dilshad😃

Zoya's situation was too bad. Aise rishtedaar ho to dushman ki kya jarurat hai😡. Asad ko uss tharki buddhe ko bhi jail me daalna aur uski biwi ko sab bataana chaahiya😡.

See i did made them pay😳 but since d OS was already getting way 2 long toh i focused more on Asya & them taking step 2wards their future😊

Asad n Dilshad healed Zoya n she started living like a normal girl even doing jobs😊

Asad n Dilshad did right in not revealing to Zoya abt their relation for time being. Dilshad's explanation was nice. If they told her she may wud not have opened up so soon.

Asad n Zoya's confession was so nice n beautiful😃. Zoya got betrayed by her own relatives but she got some good people who genuinely loved n cared for her.

I m really glad u liked d story Juhi😃 & i always like reading ur reviews😛 thanks 4 d comnt

Originally posted by: --Mirage--

A beautiful os

Written well

Asad n Dilshad helped Zoya to build herself

And that prank on Asad was really lovely

Thanks 4 ur review dear😃
I m glad i have some readers after so long😆

Originally posted by: --Mirage--

Keeep writing dear 

Waiting for your updates

Soon ...Soonish hopefully😳😳

Originally posted by: asya555

Awesome

Originally posted by: Amina...

WOW!!!
BEAUTIFUL OS DEAR...!!! 
VERY WELL WRITTEN...!!!. 
LOVED IT...!!! 

Originally posted by: MOnkEy_rAngEr

Loved it 

Originally posted by: ksen

very nice os

loved it

Originally posted by: -jerry-

l❤️ved it

Originally posted by: anopama

Loved it 

Patiently waiting for more asya

Originally posted by: Gouri_Joshi

awesome OS dear 

loved it

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

well written..

Originally posted by: raspi

nyc

Originally posted by: Linsie

Lovely OS...
Thanks for the pm...

Originally posted by: preetiasya

tat was awesome

Thanks 4 ur wonderful reviews ppl😃

Hopefully this week i'll b back on track 😆😳
Edited by jas91 - 7 years ago