PV OS /SS Maid (Made) for Me AKA Nikki's OS - Epilogue - page 16

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Just a short note to say thanks to my Crazy Chatting Cohorts.
This Story was birthed out of a comment that was made in one of my SS's Sweet Home Coming.  Hence the original name, Nikki's OS.  It took root and I could not shake it and  had to eventually pen it down.  

But so many credits has to go out for this story.  From the plot, the the title and even a song title.   I really had fun with this story because of this.  It was supposed to be just one part, but that didn''t work out so I am still working on it..

So consider this story a collaboration of crazy minds put together instead of just my story.😃

A big thank you to the first lady of the forum for the inspiration and assistance with the plot and your crazy cohorts Jhilly Bean and Tessie Pooh for the rest.

I hope you will enjoy this one as much as I am writing it.   ❤️


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Maid (Made) for me


Chapter 1 - page 1

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Chapter 2 - page 3

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Chapter 3 - Page 5

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4721374&TPN=5

Chapter 4 - page 14

Epilogue - Page 16

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Yash walked into his bedroom, already starting to unbutton his shirt.  He was earlier than usual as he had he function to attend so he wanted to have a quick shower and change.  Suddenly he looked up as he heard the shower running through the open bathroom door.  He was confused and apprehensive.  Then he looked on his bed.  There were ladies clothing on his bed, a very plain saree to be exact.  He walked towards the bathroom apprehensively. 

 

There he beheld the most desirable sight he had seen in a long time.  A raven haired beauty in his shower.  She had her back to him but he could not tear his gaze from her voluptuous body.  He stood riveted to this vision.  Then she turned, her head thrown back and her eyes still closed as she rinsed her hair.  The soapiness of the shampoo running down her delectable breasts.  Then, still with her eyes closed, she reached for the sponge and body wash and started lathering herself.  She was absolutely gorgeous.  Suddenly, he realised that he was staring at a strange naked lady and his was getting more and more aroused.  He felt like a pervert.   Very reluctantly he moved away and leaned against the wall trying the calm himself down.  He let out the breath that he was holding.  He wondered who she was and why she was in his penthouse.  Then he looked around and saw that everything was neat and tidy.  His bed was made and the shirts that he left on the bed this morning was not there anymore.  That beautiful specimen must be the cleaning lady that came to clean up once a week. 

He took his laptop bag, put back over his shoulder and placed it strategically so as not to display the evidence of his arousal to everyone outside his apartment.  He went back into the lift and went to the coffee shop downstairs to wait for her to leave. 

 

He had been living in the penthouse suite of Scindiya Boutique Hotel and Resort Mumbai.  This was the latest of the chain that they owned throughout India.  This was his baby.  He had been involved here from before it was even constructed.  It was the latest but also the biggest and most prestigious of  all their hotels.  His penthouse suite had its own lift that worked with its own code.  Only he knew it and their head of cleaning.  She had asked him a couple of months ago if she could get a lady that temps for the hotel as a cleaning lady could also clean his suite.  She really needed the money.

 

He had difficulty marrying that vision with a cleaning lady.  As that thought flashed through his head, his lift opened and she came out.  She wore the simple and really very worn sarree that was on his bed.  Her hair was still wet but tied up and she had a pallu over her head. She had a big bag with her, probably for her extra clothes.  He eyes were downcast as she walked out of the hotel.  She looked so different.  Dressed like that one could easily miss her.  His eyes still stayed in the direction of where she had left.  He finally got up as he now had very little time to get ready for the function he had to attend.  He decided that he would not think of her again.  It was very inappropriate in every way imaginable.

 

Yet a week later he went home early again.  Even earlier than the previous week.  He walked into the sound of music blaring from the kitchen area.  Again he walked apprehensively in that direction.  He didn't see anybody over the counter and walked closer.  Then he saw her. She was in the floor on all fours, washing the floor.  She was singing at the top of her voice, while scrubbing the floor.  But that was not the most noticeable thing about the scene.

 

She was wearing nothing but a vest that was clinging to her body as it was moist with sweat.  And the tiniest shorts.  Bent over, you could see her delectable cheeks protruding.  Her hair tied in a ponytail / bun.  The errant strands were plastered to her sweaty face.  She kept wiping at it with the back of her hand.  It was like a scene from a movie.  He walked closer and he accidentally knocked a cup off the table.

 

Aarti jumped up at the sound.  She got such a fright and then she saw the man.  She backed away and tripped over the bucket of water. She screamed and he rushed towards her to catch her.  But as he reached her, he slipped on the now wet floor. He twisted himself so that at least she had a soft landing.  On him.  

 

He landed with a hard thud, with her on top of him.  But the discomfort her felt with the weight on top of him was not the discomfort that he wanted to feel.  And though he was sure his back would hurt after this, he could happily remain like this for a long while.

Aarti was still stunned by what had happened.  First her fear for the man suddenly appearing and then the fall.  And now she was lying on top of the sexiest man that she had possibly ever laid eyes on.  He had the most mesmerising eyes, gorgeous hair and kissable mouth.  And his smelled divine.  She could not tear her eyes away or move.  She knew somewhere in the back of her mind that she should be scared but she wasn't.  He looked familiar.  Then she recognised him. The family photos in the suite.  She wasn't sure which one he was, but she had always thought he was the most handsome of the brothers and imagined he was the owner of the suite.  And here she was lying on top of him.  Her boss.

Again she tried to jump up but due to the slippery floor she slipped again and fell back on him. 


"Sorry sir, so sorry" she said and scrambled off him on all fours again to get away from him.

He too moved to get to a section where it was not slippery.  Then he realised his mistake, he was crawling behind her, his face practically in her sexy bottom. He groaned.

 

Oh no, she thought.  Now he was upset and she couldn't afford to lose this job.   She turned around, but that was a mistake, her face was just millimetres away from his.  She moved back self-consciously, pushing her hair behind her ears and looking down. 

"I really am sorry, I will clean it up.  Please don't fire me.  I need this job."

"Did I say anything about firing you." he said as he finally manged to get on his feet. 

He went to the radio and switched it off.  He looked at her still sitting on the floor.

"Well, are you going to clean it up?"

"Yes, sir."

He left her there and went to the bathroom.  He started undressing.  He threw his clothes on the floor angrily.  He was angry at himself.  He shouldn't have come here.  He promised himself he would get her out of his mind.  But he couldn't stop himself.  He packed up and left his office as if he was being controlled by an outside force.  He needed to see her.  He went earlier because he didn't want to catch her in the shower again but who would have thought that she would have worn that ridiculously sexy outfit.  Damn!

 

He got in the shower and realised his second mistake.  Ever since that day that he saw her in the shower, he had visions of her joining him in the shower, like now.  He shut down the hot water off and turned the cold water on full blast. 

 

Aarti got up as soon as he left the room and started cleaning furiously.  She had tears in her eyes as she cleaned up her mess.  She was so scared of losing her job.  And she felt embarrassed about her reaction to him.  Surely he must have seen how flustered she was in his presence.  It was absolutely ridiculous.  He was out of her league.  He was her boss.  The boss of a job that she desperately needed. 

 

She realised that her bag was still in his bedroom.  He must never find out that she used his shower.  It was the one time in the week that she had a decent bath and washed her hair properly.  In the house where she rented a room, there was no decent bathroom. She had to warm water on the stove and wash in a small basin.  She was looking so forward to it and today she would miss it.

She was done with her work and had to get her bag.  She was feeling even more self-conscious now.  She would never have dressed like this if she had known he would be there.  But he was never there.  He never came home that early. 

 

She knocked on the door softly.

"Come in"

"My  ... My bag."

He nodded.

She got her bag and walked out.

"Miss ... What is your name by the way."

"Aarti Dubey."

"Miss Dubey.  I don't think you can leave the suite like that.  I suggest you use the shower in the guest bedroom to and change there as well."

She was so happy.

"Thank ... Thank you so much, sir."

 

She wouldn't thank me if she knew what is going through my mind, he thought.

 

The next day Yash was sitting opposite his head of housekeeping.

"Mrs. Khan, what can you tell me about Aarti Dubey?"

"Why, did she do something wrong?  I hope she didn't steal from you?  I really thought she was honest I am so sorry."

"Relax, Mrs. Khan.  She didn't do anything wrong.  I just need some information on her."

"Well she approached me for a job, but she didn't have any documents, no school certificates or identity documents so I could not offer her a job in the hotel itself.  That is why I arranged for her to do temp jobs for the residential guests.  But she came across as educated when we spoke.  And so far I have only heard good things about her."

"Why does she not have documents?'

"She wouldn't say."

"How often does she work and how much does she earn?"

She told him.


"Please have her come and see me."

"I have no way to contact her.  But she will be here in two days and I will get her to come see you. Why may I ask?"

"I want to offer her a full time position I will pay her out of my own pocket of course, seeing as she has no documents."

"That will be good for her.  She really seemed desperate for this job.  I hope it works out."

 

Aarti was so nervous she felt like a tightly wound up coil.  She was summoned by him, but Mrs Khan wouldn't say what it was about.  She was rubbing her hands together, and shaking on the inside. 

"Miss Dubey."

She jumped when she heard the voice. 

"Please sit down"

She sat down again.

"You must be wondering why you are here"

She nodded.

"I have a proposition for you."

She looked at him, surprised.  Still not saying a word.

"Miss Dubey, have you lost your tongue?"

"No  ... No ... I ... I am just surprised that's all."

"Would you like to know what the proposition is?"

"Yes, please."

"I want to retain you as my cleaning lady, and I want you to start cleaning here as well, in the executive suite.  And Kunal, my PA will instruct you what to do.  You would be doing things like going to the post office, the bank, buying supplies like tea and coffee and also basic office jobs like filing."

"Really?"

"You can read can't you?"

"Of course I can read."

"Good.  Can you cook?'

"Very well.  I mean, yes I can cook."

"I want you to cook for me too.  I am tired of hotel food."

"I can do that."

"So you would have a full time job. And this will be your salary." he gave a piece of paper with the amount.

She was shocked.  It was 5 times what she was making now.

"But sir, I don't have any documentation."

"I will employ you in my personal capacity, not the hotels.  So I will be paying you myself."

"Why are you doing this sir?"

"The polite thing to do is just to say thank you Miss Dubey."

"Thank you sir."

She walked to the door.

"When do I start?'

"Monday.  Advise Mrs Khan to let the people that you are cleaning for know that you are not available anymore.  You are now exclusively mine."

"Excuse me."

"Exclusively my employee." he said.

"Monday, then sir." she said and walked out.

Yash, settled back into his chair.  Still very baffled by his own actions and his interest in this girl / woman.  All he knew was that he wanted her around him.   Maybe once that happens he will be able to get her out of his system.

 

Aarti was overjoyed.  Finally she was had a job that paid her a decent salary since she had come to Mumbai.  She could move out of the slum that she was living, in a room with a whole family, without even proper ablution facilities and maybe find a place in a ladies hostel.  And finally she would get enough money together to get her documents.  She would have to re-apply for them as she didn't want to go back for them.  She never ever wanted to go back there.  She would rather starve to death on the streets of Mumbai.

 

 

Aarti checked in with Kunal the Monday morning. 

"Sir, what should I do?'

"Well, you can plan your own day.  If you want to clean up the apartment first or if you want to start working in the office first.  It's up to you."

"What do I do in the office?'

"First make us a cup of coffee and we can sit and discuss it." he smiled.

She made them coffee and then he had a nice comfortable chat about what he duties would be.  She liked Kunal.  He was so friendly and made he feel at ease.  They were laughing over something that he said when the boss came in.

"Well this is very cosy." he said raising his brow.

"I was just explaining her duties to her."

"This doesn't look like work to me."

Aarti jumped up.

"I promise you it is sir.  Would you like a cup of coffee too?"

"Stop, jumping when I am around Miss Dubey. It is getting annoying.  And I don't like coffee." he walked towards his office.

"What kind of a person doesn't like coffee" she said, not meaning to say it aloud.

"What was that Miss Dubey?"

"Nothing sir."

"Can you get me a cup of tea please?  I am the kind of person that prefers tea over coffee."

Darn it, he heard her.

"You haven't tasted my coffee." Again her mouth worked faster than her brain.

"Can you just bring my tea please, Miss Dubey?  Surely that is not too much to ask."

"No sir, of course not."

Aarti wanted to die.  She was such an idiot to antagonise this man that gave her this life changing opportunity on the first day.  She found out from Kunal how he likes his tea and made it for him.   She quietly went into his office and set the tray with the tea on his desk.

Without looking up he said.

"Thank you."

"Pleasure." she said.

That day she cleaned the office thoroughly and re-arranged the kitchen.  Kunal sent her on an errand to buy some supplies for the office.  Then she went to his apartment to clean, though there wasn't much to do.  And she couldn't cook as there was no food in the kitchen.  She waited for him to tell him that.

He was surprised to still find her there.  He got caught up in a crisis and it ran late.

"What are you still doing here?"

"Waiting for you?"

"Why?"

"You said I must cook?"

"And so?"

"There is nothing to cook with."

"Why did you wait till this time to tell me that? Or couldn't you come to my office.  It's late."

"Have you eaten?'

"Miss Dubey! Please I am tired."

"You didn't answer my question."

"Fine, no I have not eaten.  Happy?"

"No not at all.  I can't just leave and you haven't eaten.  You employed me to cook.  Can I at least get you something from the kitchen?"

"Then will you leave."

"Yes" she smiled.

"So what would you like?"

"If the chef has butter chicken and Naan, I will have that.  Have you eaten?"

"You mean supper?'

"What else would I mean?"

"Nope."

"Then get something for yourself as well."

"No thank you.  I have to go.  It's getting late and I am walking home."

"You were going to walk home now.  Why don't you take a taxi?"

"I can't afford it.  I will order your food.  You go shower."

"Miss Dubey, you work for me.  Stop ordering me around.  I will go and have a shower, but you will order food for both of us and when we have eaten I will get a driver to take you home."

"It's not ..."

"I've spoken.  Now get the food."

"Yes, sir" she said aloud. "Grumpy much" she said softly.  But clearly not as softly as she thought as he turned back and glared at her as he was walking into his bedroom.

 

He stood in the shower, thinking about his enigma.  She was such a strange person.  Sometimes nervous and overwrought, sometimes forward and outspoken, and apparently quick of wit and definitely not uneducated.  He chuckled to himself.  His life was a bit more interesting since her appearance.  He still did not know what it was about her that made him want her to stay despite her annoying habit of wanting to take charge of him.  And he wondered what he felt when he saw her and Kunal this morning.  All he knew for now was that he didn't like it. 

They sat and ate in silence at first.

"Can I ask you a question?"

"I have a feeling you are going to ask me no matter what I say?'

"Aren't you lonely? Away from your family?"

"I miss them, but this is what I chose.  This is for my family.  For the business."

"I don't think I would have liked to live away from my family."

"Do you live with your family?"

"No."

"Why not."

"I don't have any"

"Oh"

"I grew up in an orphanage."

"Oh" he said again.

"It wasn't so bad.  They were nice people.  They made sure I had a good education."

"Did you grow up here in Mumbai?"

"No, on Bhopal."

"Why did you come here?'

"That is a story for another day.  I have to go now."

"Fine, I will get Vheer to get a driver for you to take you home.  Tomorrow I will give you money to get groceries for the apartment."

"Fine, good night Mr. Scindiya." she said as she left.  She stood in the lift thinking she actually had a nice time with him.  At least he wasn't grumpy all the time.  She smiled. 

 

The next day she came to the office first.  He was there already.  She made his tea and coffee for her and Kunal.

"Aartiji, please will you do some filing today.  I just don't get time to do it.  Even the cabinets are a mess and must be re-arranged.  You don't have to do it all today."

She tackled her task with gusto.  And she was finished quite quickly. 

"Kunalji, why do you still have paper files?"

He shrugged.

"Most companies these days are paperless.  They store everything electronically.  It so much easier.  And if you can have access to everything via your computer.  Obviously there has to be back up on a server but it is so much easier then paper files."

"We have considered it, but office automation is costly."

"I could do it."

"What?'

"It's my area of expertise"

Kunal looked at her in disbelief.

"I am a trained IT specialist.  The company that I worked for in Bhopal specialises in office automation"

"But ..."

"Yes, I know, I am a cleaner.  I don't have access to my documents.  Hopefully soon I can get them.  Then maybe I can get a proper job in the field that I have studied."

"Where, will you get them?"

"I will have to save up and re-apply for them?'

"Did you lose them?"

"No it was taken from me. Anyway, I am done and have to go and do grocery shopping now.  Vheer said the driver will get me at 2h00.  See you tomorrow Kunalji"

"Good bye."

Kunal looked up and saw Yash standing in the door way.

"Did you hear that sir?'

"Yes."

"We have to help her"

"Yes."  He said and went back into his office. 

He was torn, he really wanted to help her but he knew once she had her documents, he would probably never see her again.  And he wasn't ready for that.  And it seemed that she was not ready to talk about her past in detail.  He knew he had to help her.  He could always offer her a job at SE.  But he needed her to trust him first.  To open up to him.  Otherwise how could he help her?  He would have to work at winning her trust. 

 

And these feelings he was having for her had to stop.  It was probably because he didn't have a woman for a while.  He was no saint.  He had his fair share of women.  Of late he was so busy running this resort as well as his functions as GM of the business that he had no time to date.  Not that he lacked propositions.  He decided to make use of one of them. He was sure that he would not drool and fantasize over her like a teenager anymore after that.

 

Now that he knew her capabilities, Kunal used her for more admin related work.  She even had a desk and a computer now.  Yash encouraged this.  But she still tried to maintain his home and cook for him as well.  But she often got so engrossed in her work at the office that she rushed out of the office late afternoon and had to rush to cook and clean.  Luckily as she was doing it every day there wasn't much cleaning to do.  So it was mostly the cooking and she would be gone by the time he came home.  So she didn't have much contact with him.  She hoped every day that he could once again share a meal.  She had really enjoyed that.  But alas ...

 

She was so late that day.  She had wanted to complete the task that Kunal had given her.  She flew out of the office at 5h00. It was Friday, her day to do the big clean, the way she did before she started working in the office.  Luckily she didn't have to cook and she knew through Kunal that he was out for the evening.    She cleaned the floors and scrubbed the bathrooms and vacuumed and polished.  She knew she would be late, but he had given instruction for her to be taken home every day if she leaves after dark.  She would take a shower in the spare room as she normally did.  She was so glad that she would be moving out of the place she was living soon.  She had given her landlord her notice of moving out.  She had found a ladies hostel, very basic, but with a small kitchenette, bedroom and bathroom with a shower.  She couldn't wait.  But she would miss her showers here.  It almost felt as she belonged here in this place, with him.  She was definitely developing feelings for him.  But she knew he was way out of her league. 

She went to hang the shirts that she had ironed in his wardrobe. She was totally and completely tired and she also had not eaten which did not help.  It was late but not yet dark. She decided to just lie down on the bed for a minute and then get ready to go home.

 

Yash's date had gone well.  He had been out with her before and he knew they had similar interests.  She was a business woman and she was very modern.  Nothing like waiting till marriage.  She was happy to be his stress reliever without any strings attached.  So they came back to his place after dinner.  She didn't even wait till they reached the apartment.  She started kissing him as soon as they got in the lift.  He was deprived for so long that he reciprocated.  As soon as the lift opened he led her to his room through the dark apartment.  They kissed again and pulled her down on the bed with him.  Imagine his surprise when they landed on top of someone lying on the bed.  He got up quickly and switched on the light. 

 

She sat up now as well.  She was still rubbing the sleep from her eyes.  Her hair was all tussled.  She was still in her work attire. Today it was a very short, tight fitting spaghetti strap dress.  She looked so damn sexy.  It made him angry that he wanted her so much right now. 

"Yash who is this?"

In his fascination with his very hot and very inappropriately clad employee, he had forgotten Ishita.

"Miss Dubey! What the hell are you doing here?"

"Sir. I am so sorry.  I was tired and then I was only going to lie down for a moment after I finished my work and then ... Oh my word it's dark outside.  I must have fallen asleep."

"Yash, who is this?" Ishita asked again irately.

"She works for me."

"Why is she in your bed?"

"No, ma'am it is not what you think. I worked in the office till late then I still had to clean the house and I thought sir would not be home early tonight."

"So you thought you could get in his bed.  Is that it?  Women like you are really common"

"Excuse me.  Women like me?!  What does that mean?  I am the one that accidentally fell asleep here.  You are the one that came here with a man that you are not married to do who knows what.  I wouldn't call anyone names if I were you."

"Yashu, are you going allow her to speak to me like that?'

"Miss Dubey, this is my guest. Please control yourself."

"Oh guest, is that what they call them these days?'

She heard a sharp intake of breath from the woman.

"Miss Dubey!"

"Fine, I will go to the other room to get dressed and leave you to your guest'."

She got up and went to the guest room.  What kind of women does he entertain here she thought.  And besides she wasn't even that pretty.  He could do so much better.  And she was mean.  He is an idiot for choosing such a woman.  She was angry at him and she was, sad.  She didn't want him to be with any other woman.  She was angry at herself for feeling like this.  She had no right.  He was not hers and would never be. She felt so close to tears.  She decided to shower anyway.  She worked hard and felt sticky and hot.

 

"Ishita, I am so sorry about all of this.  I will get a driver to drop you home.  I want to have a word with ... with her."

"I can wait.'  She tried for a while to get him to change his mind but after a while she gave in.

"No, I will call you tomorrow. Really I am very sorry." he led her to the lift and called downstairs to arrange the driver.

As soon as she was gone he went to the guest room and stormed in.  She was standing there covered in a towel.  She was busy drying her hair.  Again he was rooted to his spot, his eyes glued to her.  She swung around when he barged in, accidentally undoing the towel and it dropped to the floor.  She stared at him in shock and quickly bent down to pick up the towel and she ran back into the bathroom. 

Finally, he moved out of the room.  He waited for her in the lounge.

Eventually she came out.  She looked around for his companion and realised he was alone.  She couldn't look him in the eye. But she couldn't resist asking.

"Where is she?"

"Miss Dubey, she left."

"Because of me"

"This inappropriate behaviour and attire of yours has to come to an end.  What happened tonight was unacceptable."

"My attire? I get hot when I clean and you are never here.  Well almost never."

"I understand that, but when I am here I expect you to be dressed decently.  And you can't be sleeping in my bed" he said but as he said it he realised there was nothing he wanted more.

"Sir ... sorry."

"Just go Miss Dubey."

"Yes, sir"

She turned around.

"She is not the right girl for you."

"Miss Dubey, what did I just say about inappropriate behaviour?  That includes what come out of your mouth most times. Will you please leave now?"

"Sorry" she said again and left.

He needed her to leave otherwise he was not sure what he would do to her.  His behaviour would be highly inappropriate too.  He had thought that he would get some much needed relief tonight and now he ended being even more frustrated than before.  What was he going to do about this woman?   She would be the death of him.  

Edited by B-onesie - 7 years ago
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Res. Love the title! 😆

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So chatterbox and her hulk! 😆 Aarti was mortified that the boss caught her in inappropriate clothing, little does she know that he had seen everything! Poor guy ended up with both physical and mental torment but he is a good guy. Her worn saree tells him of her plight and he goes on to find out and offers her a better job. Sure he may have other motivations of having her close as her nude form awakened some baser instincts, but for the most part he really just wants to help her. Maybe in his subconscious he wants to save the damsel in distress... Ever the tubelight! He feels instant attraction, he feels possessive but does not recognize his growing feelings for what they are. Not to mention she frustrated him enough to seek release with another woman but spoils even that prospect, and then the towel drops and he sees her, again! I wonder if Aarti will ever learn of the first incident? 😆 more than the physical, she fascinates him and she challenges him, and she does not shut up. He keeps falling but remains ever the tubelight!

Aarti appears to have had it rough, having lost her documents she lives in a place only a little better than the streets. I admire the fact that without documents she still chooses to make an honest living, however small. She's tenacious, and smart. She's like a cat, always landing on her feet no matter how hard the tumble. She too feels an instant attraction to her boss, even from just a picture. That he is willing to help her makes her regard for him rise even higher and her feelings grow. She too starts feeling possessive! Oh my I loved how she handled Ishita! 😆

I just love this story, Honey-Bee! Edited by Tessaloni - 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tessaloni

Res. Love the title! 😆

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Yes I'll TRY to comment as soon as I get time.  😃
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beautiful start I like very much 😃a little bit of comedy a little bit romance, and a little bit of mystery, lovely story update soon 👏Edited by bongalisoo - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautiful dear and the title is just so splendid and leaves a lot to be desired Im just left to wonder what this maid will be up to with Mr yash, you can just see that they want each other intensely, oh honey Bee you and Nikki did. A great job, I just can't wait for everything to unfold...update soon dear
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First, love the title , so appropriate and second more inspiration like that cause its so much fun.😛
The begining is like dream you wake up from, what are the chances of finding a beautiful stranger in you shower and what a way to meet, 😆 literally falling on each other, albeit unintentionally but still .
Like the slip, 'you are now exclusively mine' , the man is a goner, he is completely at loss over his attraction to her.. of course dating wasn't going to work , but he had to tried, right!
Oh Aarti she really knows how to get in trouble around Yash and keep apologising, although she does not take crap. Poor Ishita, scold by Aarti and Yash could not get rid of her faster. I wonder how long Yash will resist her and what Aarti will do next to infuriate him . More soon. This is too good and love the humour.


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Posted: 7 years ago
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intresting start.. eager to read more
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Awesome story sis.
Wow Aarti is totally an express train she can't seem to keep her mouth shut.

Well Yash is Yash. Once a tubelight always a tubelight. Whoa the clean freak here is a snob wow that is something 😆

plz cont sn nd tnx 4 d pm sis am going 2 start kissing the ground you walk on.