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Kaho na Pyaar hai:-new ff

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Posted: 23 November 2006 at 5:30am | IP Logged

dis happens 2 b my very 1st fanfic so if u guyz hate it do tell me but a little gently coz im a sentimental personWinkTongue

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Posted: 23 November 2006 at 6:37am | IP Logged
Now tht Devikas truth has been revealed to Gauri, she decisdes to join Shiv in his office once again.She and Shiv have been getting along really well after tht incident
Early next morning Gauri wakes up takes a shower and comes out wearing a beautiful navy blue saari drying her wet hair..her eyes stray towards Shiv and she cant help but stare at him and suppresses a smile when she sees him sleeping like a child. She goes upto him to wake him up from his slumber but as soon as she approaches the bed she slip and falls heavily on top of him..Shiv wakes up with a start and stares into Gauri's eyes…they keep on staring for a while and gauri finally breaks off the contact and stands up blushing…

G:sorrie…who main phisal k gir gaye thi
S: it okay…acha yea batao k time kya hua hai
G:Jee 8 30 ho rahay hain..aap naha ktayar hoo jaein   main aap ka nashta lagati hoon..

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Posted: 23 November 2006 at 6:39am | IP Logged
sorie it was short but illcontinue in a while
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Posted: 23 November 2006 at 6:58am | IP Logged
wow that was a good start
keep up the good work Clap
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Posted: 23 November 2006 at 7:30am | IP Logged
awesome!
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Posted: 23 November 2006 at 7:37am | IP Logged

it was nice, a good start yes.

Continue soonSmile

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Posted: 23 November 2006 at 7:59am | IP Logged
thnk u!!Tongue
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Posted: 23 November 2006 at 8:19am | IP Logged
Shiv goes to take a bath..he comes out in his towel and looks around for his clothes tht gauri may hav laid out…when he sees none he scratches his head nd opens his closet trying 2 dcide wht 2 wear

Shiv goes to take a bath..he comes out in his towel and looksaround forhis clothes tht gauri may hav laid out…when he sees none he scrathes his head nd opens hiscloset trying 2 dcide wht 2 wear
Gauri comes up looking for shiv wondering whts taking him so long long opening the door she says
G: shiv come down ur breakfasts getting cold…..
She stares around in wonder coz da room is a mess…clothes lying all around
G:wht is going on here
S:oh good ur here I cant decide wht 2 wear
G:wait..
She opens the closet and takes out a white suit nd a blue shirt..shiv grabs it nd goes out 2 change

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