Originally posted by: jas91
Riddhu this is not done 😆 tune bhi is song pe OS likh daali 🤣 haww mujhe pata hota main nahi karti, vaise bhi abhi tak ka shayad sabse wahiyaad hai
Maine bhi likhi hai start middle sab ho gya but ending kuch samjh nahi aa rhi 1 week se 😆
I m sure main bhi ending main blunder karungi 😆 😆
Hoshiyari mat maro ha!! Aap jaise logo ko yeh line shobha nahi deti 😆
Khair coming 2 OS its beautiful 😃
Liar liar pants on fire! 😆
poor Zoya ke liye aaye tears ðŸ˜
Asad ke liye bhi bura lga but jyada sad Zoya ka part tha
thank goodness Rehan samjh ke piche hat gya btw QH wala Rehan yahi karta uski feel aayi mujhe 😊
Yes ye Qubool hai wala hi Rehaan tha
While writing Rehaan I only imagine SS
& end main finally reunion & Asad bada daring nikla Sidha Dulhan ke room main entry maar li 😆
Daringbaaz dulha...dulhan hum lejaenge 🤣
Acha acha bolun kya hehe
but truth is u could have done better cuz yeh tera best nahi tha I know cuz I read ur work b4
Finallyyy!! Honest reviews!! Meko malum che! Pehle to ek ghante me likha...dusra ye naya forte tha mere liye...to yes...it can be claimed as my worse..so ha even I am not satisfied...thank u seriously 🤗 And abhi apka wala hai na 😃
so can I ask 4 2nd shot wid ur best foot 4ward 😉 😳
Rest I enjoyed it
Mere life me commerce be already hurdung macha rakhi hai...inki problem kaise solve karu..dekhungi if I get something... Sab 26th k baad ab...bohat saari writings Sochi hai..including ff's...
To tab hi kuch
Jaane se pehle mujhe ashirwaad do main bhi jaldi finish kar dun MERI WALI 😉 😆
Kaha na aap jaise logo pe ye sab acha nahi lagta... Bache yeah sab moh Maya hai 🤣...dedh hoshiyari nahi ha...aap meko ashirwad do plzz n mujhe bata sakte ho mere paase kuch help miljaaye
Thank u so much once again juju!! Jas likhne me ajeeb lagraha tha bade ho na 😆
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