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*New* AsYa OS : Ae Dil Hai Mushkil !!! - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
Riddhu this is not done 😆 tune bhi is song pe OS likh daali 🤣
Maine bhi likhi hai start middle sab ho gya but ending kuch samjh nahi aa rhi 1 week se 😆
I m sure main bhi ending main blunder karungi 😆 😆

Khair coming 2 OS its beautiful 😃
poor Zoya ke liye aaye tears 😭
Asad ke liye bhi bura lga but jyada sad Zoya ka part tha
thank goodness Rehan samjh ke piche hat gya btw QH wala Rehan yahi karta uski feel aayi mujhe 😊
& end main finally reunion & Asad bada daring nikla Sidha Dulhan ke room main entry maar li 😆
Acha acha bolun kya hehe
but truth is u could have done better cuz yeh tera best nahi tha I know cuz I read ur work b4
so can I ask 4 2nd shot wid ur best foot 4ward 😉 😳
Rest I enjoyed it

Jaane se pehle mujhe ashirwaad do main bhi jaldi finish kar dun MERI WALI 😉 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by: jas91

Riddhu this is not done 😆 tune bhi is song pe OS likh daali 🤣 haww mujhe pata hota main nahi karti, vaise bhi abhi tak ka shayad sabse wahiyaad hai 
Maine bhi likhi hai start middle sab ho gya but ending kuch samjh nahi aa rhi 1 week se 😆
I m sure main bhi ending main blunder karungi 😆 😆
Hoshiyari mat maro ha!! Aap jaise logo ko yeh line shobha nahi deti ðŸ˜†
Khair coming 2 OS its beautiful 😃

Liar liar pants on fire! ðŸ˜†
poor Zoya ke liye aaye tears 😭
Asad ke liye bhi bura lga but jyada sad Zoya ka part tha
thank goodness Rehan samjh ke piche hat gya btw QH wala Rehan yahi karta uski feel aayi mujhe 😊
Yes ye Qubool hai wala hi Rehaan tha
While writing Rehaan I only imagine SS 

& end main finally reunion & Asad bada daring nikla Sidha Dulhan ke room main entry maar li 😆 
Daringbaaz dulha...dulhan hum lejaenge ðŸ¤£

Acha acha bolun kya hehe
but truth is u could have done better cuz yeh tera best nahi tha I know cuz I read ur work b4

Finallyyy!! Honest reviews!! Meko malum che! Pehle to ek ghante me likha...dusra ye naya forte tha mere liye...to yes...it can be claimed as my worse..so ha even I am not satisfied...thank u seriously ðŸ¤— And abhi apka wala hai na ðŸ˜ƒ

so can I ask 4 2nd shot wid ur best foot 4ward 😉 😳
Rest I enjoyed it

Mere life me commerce be already hurdung macha rakhi hai...inki problem kaise solve karu..dekhungi if I get something... Sab 26th k baad ab...bohat saari writings Sochi hai..including ff's...
To tab hi kuch 

Jaane se pehle mujhe ashirwaad do main bhi jaldi finish kar dun MERI WALI 😉 😆
Kaha na aap jaise logo pe ye sab acha nahi lagta... Bache yeah sab moh Maya hai ðŸ¤£...dedh hoshiyari nahi ha...aap meko ashirwad do plzz n mujhe bata sakte ho mere paase kuch help miljaaye 

Thank u so much once again juju!! Jas likhne me ajeeb lagraha tha bade ho na ðŸ˜†

Edited by riddhi1206 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awww yay yippee..
My little birdie finally wrote something.

And it was beautiful...

Mane bol kya thi aa badhu so he chhe tu?
Mane maja aawi read karwama 

And I also noticed the line about meena...

Hero no 1🤣  recently Dekhi Kya..

Well I like the song...it's nice...

What you wrote was nice interesting and emotional...
Liked rehaan also..

Too good once again and I am waiting for the other incomplete work you have written.

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Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Awww yay yippee..

My little birdie finally wrote something.
Birdieee u Tamara hi wait karti hati...🤗

And it was beautiful...
Sachi ki khali khali jhut bolo cho? ðŸ˜‰

Mane bol kya thi aa badhu so he chhe tu?
Dimag che have... Ideas bohat hai pan execute nathi karva avde che...mari paase bau badha idea che Surbhi Di she puchna...roz naye nikalte hai but execute nahin hopata acha se ðŸ˜†

Mane maja aawi read karwama 
Vahiyad hato.. Tame kya maja aaivi?😕

And I also noticed the line about meena...

Hero no 1🤣  recently Dekhi Kya..
Na Maine aae line bahu game che...ane movie pan ðŸ¤£

Well I like the song...it's nice...
Mane song okay lagyu..intensity mast che
 Kharekhar 

What you wrote was nice interesting and emotional...
Liked rehaan also..
Thank u thank u thank u so much
Rehaan is always a sweetheart.. Season 2 se

Too good once again and I am waiting for the other incomplete work you have written.
Thank u sooo much birdies I wrote it for u to was waiting for ur review

Edited by riddhi1206 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
mindblowing
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hey Ridzi
It was Awesome...loved it !!!
do write more...would love to read
Thanks for pm 😊

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Posted: 7 years ago
Hi dear!
Just read your pm
Sorry, couldn't comment before as I was on a leave from IF for sometime
But finally I am back and catching up on all the pending stories
And the one which definitely brought a huge smile on my face was this OS from you
Honestly, was missing your writings and I am so glad that you wrote it
The main attraction being the song
The song has managed to be my addiction since it's release and having a story on asya with the song is such a great treat to have
And hats off to you for such a superb execution of an amazing plot
It was just very flawless and had the most perfect ending for it
Eagerly waiting for your next work already
And once again sorry for not commenting before. Hope you would forgive your muski di😭
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Posted: 7 years ago
Beautiful OS...
thanks for the pm..





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