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Kya Yehi Pyar Hai Updated P14 (Page 7)

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Posted: 06 December 2006 at 5:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by armaghan0

so sad i just read itr today but i am not able to figure out why did kripa marry prithvi she could just tell him the truth anyways great job


remember, prithvi is evil!!!

anywayzz.. great partzzz just donno who told her that angad's marriage was pakki in childhood..

who is that evil person.. priya'z mom??

yaar u must continue asapp!! dont worry tho ill wait till u get free

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Posted: 06 December 2006 at 7:21pm | IP Logged
Just for you'll i managed to write a part for you guys... Wink

Kripa is now a widow [ i had to kill someone off, cause new ppl will come in as the story moves on ]

Meanwhile angad puts on a happy face when deep inside is full of pain, anger and sorrow. He decides to move on with his new life with priya. Finally in their bedroom we see priya sitting on the fully decorated bed with her ghoongat covering her face.
Angad with courage finally takes off the ghoongat from her face, priya just stares at his face. She then says
" by the way mr. angad khanna, what did u buy me. And btw, i only like designer stuff and all my stuff need to be by armaani, banana republic, or some expensive brand. Afterall i am priya khanna now.
Angad is thinking to himself " oh god, now my wife is a full b---h... He just goes to sleep thinking about all his times with kripa.

He wakes up the next morning, takes a shower and finds that priya is already dressed. He asks her to make up the beds as he is getting late
P- Angad, what do u think of yourself. I am not your maid, ask someone else to do it. She just leaves the room in a rage
A- I hate her, i wish she'd just disappear.

We then see kavya and anjali walking down the stairs happily. They then tell everyone that they have decided to go to america as kavya needs to continue his work and at the same time they can spend time together. They will be on vacation for 5 months. They bid everyone goodbye but while leaving anjali thinks to herself that she wishes Kripa was there.

Meanwhile Kashish is sitting lonely and bored. She is sad that both her sisters left, and now she has nobody. She is just sitting sadly on the chair when sujal comes.
S- hey kashish, tum kya kar rahee ho?
K- kuch nahee..
S- to mere saath shopping chalo ge?
K- Kya shopping, is waqt?
S- haa, kyun. I need new working clothes and i dont have any sense of style.
K- kashish chuckles
Sujal is just mesmerized by kashish's beauty and just keeps staring.
K- chaliye?
S- Ha chalo... Embarrassed
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2 months passed ...

We see a lady wearing buisness clothes. We see her wearing high black heels, a black blazer, and we see her wearing black pants. When she turns her face it is none other than KRIPA...

We see her walking into a mansion and she is greeted by a girl named Kaajal

http://media.santabanta.com/gal/bollywood/kaajjalsony/10.jpg

Kaj- Hi di, tum kab ayye?
Kri- I just came

Kri- Btw Kaajal i need you to help me, i want to make a new design. { kripa is a famous fashion designer }

Then we see Angad, Priya, Sujal, Kashish, Shaila, Dilip, and dadi ( angads grama ) all in 2 cars following each other.

We then see Kaajal and Her Bua and Kripa eating.

( btw kaajal's bua also lives with kripa, so its kripa, kaajal and bua in one house )

Bua, kripa if u dont mind, i called a few relatives over for dinner i hope you dont mind.

Kripa- Not at all bua, as it is i wont be returning late from office tonight ...
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I know this part was confusing so i'll just clear some things up.

- kaajal and her bua live with kripa, how they came in the story? i'll tell later.

I'll update in the next hour Wink
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Posted: 06 December 2006 at 7:53pm | IP Logged
hurry up, PLEASE Embarrassed
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Posted: 06 December 2006 at 9:03pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 06 December 2006 at 9:04pm | IP Logged
omg continue soon!
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Posted: 06 December 2006 at 9:26pm | IP Logged
After eating, Kripa leaves to go to office. Meanwhile, we see angad's whole family including Kavya and Anjali cause they came back all stop at a huge mansion. We see fountains in front of it and we just see kashish and anjali staring. It is the most beautiful house they've ever seen. Then bua and kaajal welcome them in the house.

Priya- Bua is this ur house?
Bua- no, it is one of my closest friends. She is like a daughter to me and like a sister to kaajal.
Bua tells them to enter.
They all look around and just gaze at the sight. The place is so clean.

They all sit down and start talking. Bua and Kajal doesnt really like the way how priya is behaving with an attidude.

Just then kripa walks in

Kripa - Kajal mera file kaha hai?

Then we see kripa shocked and just staring. The whole place becomes quiet.

Bua- aree kripa, aao na beti.. betho
Kripa sits as everyone is left stunned.
Dilip - Bua, where is the owner of the house i'd love to meet them.
B- actually shes here right now, its none other than kripa.
All are just left shocked.
Anjali- Kripa, yeh tumhara ghar hai.
Kripa - Ji
All are just shocked.
Kripa- bua, i have to leave and.. bua just cuts her off.

Bua- i dont care, you will stay home tonight. Why are you always working, dont you ever live?
Kripa just stays quiet.
Dilip- So kripa what do u do?
Kaajal - uncle, kripa and i are both fashion designers we have our own clothing line and everything...
Priya - oh thats nice, so are you married?
Kripa- she sees everyone staring, " I was, 2 years ago "

Priya - kya matlab, aapka patti kaha hai?
Kripa - ji woh, mera patti is duniya me rahe nahii.
All are just left shocked. Angad, Anjali, Kavya, Sujal and Kashish are just speechless.
Priya - so ur a widow?
Kripa - unfortunately... " excuse me "

She runs up to her bedroom and starts to cry at the window. She sits by the window cill and just stares outside the window letting the cool breeze sway upon her light skin.

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Kripa finally goes back downstairs after getting a hold of herself. She goes downstairs and everyone is having dinner. She goes downstairs and sits beside bua and kajal. Everyone is talking but she is just quiet the whole time. Angad notices it and feels weird.

Priya- vaise kripa, have u ever thought about getting married? I mean ur still 27, ur still young.
Kripa- hmm.. i never thought about it. I have karan, bua aur kaajal, muhjhe kuch nahee chahiyee.
Priya- karan?? karan kaun? is he ur boyfriend?
Angad started to get jealous...
Kripa- no he is my son ...
Angad- Kripa u have a son?
Kripa- not biologically, i adopted him. Hes only 4 months old.

Kashish- Kripa that is so sweet, can we see him.
Kripa brings him down everyone is just mesmerized by him...
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plz leave comments guys Wink
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Posted: 06 December 2006 at 10:34pm | IP Logged
very gooddddddddddddddddd.........me liking it very much........... Clap
please continue soon..... Smile Tongue Big smile
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Posted: 07 December 2006 at 1:22pm | IP Logged
very gudddddd!!!!!!!!!! Clap Clap PLEASE update soon!!!! Smile

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