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Kya Yehi Pyar Hai Updated P14 (Page 2)

aishika_pyar_5 Goldie

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Posted: 21 November 2006 at 4:47pm | IP Logged
Hey everbody thanz for the comments. And trust me the raaz will be revealed soon.

First im gonna make a inroduction for the other couples then im gonna go back to angad and kripa

Anjali was in the mall looking for a new outfit beacuse her best friend karishma was getting engaged.

She went into the store and started trying on sarees.

The first one looked like this: brand_id=72&code=ABP635

She wandered around in it but she didnt like it.

A: Its not the right fit something else will do.

She tries on another one but it was just not suitable for her taste.

She tries on this one: 5.jpg

A: now this is the one.

She is looking stunning with her hair slight waved and curles with makeup and the matching bangles and jewelry and shoes.

Just then someone comes in who is looking at her magnificent beuaty. And for the first time he feels attracted to that girl. He lookes at her for minutes but not able to stope looking at her beauty.

K: excuse me miss but i must say this dress suits you perfect.

A: you think i waz thinking of a blue but since u think so......

K: trust me you could not look more beautiful.

A: so what are you here for?

K: My sister is getting married so i cam to look for a sherwani.

K: do you think you could help me pick out one.

A: sure....It would be my pleasure anjali said blushing while kkavya gives his dashing smile...

They look through many sarees but is unable to find the right one. They try on nearly 10 different sherwanis when anjali finally picks out the right one.
Here is his sharwani:

He gets the one on the top left corner. Even anjali was shocked at how handome he looked. Finally they got changed. WHen they were about to go there seperate ways anjali's dupatta got caught with kkavyas suit button. Kkkavya and she went close to eachother to get rid of the button but before they could do that they were lost in eacothers gaze that they forgot that they were complete strangers. Just then kkavya's phone starts to ring and the get back to reality.

A: (blushing non stop)sayz we will meet late

K: if destiny persists we wil of it dosent we wont

They shake hands and leave their seperate ways.

Im so sorry guys i knoe im breaking my promis but my sister has to use the computer so i will continue with S-k and A-k raaz at 7:30 and will do a small part for kkavya and anjali.



sidra01 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 21 November 2006 at 5:53pm | IP Logged
awsome thats ok atleast u con ur fanfic is uniqoe and mysterious Wink Clap
aishika_pyar_5 Goldie

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Posted: 21 November 2006 at 6:32pm | IP Logged
Back to anagad and kripa

They reach kripa's house and they both go in. Kripa runs upstairs to her room. Kripa lives alone btw .
she is standing by the window with tears running down.

A: Kripa tu roh raye ho

K: silently keeps crying

A: she then turns to angad and sayz u really want to know the reason of after 4 years of knowing you i have never shed a tear

K: krips( nick name is krips) may kuch samage nahi ata

A; lets sit down and talk about it

K: It began when i was 5 years old. my father had planned a wedding since i was 5. When my mother dies when i was 12 i was left alone with father. I had no one as my father was a rich buisnessman and never had time for me. The maids and seravnts became my family when i nedded them. Finally i was 23 and had just finsihed university in london. I was coming back when i was seated with father and a lady and a man. Father then explained to me about this marriage and that these were my future to be inlaws. I was shocked. I ran up to my room with tears and i father trhought i was shy at the name of my marriage. I sat on the bed and cries my eyes red as i missed my mother and knew she would have been the only one who couldve stopped father. Finally I was married. I didnt know he was till the night of our marriage. I was getting dressed in the bridal finery when i saw a shodow of my mothers spirit. I ran to her and she said this mariage will bring me knoe hapiness and she will show me the path to apiness one day. I was crying in her lap when the pandit called me down to the ceremony. Mother suddenly vanished. With tears rolling down my face i opened up my hand filled with henna and i said when willl hapiness come. What is written in my fate oh bhagwan. Father then came as i wiped my tears . He then escorted me to the alter.

Kripa henna was like this: 4/mehndi-shaadi-dark.jpg

Her clothes were like this:

I then sat their and placed my hand in his hand. He then lifted his head and it was none other than pritvi. He gave a wicked smile. Finally thw edding was over and i was sitting on the bed for my suhaag raat. He came in and he slowly took of myy dupatta and jewelry. Leaving me with my bridal clothes on and my hair down. I then said that i wont sleep with him beacause i was a virgin and would like to remain one. I explained that until i have fully fallen in love with him and get to knoe him only then can i fulfill my right as a wife. Phritvi was so mad that he took me and threw me to the side whe i hit my head and i started to bleed. He then collared me aand tried to rape me. I finally got free of his clutches and managed to scream for help. Excet everyone went back home so we were alone in the guest house. Finally he caught me and he raped me. I was lost of my innocence. Day by day went by and he abused me. He would break my abangles till my hands bleed, slap me till i wad red, beat me till ui was black and blue. One day i dad died and i had noe where else to go. i fnally managed to escape one day and thats how i am here before you.

K: angad you know till i met you i didnt know waht love is and finaly i experienced it when i met you.

K: ha angad i love you I love you immensly.

A: Kripa i love you too. Kripa i will avege this. For every tear and blood drop i will make him suffer day by day just like you did.

A: They then hug eacother and he kisses kripas forhead and the scene slowly fades away.

Hey guys this was the raaz and trust me much more is to be revaled. And S-K part will be coming up very soon..
BengaliChica92 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 21 November 2006 at 6:54pm | IP Logged
Plz go on!
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Posted: 21 November 2006 at 9:18pm | IP Logged
wowwwwwwwwwwwwww........toooooooooooooo goodddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd........
keep up the good work going.. Clap
please continue waiting for SK's part eagerly... Big smile
aishika_pyar_5 Goldie

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Posted: 22 November 2006 at 6:06am | IP Logged
Time for S-k

It was a rainy afternoon. ( as we all knoe rain is s-k main romance product LOL ) Back on topic.

kashish was waiting at the side for a rickshaw and it was raining heavily and she was starting to feel cold. She was coming back from the market after buying cloth for kripas clothes as she had to design them as she had a show next week. Suddenly a limosine black window winded down. It was none other that sujal.

S: excuse me miss would you like a ride.

K: thank you so much sir . She remembered that he was sujal one of the richest busisness men in india. His company was always sucessful on the market.

S: I remember you.

K: Pardon

S: oh i had gone to one of your fashion shows to promote business and you make quite exqusitre designs.

K: thank you it means alot coming from you.

S: No problem so where would you like me to drop you off.

S: at my place in mumbai. She tells him the adress. Kripa lives seperate to kashish but the live like nearly 12 minutes away from eachother.

K: she hops out the car with her bags and leaves.

S: sujal is still mesmerized with her beauty and innocence as he had never seen somone as beautiful as her. styll shocked he sees a jewelery box with heavy mathcing silver jewelry and he sees her wallet in there too. He decides At night he would drop it off at her place

Night Time

K: kashish is busy making dinner while wathching the news. She wearing a grey sweat pants with a pink long sleve shirt with a low neck. She was expecting kripa any minute to pick up the designs. suddenly the doow knocked.

S: do u remember me

K: sir...aap....isi waqt?

S: im sorry but you left your wallet and jewelry in my car so i went through your wallet and forund your adress.

S: its ok i was just leaving. By the way sweaat pants take you good. Both laugh. And hes about to leave when.

S: excuse me

K: yes sir

S: aapka nam kya hai

k: mere naam hai kashish...kashish sharma. she says blushing non stop.

s:your name is as beautiful as you are

k: thank you sir

s: btw i prefer to be called sujal

Both blush and leave.

She closes the door and lies back on the door and thinks what just haappened to me i was like a complete fool. she laughs and gets back to dinner.

I gotta go but K-A and A-k will be coming up tomoroow as i gotta get dressed for university.
aishika_pyar_5 Goldie

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Posted: 22 November 2006 at 10:04am | IP Logged
Aww no comments....well i styll continue and i love you guys so much who posted the sweet comments now im gonna continue
berkeleygirl818 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 22 November 2006 at 10:09am | IP Logged
i just read it, it is LOVELY Clap , but i prefer reading AK patrs. but the other parts r good 2!!!!!!! PLEASE continue soon!!!!!! Smile

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