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Angadzgirl

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Posted: 23 June 2005 at 11:34pm | IP Logged

wow...it was Aweosme....plz continue...

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Posted: 24 June 2005 at 2:34am | IP Logged
Continued

In the hospital

Kripa regains consiousness. The doctor breaks the news to her. She is devastated. She is crying non-stop. She burries her head in her knees and continues to cry. She refuses to take her medicines. The nurse tries to console her.

Nurse: Kripa, please aapne ko samalo! Kabhi kabhi aisa ho jhata hai. sab Bhagwan ki marze hain!  Tum please aapne aap ko sazaa mat do. Aapna dawaii le lo Kripa.

Kripa refuses to even look up. She is still crying!

Nurse: Magar tum bohut lucky ho! Tumari accident tumari pati ke car se hua aur vo tuhe yahan forun lekar aaya. varna, tum mar jhate!

Kripa suddenly looks up. In a meek voice she asks: Pati?

Nurse: Haan. Tumara Pati. Bohut acche insaan hai! Puri raat bahar the. Bohut parishaan lag rehe the! Tumse bohut pyar karte hain! Aise pati iz zamana mein milna bohut lucky hota hai! Ab tum please dawaii ka lo!

The nurse gives her her medicine and Kripa takes them

Kripa to herself: Aab ye Pati kaun ho saakta hai?

Athena90

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Posted: 24 June 2005 at 2:40am | IP Logged
Let me post the next part as well......

Angad comes to see Kripa whenever she's asleep. He doesn't want Kripa to know about him! He feels very guilty! The nurse always notices this and tells Kripa about it when she wakes up

Nurse: Kitna ajeeb hai tumari pati. Jab tum behosh thi, tab tumari paas the. Jab tum hosh mein ho, tub tumari paas nehi hain! Jab tum sote ho tabhi tumhe dekhne ke liye aate hain! Tumari liye kuch lekar bhi nehi aate hain! Bohut ajeeb hai! Maine unse keh diya ki aagle baar jab vo aayenge, tum tumari liye kuch lekar aaye!

Kripa is very confused.

Kripa thinks to herself: ajeeb toh hai! yeh pati kaun hai? Aur aakir chata kya hai?


coming up: Angad and Kripa come face to face!

Athena90

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Posted: 24 June 2005 at 2:40am | IP Logged
hope u guys like it! 

stonex

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Posted: 24 June 2005 at 2:56am | IP Logged

its great

please continue fast

 

Senorita Sanaya

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Posted: 24 June 2005 at 4:49am | IP Logged
If you don't continue fast and make it lengther mai tume kacha chaba donga get it fast 

mitu

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Posted: 24 June 2005 at 5:05am | IP Logged
vow thats nice..please continue

Samita

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Posted: 24 June 2005 at 6:15am | IP Logged
plz continue......tum jaldi karo barna mein bhi harshitha ke thara tumhe kacha chaba dungi.......WinkWink

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