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mitu

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Mean while angad comes down and yells at his mom

A: Mom how could u do this to me....

N; What did i do Angad...Your engagement is done with mishti and u are getting wed next week

A: Like hell i will.

Hearing angad swear naina is angry too....

N: Angad what has gotten in to u?Why are u behaving so carelessly...

A : I know u will never understand my love and only thing that ever mattered to u is money....I don't give a damn to ur money...So leave me alone...I am not getting married now or ever to Who ever u choose...I love Kripa and will love her for ever....Even if she doesn't acceps me now because of my stupidness, to believe you rather than my love...saying this he heads upstairs....

N: is schocked and doesn't know what to do...She turnss around and sees Mishti, damini and Prithvi standing there..near the door...and  it was obvious that they have heard every thing.....

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Posted: 28 July 2005 at 9:25pm | IP Logged

brilliant again

thanks

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Prithvi leaves from there without a word....

Damini goes to Naina...

D: So u were playing with my daughter and wanted her to use against kripa.....U are so disgusting naina...U did this only because mishti has money right....u don't care  a damn about her...just her money...its good ur son is more sensible than u and i respect him for his honesty...and as for u....i don't think we can continue our so called friendship.....which may be a farce from ur side as all this marriage thing was........So good bye...and hope not to see u ever again...

N: Damini I...

d:Naina i don't want to hear a word from u....Good bye....

Damini turns to mishti

M: Come dear lets get out of here...............

M: U go on mom, i want to talk to Angad once...Please...

Damini tells ok and leaves....

N: Mishti beta, i know i got carried away and did all tricks with Kripa, but i liked u a lot and always wanted u to see as our daughter in law....so...

M: Its enough aunty...i did not wait here to talk to u i want to talk to angad...

A : comes down and sees Mishti ....Hi Mishti....

M: Angad i want to talk to u...can u come with me....

A: OK...Lets go...

They drive and go to Coffee shop...

 

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wow, i am waiting to read more. the story is excellent 

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Posted: 28 July 2005 at 9:39pm | IP Logged
Wow, just love your fanfic. Plz cont. Smile

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exccellent again

thanks

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Posted: 28 July 2005 at 9:47pm | IP Logged

In the coffee shop...

A: I am sorry Mishti, but i can't marry u....and please don't ask me the reason...

M: I know why u don't want to tell me the reason,....Its due to ur mom and u don't want her to disrespect...right.....I understand...Prithvi told me everything...And i am sorry for both of u.....I was behaving so foolishly...I knew u loved each other first, when we were in Goa for a shoot...But i thought i love u and could not bear u with some one else....And so was rude to Kripa too...Kripa had to go through all this...I am really sorry Angad...I just want to let u know that i will always be there for u and Kripa...and when u meet her...doapologise from my side too will u....

A: Sad....Mishti i don't know whether i and mishti will ever get together....

M: Angad don't say that...I know u two will get together soon.....

A: I hope so too...thanks any ways...I need to leave now....

M: Ok Angad Bye...If u want any help do call us....

A: Hugs her and says bye and leaves...

mitu

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Posted: 28 July 2005 at 9:51pm | IP Logged

Thanks all of u....

I never wrote any fan fic before...so trying my best...Its good to know u all are liking it...Hope to improve and bring back our Kripa an Angad soonnn

See ya,....bye

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