Posted: 22 June 2005 at 10:09pm | IP Logged
inspired bt the many fan fiction writers that we have, i decided to try writing my own fan fiction. hope u guys like it!
Background: (its what happens
in kyph) Angad insults her. Naina and Dilip insult Gayathrie and
Suryabhan and throw them out of the house. Suryabhan is very upset with
Kripa and tells her that she is dead for them.
Kripa's world comes crashing down. She has no idea what to do. She
decides to go and meet Dadi hoping Dadi will help her. At the same
time, Angad is drunk and wants to meet Dadi and is driving towards her
house. Kripa is walking on the road and angad loses control of his car
and hits her. He sees her in a pool of blood, icks her up and drives
her to the hospital.
At the hospital
doctor: Mr Khanna, aap please unki koi family member ko yahan bulayiye.
Unko yeh form bharna hai, uske baad hi hum operation kar sakte hain.
angad: Main yeh form bhar deta hoon
doctor: unki family member ko hi bharna padega. Aap unki rishtedar hain toh aap ise bhar sakte hain.
angad: main...main...toh uski..pati hoon!
the doctor lets angad fill up the form and the operation is taking
place. Angad is waiting outside the operation theatre. Just then he
gets a call from Mishti.
mishti; Angad tum kahan ho? Mudje tumse abhi milne hai!
angad (irritated) : abhi nehi, hum kal milte hain!
mishti: Nehi Angad mudje tumse abhi milne hai! varna main kuch kar baitoonghi!
angad: main ab city hospital main hoon. Tumse mil nehi saaktha.
he hangs up the phone! But in 10 minutes, Mishti lands up at the hospital.
Mishti: Angad, kya hua? Tum yahan kya kar rehe ho? Sab teek to hai na?
Angad tells mishti everything!
Mishti: Accha hi hua, us us kripa ko....
Angad gives Mishti a cold but peircing look that she stop short of
completing her sentance. Just then the Doctor arrives. Before, Angad ca
ask anything ,
Doctor: Abhi main kuch nehi keh sakta hoon. Aapki PATNI ki halat abhi bhi bohut bhuri hai. We are trying our very best!
The doctor leaves.
her world seems to be crashing!!!
sorry for spelling errors in hindi! tell me if u guys like it and if i shuld continue. otherwise, i'll stop writing!