Aha! So here we are. With a different version of season 1's most interesting conflict. The break up.
There were places in this phase which I felt was not satisfactory. For instance, Manik losing his cool and forcing Nandini into accepting his apology. Well. That's Manik. 😆 He gets desperate at times. Enough to kidnap and blackmail. 😆😆
But you know what I like about your story? That Manik will pay the proper price for his actions without getting too bull-headed. That for a moment, he's going to keep aside his arrogance and ego whatever. At least, that's what I feel from the prologue. I really feel that he deserves more punches from Nandini than he actually got in the show. 😆 What say?
But whatever you've got up your sleeve, I'm game. The ending itself is promising. That Manik will need to try harder to win her back. 😆
All in all, this looks very interesting. I'd love to see how they finally bury the hatchet and gel with each other once again. Do continue soon and please do PM me 😉
Aila crazy ki purse ek story Jane kitne haat he crazu tumhare chalo koi ni tum Hume stories dekar pareshan karo or hum tumhe comments karke Wese story line pad kar lakta he ke hamare hero ne heroine ke sath kuch bure karname kiye he means intensionaly mistake ki he jiski punishment unhe mil bi rahi he par last me kisne nandhu ko bulaya or kese bulaya jisko sunkar manik ke hosh udd gaye unhe apne aas pas tare dikne lage Dear it sounds interesting update n come back soon luv u.
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