praja : eloped marriage part 14 updated - Page 3

just read all the parts in one go

interesting concept

good one

part 11 :
AT DAWN ...
PRATAP AND AJABDE LEAVE FOR D BHIL'S VILLAGE ...
pratap : ajabde aap khush toh hai na ??
ajabde : kuwar pratap ... hum iss vivaah se bahut khush hain .. lekin maa aur daata ki yaad a rahi thi ..
pratap : aur koi baat toh nahi hai na ...??
ajabde : ji nahi ...
AT MARWAR :
PHOOL'S BEHAVIOUR CHANGED EACH BY EACH PASSING DAY ..
phool : ajabde ne hume dhoka diya h ... hum kabhi b usse khush nahi rahne denge ... & breaks d mirror ...
AT CHITTOD
CHAKRI IS ENQUIRED BY UDAI SINGH
us : toh boliye chakrapani ... kya aap nahi jaante h k kuwar pratap aur ajabde kahan h ...???
chakri : hume nahi patah k voh dono kaha h ... unhone hume kuch b nahi bataya ...
us : teek h aap jaa sakte h...
us then asks his soldiers to keep an eye on chakrapani ...
BY NOON ...
PRATAP ND AJABDE HAD REACHED D VILLAGE
they both recieved a warm welcome from d villagers ...
as guru ragavendra had already informed them abt d wedding of pratap & ajabde preparations had been made accordingly ...
it was decided tat d haldi & mehendi would take place in d evng & wedding by the next day ...
pratap & ajabde were escorted to their tents seperately by d people
Edited by sudhaperumal - 7 years ago

part 12 : AFTER D HALDI ND MEHENDI CEREMONY ... pratap came to meet ajabde at her tent .. pratap : ajabde ... ajabde ... ajabde : kuwar pratap aap yahan kya kar rahe h ... ??? chale jaiye haldi ke baad var vadhu ek dusre se mil nahi sakte h ... pratap : hum mil kahan rahe h ... aap tent k andar h aur hum bahar ... hum toh sirf baat kar rahe h apse ... ajabde : kya baat karna h apko ... jo aap kal tak intezar nahi kar paaye ...??? pratap : apna haath aage kijiye .. ajabde : kyu ?? pratap : aare kijiye na .. ajabde : teek h ... lijiye kar diya humne apna haath aage . ... pratap : apke mehendi ka rang toh bohot gehra h ... kya aap iska matlab jaan thi h?? ajabde : ha hum jaante h ... humare hone wale pati humse bohot pyaar karte h ... pratap : acha aur kya jaan thi h aap??? ajabde : kya aap yahan humare mehendi k rang dekhne aye the kal tak intezaar nahi kar sakte the ...??? pratap : jee nahi kal hume aur b avashyak kaam h karne k liye ... ajabde : aur voh kya h??? hum jaan sakte h pratap : hume humare pati dharam nibhana hoga na ajabde ??? ajabde : pati dharam ??? matlab?? pratap : oh ho .. aap kuch b nahi samajthi na??? acha aap hume yeh bataye ki patni dharam kya hota h??? ajabde : patni ka dharam hota h ki voh apne pati ko khush rake ... pratap : vaise h pati ka dharam hota h ki voh apni patni ko khush rake ... har tarike se .. samaj m aaya ??? ajabde : nahi ... pratap : ajabde hume bohot neend aah rahi h aap b jaa kar vishram kijiye ... pati dharam kya hota h yeh hum apko kal samjate h ... ajabde : teek h ... pratap : vaise b aap ko kal raat neend k zarurat nahi padegi ... ajabde : kuwar pratap ...!!!! pratap : chalte h .. subh ratri ... Edited by sudhaperumal - 7 years ago

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part 13 : MARRIAGE DAY : pratap was dressed in a white kurta pajama with matching pagdi ... ajabde was dressed in red lehenga choli with silver accessories as usual pratap was 1st bought to d mandap ... after done with his rituals ... pandit had asked to bring in the bride .. and aajabde came ... pratap was dumbstruck with her beauty ... pratap while performing d rituals talked to ajabde ... pratap : ajabde apko pata h ki aap bohot sundar lag rahi h aaj ? ajabde : dhanyavaad ... pratap : arre sirf dhanyavaad aur kuch nahi ?? ajabde : nahi pandit asked who would do their ghat bandhan & kanya dhaan bhil sardar's wife came forward to do d ghat bhandan nd kanya dhaan was done by guru ragavendra it was time for d pheras ... as they completed d pheras it was time for giving d saath vachan as they completed giving their promises d pandit announced " vivaah sampan hua " they took their blessings from d elders & from guru ragavendra ... it was time for d other rituals during d ring finding ceremony pratap & ajabde found d ring together ... they were now escorted to their new home which was arranged arranged by d bhil sardar himself ... the ladies were getting ajabde ready for d suhaag raat pratap was having a few word with d bhil sardar & his guru precap : suhaag raatEdited by sudhaperumal - 7 years ago

part 14 : ajabde was waiting in the room for pratap ... she was feeling nervous ... on the other side pratap was even more nervous ... he was heading towards jis room when d bhil sardar's wife stopped him ambika : ( bhil sardar's wife ) kuwar pratap aap ne kya tofa dene ka socha h apni beendni ko ??? kuwar pratap : yeh aap kya bol rahi h maasi ??? ambika : yeh b ek rasam hota h ... pati apni patni ko suhaag raat par koi tofa deta h ... pratap : lekin humare paas toh koi tofa nahi h ... ambika : yeh lijiye aap unhe yeh de dijiye ... isme ek maang tika h ... pratap : dhanyavaad mausi ji ... ambika : ab jaldi jayiye ... apki beendni intezaar kar rahi h ... AFTER FEW MINUTES ... pratap enters his room ... pratap : ajabde ... ajabde : looks at him shyly ... pratap : sits by her side & removes her veil ... ajabde blushes ... pratap : aap bohot sundar lag rahi h ... yeh lijiye apka tofa & hands over d box ajabde : yeh maang tika toh bohot sundar h ... pratap : yeh ambika mausi ne hume diya tha ... apko tofa k roop m dene k liye ... apko pasand aaya kya ? ajabde : bohot ... pratap : acha ab hum kya kare ??? ajabde : matlab ?? pratap : aare humara phela raat h kuch toh special hona chaiye na ... ajabde : boliye kya kare hum ??? pratap : aap humse kuch chahti h toh aap humse maang sakte h .. aur hum b aapse kuch maang na chahte h ... ajabde : phele aap boliye ... pratap : nahi aap ajabde : hum apse kuch vachan chahte h ... kabi b aap apne kartavya se piche nahi hatenge ... pratap : humne apko vachan diya ... aur kuch ??? ajabde : nahi .. ab aap boliye ... pratap : hum aapse kuch kehna chahte h ... kabi b hum dusra vivaah nahi karenge ... aap h humari patni rahegi ... ajabde : lekin kuwar pratap ... pratap : lekin wekin kuch nahi ... aur ha ek aur baat hum chahte h ki aap hume pratap keh k bulaye jab b hum ekanth m ho toh ... ajabde : kya ??? yeh kya bol rahe h aap ??? pratap : vahi jo apne suna ajabde : humse nahi hoga pratap : kyu nahi hoga ??? vivaah k pehle din h aap apne pati ko nirash kar rahi h ajabde ... & walked away from d bed ajabde : aare kuwar pratap suniye toh .. pratap : kuch nahi suna h hume .. ajabde : kuwar pratap .. kuwar pratap ... acha teek h pratap ... pratap : yeh hui na baat ... ab kuch pati dharam k bare m baat kare & moved towards her seductively ... ajabde : retreating back ... kya pratap ...?? pratap : he holded her by d waist & kissed her forehead ... then cheeks & then slowly moved towards her lips ... he kissed her gently at frst that turned into a passionate one ... they broke after few minutes gasping for air .. ajabde blushed heavily & hugs pratap ... he carries her to d bed ... & makes her to lie down gently .. he continued to kiss her & removed her jewels & dupatta ... & they both consummated their marriage

wow..read all the parts in one...
awesome story line wish the cvs would have shown something like this...
continue soon..

please update the next part. would like to see how praja will convince their parents