One Last Time : An IshRa Drabble - part 2 and note on pg 6 - Page 4

nice update
very emotional

Originally posted by: -Nidoo-

Pb, I'm so happy, yet so sad at the same time.

Happy because you explored Raman, and with so much poignance ❤️ Sad to go through his state of mind 😭  We're never going to get a detailed focus on Raman's predicaments or his feelings in the show, this was such an intense read.

His world that had crumbled 7 years ago, was starting to rejoin again, before this scene actually crushed his heart and how!

He's my favorite character and it hurts me to see him butchered so much, without any explanation. Your story is an unsaid insight into his mind and heart and I can't wait to read more 😃

Thank you for writing this 🤗

Originally posted by: DikshaN

very nice os
it's very touching and I must say u made me cry
impressing writing

Originally posted by: sarunholic_arhi

brilliant piece of writing 

Loved it

Originally posted by: aru_27

nice update
very emotional

Hi PB its been long haven't talked with you hope you Remember our masti with Nikki and Gang 😆

PB you made me cry with this i totally feel Raman's pain i loved the way you portrayed the sequence unlike our cv's who always love to give importance to unnecessary character's.. Loved you focused on Raman's pain and it would have been great if both ishra talk with each other about how there life was miserable without each other during 7 years they both were at fault they don't need any third person to resolve there issues theycan solve it there own.. But alas its wishful thinking as god knows what cv's want.. But i loved this update will be waiting for next part continue soon 😊

emotional update
hope the foolish cvs of yhm comes up with something like this
waiting for next part

Hey Pb, you have to check THIS THREAD, or your PM from Monday 😆

Originally posted by: -Nidoo-

Hey Pb, you have to check THIS THREAD, or your PM from Monday 😆

Sorry for spamming your story thread, but didn't know where else to catch you 😛

brilliant piece
when are you going to update next part
waiting for that