||Bon Voyage OS Competition|| Results : P 16 - Page 6

Bol na Mahi...

A sweet story! beautifully written! Maan loves Geet! they get married! Maaneet on a bus! Maan admires his gorgeous wife! her smile makes him happy! Maan waiting 4 her 2 say ILU!

The chef's special
it was amazing
i lovd reading it

serendipity
superb one shot ...beautifully written .
maan wanted a escape from his life but in that escape he got back his life geet ❤️ beautiful .

Remember me

through thee eyes
beautiful one shot ...liked the sayeri in it . superbly written .

Dilwale Dulhaniya Le Jayenge Par Kahan?
A simple and sweet story.

Bol Na Mahi Bol Na
Sweet story.
I hope when the competition ends you will give us another part where Geet expresses herself.

Remember Me
An interesting read. The balance between present and past was nicely done. Very nicely written.

Carpie Diem
Seize the day- nice message.
A beautiful story.

Captured through the viewfinder- awesome os loved reading it dont know why really like maan in this story