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Sabse pehle toh maaf kar de yaar ...bohut bohut sorry ! These days I've become very bad when it comes to keeping promises 🤢😭 Itni saari kulhadiya Jo maar li hai pairon pe 🤢
Well mera toh chalta hi rahega
Now coming to the os prathama ..I regret not reading it before. Not a happy ending (like I usually prefer reading) but a very very well written piece of work 👏👏
The story flowed well ...I kind of liked the end. I was actually praying ke bas real waale bakwaas se shaadi ka remake na kiya ho tune where Majboori walks in with his Revenge-cum-friend after marrying her...ewww...I don't even wish to recall it ! 😡😲
The ending here was nice , kind of reminded me of barfi's climax ...but this was different since the main protagonists hadn't spent their time till old age together & yet the amount of bonding between the 2 & it was indeed well executed 😳😃
One awesomely written writeup Prathama ...do write more & next time I would be there to comment without u reminding me ! 😉😃
MARUSHKAA
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