PREJUDICE PARADISE SWARON AND KRIYANSH FF - Page 7

Originally posted by: Kiarawinget16

Nice update ...
But kindly that forceful kiss portion is not romantic it kind of come in assault so telling you that

Originally posted by: sneharay

Superb update.. 👏

Originally posted by: syndeyshine00

U updated...

Update was awesome

Tashan btw swaron 

Rude Rey

Saviour swayam

 6th dancer Identified

Continue sooon

Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Anu_TanHa

Reet u updated🤗

Coming to update it's Awesome.

I always loved the Tashan between SwaRon and the way u showing it in ur ff is just amazing.👏

I read many wrks and even in films saw Heroine doing bak bak and hero to shut her up kisses her forcefully then in background guitar drum sab bajne lagta hai... thats kind of irritating actually and it can never be justified... nothing heroism in that. 

But in ur ff u had written it but written very cleverly, u showed the anger of swayam but in this update u showed a strong girl speaking up and hadkofying 👍🏼

I really liked the way u showed Sharon here(my favourite character strong n loveable and not at all like bechari n rondulu😆 ) She knows how to speak up and tell the person "You are Wrong" And i think swayam also got this msg clear... I'm sure in future coming update you'll defo make swayam to say sorry to her for that( I knw swayam is gem)

Ye Rohit bhaisahab ki kya problem hai... pit k hi manenge kya😆

Swayam become ACS ...He got so happy that he can irritate Sharon more now😛

I'm really looking forward to ur story.

I want to read more n more ... ur my second best writer Officially now⭐️😆( sorry baz is my nmbr one fav.)

Please dear update quickly.

RDX party ...I so want to read rdx party in ur imagination as i'm loving your story, updates and your writing.

PLEASE UPDATE😳

Originally posted by: DiptiPatel9

nice pata nahi kab yeh dazzler weakling ka mamla khatam hoga.