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Ek Adhuri Kahani-Starring S/K.Prt 11 pg13

Shezzy12 Goldie

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Posted: 14 November 2006 at 1:58pm | IP Logged




Garewal Family...



Sinha Family...






Sujal - A Rich and Intelligent man....Very close to his mother and his brother...has had a very bad past life....but that story not been told yet...

Kashish - A young intelligent girl 'her fathers favourite!' a very close one to her father.. treats her younger sisters like her own....Lost her mother years and years ago but now she has brought up her sisters like her own...

Rishi - A very caring and overprotective younger brother..likes to party....

A love story................about sujal and kashish.......

Will sujal meet kashish...?............Will they fall in love....?

Please tell me whether to cont or not..

Thanx xxx

prt 1 on pg 1

prt2 on pg 2

prt3 on pg 4

prt4 on pg 5

prt5 on pg 6

prt 6 on pg 7

prt 7 on pg 8

prt 8 on pg 9

prt 9 pg 10

prt 10 pg 12

prt 11 page 13



Edited by Shezzy12 - 04 February 2007 at 1:23pm

Shezzy12 Goldie

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Posts: 1682

Posted: 14 November 2006 at 2:24pm | IP Logged
Rachu_1987 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 November 2006 at 5:08pm | IP Logged
cooool intro sis! dnt worry ul get more comments soon Tongue
tanasha1993 Goldie

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Posted: 14 November 2006 at 7:46pm | IP Logged
nice ff do cont soon Wink
MysticRiver IF-Addictz

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Posted: 14 November 2006 at 8:24pm | IP Logged
very nice intro...i liked the intro.... Clap   
Clap Clap Clap ab please continue can't wait to read the story.... Big smile
golu_1677 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 November 2006 at 10:39pm | IP Logged
pls pls cont. nice intro. will b eagerly waiting for the 1st part
group_1223 Goldie

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Posted: 15 November 2006 at 12:42am | IP Logged
it sounds awesome...i m sure it willb marvellous so do continue 4 sure...will b lookin fwd 2 it...
Shezzy12 Goldie

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Posts: 1682

Posted: 15 November 2006 at 2:09pm | IP Logged

Part One.....

Veena - Rishi.!!!

Rishi - Ji mama....

Veena - yeh nashta karlo.

Veena passed rishi paratha.

Veena - Rishi sujal kahaan hai.?

Rishi - woh tou office jah chokai hain.

Veena - Kya itne jaaldi...

Rishi - haan..mama hes still upset he cant forget it mama its been 5 years now..Big B usko kyun nahiin bhool saktai

veena - useh tou koi nahiin bhoolsakta...

Veena walked over to a photo..

Veena - Main useh kaise bhool sakti hoon main tou uski ma thi nah..aur sujal tou.....

Tears filled veena's eyes.

Rishi - Mama...Please..

Rishi wiped her tears and hugged veena..


Papa*kashish's dad* - Kashish bheta......!!

Girl ran down the stairs....

Wearing a beautiful red saree...

With matching earrings and matching churiyaan..

show girls eyes....

and her lips...*smiled*

Girl = Kashish


Kashish - ji papa....

papa - tum kahaan jahre hoo..?

Kashish - Aaj job interview hain

Papa - oh acha acha...good luck bheta

Kashish - Thank you papa.!

Kashish put the food on the breakfast table..

Kashish - Kanan..!! Mauli...Charu....Mehak!!

Kanan and Mehak came down.

Kashish - Mauli aur charu kahan hain

Mauli - di woh tho duno

Hears noises from the bedroom.

Charu - Uff hoo...let me wear this nah..

Mauli - Nahiin im wearing it today.

Kashish - Uff hoo tum duno bhi na! Yeh lou Charu tum yeh phenloh.

Charu - Thanks di.

Kashish - Your welcome. aab tum duno jaaldi se neechay ajoh.

They all sat at the breakfast table and ate.


A man sitting at his desk...

His back turned....

A man wearing a long black coat.. sat on the chair....

He looked at a photo..

tears dropped on the photo..

Suddenly the door opened..

The photo fell and shattered ........

The Guy looked at the door in anger.....

Kashish was standing she stared....

Kashish - Sorry...

Guy - Dont you know that your supposed to knock before you enter a room.

Kashish - I'm sorry woh um receptionist nai kaha tha kai aap mera intizaar karai hain

Guy - acha.....

He looked at the photo..

Kashish - shall i help you..

Kashish picked up the pieces....

Kashish - Yeh koun hai.?

guy - none of your business

He snatched the pieces of Kashish.

Guy - name is Sujal Garewal.

Kashish - Hi my name is Kashish Sinha

Sujal - have a seat...

Sujal interviewed kashish.

Sujal - Congrats you got the job.

Kashish - Oh My God thank you.

Sujal gave a faint smile.

Kashish left...

Sujal looked back at the photo.....

Who is it in the photo..?

Who is that person to are they related..?

Please wait for part two..


please reply..


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